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this is my third oekaki, i'm not sure if this is worthy of intermediate though.. i can't do backgrounds, so yeah. but is the horse alright? crits and comments very much appreciated! i'm still learning!
used a mouse, and you can take about 1/2h off the timer

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that is so intermediate worthy

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that is so intermediate worthy

thank you!(:

[angel23456]

I like it, but I don't think it's Intermediate, sorry. ^^'

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I like it, but I don't think it's Intermediate, sorry. ^^'

it's okay, anything i can do to improve it?

[The Real Slim Shady]

The horse is really nice, but add a bit more shading and highlights. The background needs a lot of work, like a sky and some clouds. The horses eyes could be bigger, and a bit lower on the head and maybe make them stand out by making it a lighter colour if it's a dark horse, and a darker colour if it's a light coloured horse. Other then that, I think this is very nice, and I can't believe it's only your third oekaki !
Anyways, thanks.
Decoby

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The horse is really nice, but add a bit more shading and highlights. The background needs a lot of work, like a sky and some clouds. The horses eyes could be bigger, and a bit lower on the head and maybe make them stand out by making it a lighter colour if it's a dark horse, and a darker colour if it's a light coloured horse. Other then that, I think this is very nice, and I can't believe it's only your third oekaki !
Anyways, thanks.
Decoby

okay, thanks for the advice! i'll try to edit it now. though i don't really know how to do the shadings or highlights, since i don't take any lessons. it was all kinda random

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edited

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I believe this is intact very worthy of being here.

[BayloneRose]

this is good for a 3rd oekaki, but not intermediate
the anatomy is off and the backround is pretty bad
keep trying though, i see potential