[Official] Tracker Dog Fanclub.

[Maddyoll]

Maybe some crit on these? I would appriciate it ♥

For contest {Not quite done yet xD}

I think I'm done, for tracker #76 (I guess I'm going for both? xD Eather one could be my first tracker..♥)

[Desmond]

Anyone not going for 77 willing to give me some crit on my form so far?
viewtopic.php?f=58&t=788955&start=280#p21282107
I have a few more ideas to put in, but I need to know how well I've done so far. c:

Got sent to the bottom of a page. >.>;; Help?

... Help? :s

[Nyxeva]

-3B-, How about some critique for critique?
Your form looks really good so far, but there was one thing that confused me a bit at first. Maybe put a note in the beginning about the use of "ze, zir etc" to explain what they mean? Other than that, I couldn't really find anything wrong with it. The story is interesting, and I love the little pictures you've done of...it.

[Desmond]

-3B-, How about some critique for critique?
Your form looks really good so far, but there was one thing that confused me a bit at first. Maybe put a note in the beginning about the use of "ze, zir etc" to explain what they mean? Other than that, I couldn't really find anything wrong with it. The story is interesting, and I love the little pictures you've done of...it.

xD Alright, thank you! I had a list of pronouns put up already, but I'll make it more clear and higher up in the form. c:

I really like how thorough you are in your form; there are some things that I'd never even thought of that would be important for the character, such as care and how his attributes differ from those of a regular Tracker. The only thing that I would really change is that I don't quite get the hyperactive feel to him just yet - yes, he's distracted and playful, but that's all I get so far, in terms of that part of his personality.

[Papyrsatyr]

This isn't much to say here but I absolutely love that ghost tracker for the halloween series. *Q*

[MalleusGrey]

As do most of us Apple! There are a lot of people applying for it! It's almost unbelievable that this many people are applying for one tracker!

[orange.c y r u s♥]

I'm applying for the pumpkin one c:

-devon

[Papyrsatyr]

As do most of us Apple! There are a lot of people applying for it! It's almost unbelievable that this many people are applying for one tracker!

I would apply for it too if I had the time and inspiration. However I just have no time. =3= I wonder if I could order my custom tracker to look like that!

[DoctorDraca]

Applefiend, there are hardly any limits to how a custom can look, so.. yes, it can look like that. Not in those lines, but made so it could look like it.

[Irios Atelis]

75 is being judged tomorrow!! I am so exited! I hope LCD judges before I have to go to work!
I can't wait!!

(Please ignore my sudden sugar-high!)