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Wolf practice[need redline] by kavlri

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Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby kavlri » Mon Oct 17, 2011 9:06 pm

I think I need a lot more practice on wolf anatomy, it looks really bad right now. I think need some experience wolf artist to redline this for me.
If you wanna ask, the blue lines are the basic shapes I draw before I 'sketch'. I have to put the water mark on because I don't want anyone to steal this.

Please comment critique and redline :3

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Re: Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby kavlri » Tue Oct 18, 2011 8:25 pm

Anyone? I need some redline :(
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Re: Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby Kurloz Makara » Wed Oct 19, 2011 4:39 am

its really good you dont need redliners but i will
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Re: Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby LilyFlower11 » Wed Oct 19, 2011 5:19 am

i would red line, but it is better than my drawings :)
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Re: Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby kavlri » Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:31 pm

LilyFlower11 wrote:i would red line, but it is better than my drawings :)

wolfy778 wrote:its really good you dont need redliners but i will

Both of you were added. Thanks :3
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Re: Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby Novie Kenari » Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:17 am

wow, nice anatomy! love how you did the paws
the only thing id give a tip on is trying to re-angle your nose, its a bit off ^^
(or could i red line?)
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Re: Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby kavlri » Thu Oct 20, 2011 2:38 pm

Distant Planet wrote:wow, nice anatomy! love how you did the paws
the only thing id give a tip on is trying to re-angle your nose, its a bit off ^^
(or could i red line?)

Yes, sure. *added* I aggree with you with the nose(and the face), it's a bit off. :lol:
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Re: Wolf practice[need redline]

Postby moonland » Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:53 am

i just think the neck is a litle bit longer than it should be, asides i don't think you need that much help with wolf anatomy. you are better than me ^^'

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