JT, My life (cs pet journal)

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[proud.little.wolf]

Great, but maybe check your grammer?
lil c:

What do you mean?

Just a hint of advice from the "goddess who wrote SJ." XD

When a different character is speaking, make sure to start a new line/paragraph.

For example: (I'll use characters from my pet journal.)

"No, you can't go back!" I (Lux) said, grabbing Derek's wrist.
"I'm sorry, Lux, but I have to do this," he replied, his eyes dark and sullen with the knowledge of what he had to do.

See how I spaced it out? ^_^

That's about it for my constructive criticism. And make sure grammar is correct and words are spelled correctly. Use a Spellchecker if needed.
OR you can write the journal entry in MS Word first and then paste it into a post.

~ Xela

[xxazul63xx]

Oh ok, I'll try that next time. (and by the way, I love SJ!)

[xxazul63xx]

Hi JT

So this is what happened:
I was laying in bed, thinking, when I realized something. Dan was right all along about Jake! I needed to go apologize for not believing him! So I went to his house and knocked on the door, a little pup opened the door.
"Who are you?" She asked in a sweet baby-ish voice, she looked about three years old.
"I'm Dan's friend: Storm" I say.
She grins at me (Oh my gosh JT, She is soooooooooooooooo cute!) "Oh........... okay! I'm Caroline!"
I smile back "Nice to meet you Caroline, Is Dan home?"
She turns around and yells "DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNN! Are you home!?!?!?!?!?!?"
We both listen for a bit and are answered by silence.
"I guess not!" she yips and skips away.
Well, I still have a good guess on where Dan is, don't worry JT. Hope isn't lost!
Anyway so down this path in the forest somewhere between Dan's house and my house. I reached a meadow with a river crossing through and a lone tree. I saw Dan sitting on the bank. I walked silently up to the lone tree and leaned against its trunk.
"I knew you would be here............." I commented quietly.
He perked his ears and looked over his shoulder."Uh, hi Storm..........."
I went and sat next to him,
He twirled a blade of grass around in his paws. "Your probably here to tell me that Jake is a good guy and would never cheat on you.........." he murmured.
"No. I came here to apologize......."
He looked up in surprise "Apologize? for what?"
"I didn't listen to you when you told me the truth about Jake." I explained what happened at school.
He laughed in the end. "So you dumped him, instead of him dumping you?"
"Yup!" I boasted, pointing my nose in the air proudly.
We both started laughing again and then I let out a deep breath "So, do you forgive me?"
He stood up and thought for a moment. "Maybe................. If you can catch me!" Then he ran off.
"Hey!" I scrambled to my feet and began chasing him. He's really fast! But I have more stamina, so he got tired really quick and I caught up. But still we ran for a long time, so we were both breathing heavily. Dan flopped onto the grass, and I sat down next to him.
"Okay, I forgive you.........." He breathed
"Finally!" I said, grinning. Then I looked at my watch, "Gotta go, Bye Dan. Remember Movie night at Mary's house tomorrow!"
He smiled his cute smile "I didn't forget, see ya then" He waved and went in the direction of his house.
I went to my house ~@#>>>"}{}{}{} Uh.... sorry JT............ weird arm spaz
Anyhoo I went to my house and............... Wait! Rewind......... Did I say Dan's smile was cute? I did.................. maybe I do have..... a small........ crush........
Oh golly-gosh..........
This is confusing............ We are just friends, right? right? Oh whats the use..... your just a book.
Bye JT
{}{$%%$#$%&*%$ (Another weird arm spaz! )

[proud.little.wolf]

Very good! I look forward to reading more!

[xxazul63xx]

Yay!

[xxazul63xx]

Good day, JT the 1st
Just kidding!
Watsup JT!
m
Ok So today is Saturday and also Movie night! I'll tell you what happened:
So Shade and I went to Mary's house pretty early, Carly and Streak were already there. There were a bunch of hellos, and then everyone sat on a beanbag or on the blanket-covered floor.
"Where's the Popcorn?" Asked Shade looking around.
"I'll get it!" Yipped Mary running off to the kitchen
"So I heard you dumped Jake!" Said Carly
I threw a pillow at her "Ya I did, he's a jerk"
"I think he's going out with a girl from Delanie's crew" Added Streak
(Delanie is a really mean girl who feeds off of me and my friends misery)
"Really? I said
"Yup, someone named Jackie, I think" commented Mary, who just came in the room with a bowl full of popcorn.
"Ooh popcorn!" Shade practically jumped on Mary to get the popcorn.
Just then someone knocked on the door, Mary rushed to get it. I followed closely behind, wanting to see who it was.
She opened the door, Max and Dan were standing there.
"About time!" I called out
"Hey don't blame me! Max takes forever to choose candy!" complained Dan, elbowing Max
"So, What did ya bring?" asked Streak, who had just walked over.
"Lollipops, reese's, kit-kats, and sour patch dogs." Max mumbled.
I looked at him and saw he had a lollipop in his mouth.
So we all sat down around the GIANT flat-screen TV. Mary put in the movie and turned off the lights. I leaned back to watch, we were watching Dog Wars.I was sitting right next to the popcorn bowl so I always had to pass it to the others. When I reached to grab a pawful of popcorn I felt my paw touch someone else's. I looked up it was Dan's paw, I blushed and drew back my paw. He looked uncomfortable, He rubbed the back of his head. I pointed at the screen and turned to watch. Okay now I'm writing you as I watch the movie, wait i need to go to the bathroom. I lean over to Mary and say "I'll be right back, going to the Bathroom"
"Okay but use the upstairs one, the downstairs one is clogged." she whispers
"okay" I'm running up the stairs as I write in you! Whoop! Whoop!
I'm done going back down the stai- ^%%#&%*$^$%%&%&%^&*%

Um............... Hi................ whats your name? JT? oh okay........... Um............ This is Carly,(I cant believe I'm talking to a book) I'm Storm's friend.(hi storm!) Um... I'm writing in you because Storm fell down the stairs and got knocked out. We called 911 and she's at the hospital. I'll return you to her tomorrow. I hope she's ok.......

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