The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!!!

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The characters of my book are awesome, are they not? But which of them is awesomer?

Amy
10
26%
Jenette
15
38%
Mom
1
3%
Sorrow
1
3%
Flower
1
3%
Indah
4
10%
Anger
0
No votes
Jessy
1
3%
Agent Cornelia
1
3%
Misty
5
13%
 
Total votes : 39

The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Oct 31, 2011 9:57 am

NOTE: I am no longer writing the TIAJNAD series. Instead, my two successors are. For more information, click here.

First of all, I have permission from Tess/the staff to have published TIAJNAD! They messaged me saying that they "had no problem with it". Still don't believe me? Look:
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See? I DIDN'T STEAL.

If you want to read the 1st book, click here. And if you want to read the 2nd book, click here. If you want to read the 3rd book, click here.
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Without further to do, the fourth book of TIAJNAD (this is a journal not a diary)!



I walked with Jenette in the hallway of HQ.
Um... Jenette?
Ya?
I... um.... I gotta tell you something...
What is it?
Jenette and I had stopped walking.
Well... um... you see.... you know the pearl?
The magic pearl that we could never find and we just assumed that it had been burried deep underground?
Ya, that one. Well, um.... let's just say that it HADN'T been burried deep underground.
Amy, what are you talking about? What's going on?
Jenette stared at me.
SUZI HAD THE PEARL ALL ALONG!
Jenette gasped, and then looked angry.
And HOW do you know this?!
Well... um... you see, when she tried to eat me and stuff and I was about to escape from her mouth, I saw one of her teeth shining and I realized that she had the pearl all along and didn't even realize it. The pearl was one of her teeth. But, I knocked out that tooth. I grabbed her tooth, the pearl, when I hopped out of her mouth. And... well....... I have it right here.
I handed Jenette the pearl. She looked surprised and shocked, but took the pearl.
I'll put this somewhere where NO ONE can get it.
Jenette walked away. I suddenly heard my name being called.
Amy and Jenette, please report to the office
I'd never been called through the speaker before! I went to the office, and Jenette followed me. I gasped when I saw who was waiting for us.
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby katomorakwarrior » Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:03 am

Then what happened? :o
I'm first to stalk. :D
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Lunala » Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:05 am

EEK! Yay new book!!!!!
Oh my waffles Amy you sneaky little dog. >:) Great job!
Lol, sorry I am just excited for new book.. :)
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:11 am

Sysshyria wrote:Then what happened? :o
I'm first to stalk. :D

lol, you'll have to see! I'll prob write more tomorrow, but it might be Tuesday since tomorrow's Halloween. I've gotta carve a pumpkin soon (I'm thinking of putting bats on it, and then writing my name below the bats on my pumpkin.) I'll promise to write more soon, though!
Doglover141 wrote:EEK! Yay new book!!!!!
Oh my waffles Amy you sneaky little dog. >:) Great job!
Lol, sorry I am just excited for new book.. :)

lol, waffles! And yes, she is very sneaky!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby happy-thump » Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:13 am

Yes! More story!!!
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:16 am

happy-thump wrote:Yes! More story!!!

lol, yes! New story!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Ellies » Mon Oct 31, 2011 12:13 pm

I'm here if your ever stuck with your writing :)
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Postby Zookrates » Mon Oct 31, 2011 5:28 pm

Smart little Amy xD
Keep writing :'D !
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:14 pm

Well, I kind of was planning to write a story but so happens I saw this book and I straight away recognized the title and they showed '' FOURTH BOOK'' That's why I came here and read but you know the speaking maybe you could make it Darker as I can't really see it, you could use Blue or Dark blue.
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby proud.little.wolf » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:44 am

Woo! Good start!
Just try not to write in that crazy neon yellow/green colour. I had to highlight it just to see it. >.<

I look forward to reading more! :)
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