Number of the pup:6
Name: Noxes Comero
Short Story:As I staired over the cliff a feeling of ilusion was cast over me. An invisable cloak that didn't seam too troubling just yet. The wind blew over the blue grass and the sky dawned a brisk morning color,even if it's shade itself was dark. My fur played with the wind as I staired,just staired. The land and it's beaty. It was untouched over this ledge. This towering peak. No one could feel the sence of the battles my ansestors had faught. Not up on this peak. The ledge of our slightly red tinted montain top. You could breath the safe air,and see the trees underneath our paws,towering over no one,up here,it felt protected. A lie,but the aura it wasn't a lie,the cold chilling aura of the battles never dimmed. The noises of battle,could you maybe here them if with concentraition? Tch...I hate this sometimes. Our mountain homes,it's so lovely. But,it'll never be a safe haven,with...thouse creatures. The Kronadors. Hideose creatures. I prapose,and everyone will agree on that word. With there disturbing eyes,horns and canines not being the worst of it. There size ranges so much better then ours. For a trainee did I know too much? Yes,I guess so. Though I am a quick learner,and no starter. Not a five month old pup,i'm older. I'm ready,I will show how I can take my own weight into account.
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Is it wierd how i've learned so much? I was usually the quick learner in my family,my siblings would be bundling to fallow. It seamed as there little paws grew mine were already past that stage. "Take it slow,it's better to see the world before it's gone." That quote may not have gotten me too far but it always seamed to be in my mind. Maybe because I never got it. Why would the world disapear? Was there something I wasn't fermilear with? All in all it just made me quicken my pace untill I am there,staring at the peace,the mountan top wear no one disturbes. No one will seek for missery. Atleast it feels so much like that. It's stupid to think this world will be gone just because I go faster then the others. And I know that. Knew that. I thought that. Not anymore. "Mama!" The beauitfull she wolf that was my mother strode over to me and smiled her ever gentle smile. But don't doubt her,she is brutal as much as she is elagent and suave. "Yes dear." Her voice was sweet but I didn't stay on it for to long. "Can I go into the forest yet?" My imatience grew with each month of waiting. I was still a tranee and yet I was so anxiose to go into that dagerouse forest and fetch myself amazing armor. "Noxes it's dangerouse out there. Your only a small pup." I huffed. "Mama! I'm already doing better then the others,why can't I go?" She chuckled and shook her head fur waving softly. I wanted to go so badly. The fiery feeling inside me filled with determination ran through my blood to my head sending whispering voices into my mind. 'Go on ,do it alone,be your own. Show them. Prove it.'...prove it. Prove that I was ready? Hmph,they should have sean I could do this. I didn't need to slow down to see the world beauty,I was fine going faster,doing better and passing more,the every one else. But I wasn't leaving,the truth is that stupid forest scared me so badly.
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"Is it determination? Why stop wear we stand, when were at the top? Go outside the cave, fly to the heavens. But don't lose yourself. In the green." Don't be greedy. I am better so I deserve more. I was taught to never beleive that. My father a noble warrior,standing tall and proud,muscular shoulders casting a shadow onto his paws. He told me everyone deserved a chance. And some a secound chance. He taught me to be kind and noble,yet some how brutal,and that mattered to me,because when the moon shined in an ever lumanesent way,and deep blue grass sarounded me in the darkness of fruitfull trees nothing else could protect me from thouse bright eyes and lovely little killing instincts our enemys the Kronador persieved,except the skills my father has brought me. He showed me everything I needed to know,and I was speacle,I got to learn more from him then my siblings. I still want my skill to be as high as they can get,but why stop there? Though greed is a putrid thing. What really judges us,and makes us better then anyone else? "Father teach me more." I was panting,body haunched,sweat trickling through my fur and extreamly tired. Augh! "That's enought for now Noxes." His voice was firm but warm. I knew I shouldn't have kept on though I did. "Please father!" I took a big breath and bounced infront of him as my siblings did per usual when they wanted something. Being all giddy and bouncy,though we were soon passing that age. "pleeeeeease!" I made my chaws clench maw circling out more as I whined. With a sigh he smirked. "Noxes you never give up. Do you?" I shook my head "No!.Of course not father!" Soft grin grazing my maw now I got ready to pounce. "Legs more crouched,back legs a bit straighter Noxes." With a swift nod his orders were fallowed and soon we were walking in a circle,across from each other. Stairing my father straight,I xould see his grey eyes sparkling with something,an emotion I couldn't see just yet. "Now remember-" I huffed cutting him off. "-Keep close with the eyes but don't let them look you right in the eyes,or they'll know were your aiming." My father took a moment before letting the now trembling silence come over him. I should really learn to shut up sometimes,I thought to myself in a scolding sort of way before baring my canines and getting back to usual. Father had already made his way closer wile I was distracted. Take the oppertunity. Well he was taking it pretty nicely. I leaned even closer to the grass,catching the unmarkable scent of morning on that grass on my snout. Were mostly shrouded in darkness,morning is such a sweet thing to sence. To smell,to see,to hear and to taste. It's such a perfect thing to come across in Isket. The perfect land,the dawning beuaty and the way we can all get along. My father pounced rolling me onto my back. "Noxes you need to concentriate." Letting me up he grimanced. A frown grazed my muzzle. "Yes father." And with that we started walking in a soft silence though we bouth smiled weakly,as if sencing that we were thinking of the same thing,the sad fate of Isket. How it could never be...perfect.
"Lie for the better." Hah..."Noxes!" My brother chidded towards me and I came tumbling over,ashamed with of many times I had tripped over in exitment. "Yes." I pressed. Mother had pushed me to play with the others more. And so why not? "Were going near the forest wanna come?" I couldn't get my mind clear as he asked the question but as the lustly words grazed my ears I smiled. "Sure!" Maybe this was my chance. If I could sneak into the forest I could show them,that I am brave enough,good enough. That I don't need to grow anymore so I can get my armor. That they shouldn't have doubted me! An unimaginable sort of happiness washed over me. "Lets go!" He grinned over at me and started to fallow. But before I could enjoy the soft blue grass tuffling my paws gently and the soft cool shade of the Isket trees mother called to us. "Wait you two." The wind played with my fur as I turned my head,squinting to see through my endless dancing dark fur I sighed. "Yes mother?" I was urging. The others were probably already there,and I didn't need them to come back and then we all wouldn't go for some stupid reason,cause I doubt we'll go there if they all come back. "Becarfull now. Tell your brother and sisters that."Alright!" We bouth called back over our shoulders. We had bouth started to run at the sign of dismissal,and I couldn't help feeling a bit of guilt for it. Somehow this was turning out to be a guilty plesure. To go so near a forest. When my parents would worry so badly. Maybe they won't know,maybe i'll be back in time...that maybe trick isn't working as it always does,but as I fallow my brother over the chilling path close to the forest,strong lush green trees popping up and protective gray caves dissapearing almost compealtly,I felt a sence of adventure wash over me. Maybe. Just maybe,this would go right.
"See things from bouth persepctives,good and bad up and down." Everyone oppinion is different,what you see and what you believe. I knew that but...it took a little persuasion to be able to trully see it,a chalenge. We were nearing the forest when the others came in towards us. "Hey!" my other brother chidded and the others echoed him,in there own little ways. For a moment the sweet sunny air was filled with soft voices,each different and speacle. Thank God the sun was still out,or the forest wouldn't be an option. Mother would have turned it down,quiet quickly actually. Though with the sun's giddy flitting she let us go. The air,breathing it in,it felt so...undeiscribable,free and lush as the blue grass and plants,so protected like the darkness,that usually wraps around us and so happy as the morning itself. As we all pad closer to the bundle of rocks near the forest intence the shadows grow wich each passing stone,then finally were near the looming shade of the trees,shacking slightly with the winds force. Now how was I sapposed to sneak away from my siblings? This wouldn't be easy,would it? But like father says,I never give up. And as I pondered one of my sisters pounced. "Woah!" She giggled softly. "Come on Noxes." Alright. I should atleast play a little with them. "Fine." I pushed on her shoulders sending us rolling over to the others,untill we were all a bundle of tired laughing pups,sprawled on the grass,trying to regain ourselves. I guess playing with them isn't all that bad. Though we all do have our differences. I grinned wildly over at them as I stumbled to sit up. "Come on guys!" With swift legs I hopped up onto a soft gray,with a hint or red,rock,and down,I staired at them bravely. They cocked there heads before giving me the same kind of wild grin. "Let's explore!" I was more fun then I ever thought it would be,to toddle around and be at the same level as them.
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"Fear in the hands of unkown protection and yet have no fear when your enemy is protection known."
I never got that. What? The quote itself seams to make no sence nevermind the meaning...Be scared of protection that is unkown,but as your enemy becomes protection that you know have no fear. We were chasing one another and practising our battle moves when I finally got my chance to sneak over. Closer to the forest. It was slowly getting darker and so I hid in the cool shadows of rocks and trees untill I was finally in the shealter of dep the forest. Now...wear to go? I guess it's just straight. Wasn't something like straight and never look back? With a quick hefty sigh I started on my way. A quick rustle from behind me sent me jolting foreward hurridly. Don't look back,don't look back,don't look back! "Noxes." A voice seamed to drion over the tree tops. Now,now I was just losing my mind. Just relax. With another sigh to close to the other one this one tiring and drained I started walking gently through the path,not stairing back once. If I staired back,what would this be for? Though I was just eight months,that's close enough. Close enough,though if so I still needed to become an apprentice. What was I getting myself into?Another rustle sent me jumping as high as the trees. I was panting,body quivering,heart quick as I tried to regain myself once again. Though slowly I closed my eyes listening to the soft lull of the wind as it brushed against my fur cooly and made the deep blue grass wave. It sent a feeling of ectasy over me,up my spine untill I was shivering,body tense and relaxed all at the same time. "Hello?" I gulped. Don't turn your head back. I didn't have to. As a creature near my age made it's way from the underbrush to infront of me,my quivering body dulling slightly. Then a soft crunching and my blood rose suddenly. It was it's feet moving,hitting against the green blue leaves on the reddish rum ground. My mouth opened but nothing came out. He,it was a male,he was looking just a bit older then me,still bigger and much to my suprise only a bit less confused as I. His eyes,dim but real,showed soft flecks of fear against the bright green. It shined,what you mite call a neon color,his eyes. Deep and watchfull,inspite of itself. Curiosity was a big thing of course. Again I opened my mouth,saliva tenderising my throut just slightly "he-hello." Voice dry and so hourse it embarest me. My snout brought itself slightly higher as I staired him straight in the peepers,my own green eyes,speckled with woven secrets wavering for a moment of firey fear. I knew had the same sight in my eyes,the same look. Of fire dancing in the air. It's flames faulter then lifting. Not knowing how high in a place I really was,or how close to the ledge I had my body,when I could have fallen,or flown,maybe just a soft skip,who knew how low this ledge of the mind was. Metaphoricaly speaking,I was on a ledge. And he was on one too. Bouth not sure how to react to one anothers company. And the air cooled,it chilled my body and dampered the aura to a sullen peak.
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Not gunna be able to finish but a little bit of the plot: She goes deeper into the woods,is found by a Kronador,who she thinks will harm her,they some how don't,someone comes to save her,attacks the 'enemy' and well then she stops them...and well~ I know...terrible explanation. But I will finish it and make it better{cause it will be better then this description sounds} if I get her.
"It's not always good to trick your mind into perfection."
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Havn't you ever herd? "no one apprecaites what they
have,yet only go after what they
want."
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"Sometimes it's better to know less." When I understood this...it seamed to late. Was it always this way? It was hard to belive you realised this when not too late.
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Art:
http://i1017.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... 0934PM.jpg Lirre gave it to me. She said she's dropping out for #6 and if you don't belive me,ask her. Thank you Lies -cuddles-
Heres a sketch of the armor:
viewtopic.php?f=30&t=872477http://i1017.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... 0923PM.jpg Another sketch,i'm thinking of mixing them a little. Cause Lirres one is cute though I think I can fit it more into her personality if i get her,armor that really fits.
Say three things about the WoI:There land usually has more night then day
Kronadors will not leave the WoI in peace
They have three varietys of tails and three of ears
Theme song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=z49EqVmNdK4This is MY idea: In my eyes there are not specks,but the happenings of my life,like a shodw of what i wish to have never sean
Needs more action as it is more thought process
There is a lot of description there, but you need more of the actual character, rather than the background. The character is the one you're going for after all, eh c: Though you have got some opinions and ideas in there c;
`~WIP`~