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by Demilune » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:04 pm
This is adorable...my only critique is that I find the face a tad mousey. In the future try not making the head so "boxey"...I'm horrible at explaining things but I've found
THIS and
THIS to be VERY helpful whenever I draw kitties. Their wonderfully detailed guides. 83
Other than the head, the anatomy is pretty good! The tail's a tad long but it's cartoony anyways so that's not really a huge deal...plus I've seen some cats with really long tails before. o-o
I really like it though, your art has such an adorable style to it <3
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by Susiron » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:16 pm
Moggy wrote:This is adorable...my only critique is that I find the face a tad mousey. In the future try not making the head so "boxey"...I'm horrible at explaining things but I've found
THIS and
THIS to be VERY helpful whenever I draw kitties. Their wonderfully detailed guides. 83
Other than the head, the anatomy is pretty good! The tail's a tad long but it's cartoony anyways so that's not really a huge deal...plus I've seen some cats with really long tails before. o-o
I really like it though, your art has such an adorable style to it <3
My cats have ALWAYS looked mousy in the face, I swear. xD
Even my lions, sometimes, lol. I dunno if it's the eyes or the nose, but there's some strange combination in that that screams mouse. xP
As for the tail, I love long tails! * u *
Thank you! C: < 3
And thank you for the critique!
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by Demilune » Fri Nov 11, 2011 2:37 am
Susiron wrote:Moggy wrote:This is adorable...my only critique is that I find the face a tad mousey. In the future try not making the head so "boxey"...I'm horrible at explaining things but I've found
THIS and
THIS to be VERY helpful whenever I draw kitties. Their wonderfully detailed guides. 83
Other than the head, the anatomy is pretty good! The tail's a tad long but it's cartoony anyways so that's not really a huge deal...plus I've seen some cats with really long tails before. o-o
I really like it though, your art has such an adorable style to it <3
My cats have ALWAYS looked mousy in the face, I swear. xD
Even my lions, sometimes, lol. I dunno if it's the eyes or the nose, but there's some strange combination in that that screams mouse. xP
As for the tail, I love long tails! * u *
Thank you! C: < 3
And thank you for the critique!
Well lions heads are a different ball came all together, their heads are boxes lol. I struggle with them all the time I always make them look to "domestic cat-like". ID
And no problem! Critiques can always be helpful as long as their informative. And yes, long tails FTW. I personally love long P00FY tails like a snowleopard. * u * <3
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