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Redlining by Alaska.

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Artist Alaska. [gallery]
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Redlining

Postby Alaska. » Fri Nov 11, 2011 1:38 pm

I have a few tips for you:

The muzzle is longer.

Don't make your drawing on the first layer, always make it on the second layer so you can erase.

Don't overuse the smoothing tool, it doesn't look so good.

The neck is very fluffy.

Be sure to add muscles in the face and body, to get the correct anatomy, you can look at pictures of wolves.

When you look at a dog's face the nose isn't just a triangle, it has little upside down tear drop shaped nostrils.

And believe it or not, wolves have eyebrows, but they are just little bumps above the eye.

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I can't see past my own nose,
I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

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Re: Redlining

Postby wolves+horses » Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:42 am

Alright... hmm... Thanks! Yeah, I should probably start focusing on the details more. (And no offense, but the weird thing is; I didn't use the smoothing tool at all... :? Weird...)
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Re: Redlining

Postby Alaska. » Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:43 am

Oh, sorry

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I can't see past my own nose,
I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

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Re: Redlining

Postby wolves+horses » Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:45 am

No, no, it's totally OK! :)
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