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Postby Reb » Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:57 am

My comments:

The face looked really well done, and same with the backline. I just felt that the legs needed a little tweaking. Such as, the indent on the "elbow" of the cat, looked really pushed in. Also, the cat itself looked relatively skinny, when the legs looked kind of thick and out of place. I think making them a bit skinner would make the cat look more realistic. Also, the fur looked a little choppy, so maybe if you keep it a little more consistant, it would turn out looking really good.

Sorry for so much "tweaking" but I hope I helped a little. C:
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Postby N/A » Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:05 am

Yeah, I know those legs (especially the back ones) looked really thick. Thanks for the tips! :3
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Postby P!nky » Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:13 am

Awesome! I wish I could draw cats like that
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Postby Reb » Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:52 am

The Doctor. wrote:
Yeah, I know those legs (especially the back ones) looked really thick. Thanks for the tips! :3


Haha, yeah. So maybe if you draw them normally, and think they're thick, just cut them down until you think they look right c:

And, thanks Donut c: But I didn't draw the whole thing. "The Doctor." just let me redline it ^^
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