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Fantasy Wolf?(edited) by wenn

Artist wenn [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 16 minutes
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Fantasy Wolf?(edited)

Postby wenn » Mon Nov 14, 2011 4:23 pm

I started with the tail and fell in love with it then I just continued it and finished the body. It's still a sketch, but I still need to color it in and make the lines better. I'm asking for some heavy critisism (can't spell) about the anatomy and basically anything you find wrong with the draw so I can fix it, thank you.

Edit: okay I made some changes would do you think still needs improvement?
Last edited by wenn on Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Fantasy Wolf?

Postby Susiron » Mon Nov 14, 2011 5:00 pm

I really like the pose! : D
But I do see some anatomy errors here and there. My wrist hurts, so I won't type too much, but--

As far as wing anatomy goes, just read this and it should help a BILLION times over:
http://theantimonyelement.deviantart.co ... -150844565

And for wolf's anatomy, the head area look very good, but the legs could do with some adjustments. x)
http://theantimonyelement.deviantart.co ... -150844565
The head/beck should also be large to compensate for the large limbs/body.

The tail is also a bit ridiculously long, but tails tend to fall under the lines of personal preference. x)

Keep practicing, you have a great start!
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Re: Fantasy Wolf?(edited)

Postby wenn » Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:26 pm

Okay I changed it, hopefully it looks a little bit better, tell me what else I need to fix, the first suggestions were a lot of help.
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