[NoLongerOnCS]

heres the first drawing ive ever done without lines, i didnt have a reference plz comment on it i drew it with a laptop pad thiungy i told my mom i want a tablet for christmas and i need critique on how to make it better. please like and do u think its close to intermediate?

[SingTheRain]

I think this is really good! The perspective is just about spot on!

However, I would change somethings (I hope you don't mind!)
-Add an eye
-Distinguish between the two front legs. At the moment, it just looks like one.
-The leg in the very back looks a little choppy. I'd even/smooth it out nad make the back legs a bit longer.

Other than that, I love it! Especially the colors.

[NoLongerOnCS]

thanks ill work on that =D

[NoLongerOnCS]

=P i added an eye and attempted to smooth out the back legs and can you tell theres two legs in front now

[NoLongerOnCS]

bump

[NoLongerOnCS]

bump

[SingTheRain]

Yeah that looks better. Good job!!

[NoLongerOnCS]

thanks =P any other tips?