Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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Who's Your Favorite Character?

Amy
31
23%
Jenette
37
28%
Indah
5
4%
Rhubarb
5
4%
Misty
25
19%
Flower
12
9%
The Indians
3
2%
Suzi
10
8%
Mom
2
2%
Brent
2
2%
 
Total votes : 132

Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Oct 26, 2011 5:55 am

Alright, time for more story!




Suddenly, something makes Jessie scream and I turn around.
Not you again!
What, you don't like your dear Suzi?
Let go of me!
How was Suzi even holding Jessy? She's a ghost, so wouldn't your hand go right through her?
I thought I got rid of you earlier!
Well too bad, lamo!
Suzi grunted and suddenly shoved her hand through Jessy's chest. Jessy screamed in pain. Suzi then took her hand out and was holding something. It was glittery and it looked like it had lightning inside it. Suzi smiled evilly, and dropped Jessy.
Are you okay, Jessy?
She nods, but suddenly she screams in pain. I hold her hand.
What's wrong?!
She can't answer me. She screams and screams, and suddenly there's a bright light and I cover my eyes. When the bright light is gone, I open them. I stare at Ghost Jessy, who is no longer a ghost. She was regular Jessy.
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Jessy!
I run to my sister, my old sister (her words will stay gray).
What happened? What made you change back?
Suzi took my power, and now she's going to-
There was evil laughter all around us. I looked up, and there was Suzi. A GHOST!
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(Her words will still be in purple)
Now you will all suffer!
We've got to find Jenette and Misty!
We (Mom, Indah, Jessy) run away from Suzi and I suddenly see the building where we had been; Rhubarb's home place thingy. I ran inside. I saw Rhubarb approaching us.
So, you escaped. Now you will-
No time, gotta run!
We ran past him, and right as we did I saw the dumfounded face on his face. I laughed as I ran. I burst open a door to a dark room, and I saw Misty huddled in the corner, tied up. i untied her.
Are you okay?
Yes, I think so. But.... they.... they took Jenette!
I gasped.
Where did they take her?
Misty shrugged.
I..... I couldn't stop them!
It's okay, but we've got to go and find Jenette!
Misty nodded and we all ran out of the room; Indah, Jessie, Misty, Mom, and me. There was a shaking noise, and I ran outside. I looked up, and there was Ghost Suzi.... except she was HUGE! I'm talking bigger then a skyscraper!
I can take her!
Misty, no!
But Misty ran ahead. She bit Suzi's toe, and Suzi yelled. She swung her foot, Misty still biting her toe, so hard that Misty flew off. She flew through the air and landed against a brick wall, and she fell to the ground unconscious.
YOU!
Suzi turned to me.
You..... will....... never........ do........ that....... AGAIN!
What was I SAYING? I wanted to scream, not be brave! Wait, I was being BRAVE?! Wow.
Who's going to stop me? You?
Well.... uh.... yes?
She laughed evilly.




(Thank you Ellies for the idea of Suzi taking Jessie's powers!)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:19 am

I took a deep breath and stepped toward Suzi.
Amy, don't!
I've got to!
How come I'm so brave? How did I GET so brave? I take a big deep breath and then lunge at the Giant Ghost Suzi. I wack her in the leg and she screams and picks my up with her paw. She smiles evilly.
I've been waiting so long for this.
She laughed evilly and opened her mouth, and shoved me in. She clamped her jaw shut and I saw her giant teeth beginning to chew. Her tongue moved me around, and I tried avoiding those sharp teeth from digging into my fur. She kept on trying to chew me, and when she almost bit down on my I grabbed that dangly thing in the back of her throat (I think it's called the Uvasomethingorother). I held on tight, and I could tell she was getting irritated with me. She then had another plan that I did not see coming. She swallowed hard. So hard, that I had to let go of the dangly thing. I went down her throat and that was all I could see. She had swallowed my whole! I assumed I was in her stomach, because everything was dark and there's no light in your body. Everything was gooey and smelly. I then felt movement, and knew that Suzi was walking. I sloshed around in her belly, and that's when I had an idea. I swam up to the highest point in her stomach and started pounding on the inside of it. Suzi stopped walking. I climbed up out of her stomach and I was soon in her throat. I heard Suzi gagging and I saw some sort of liquid coming towards me.... wait a minute, that was saliva! Gross. She tried to swallow me back down, but I heald on tight to her slippery inside skin stuff. I climbed out of her throat so I was back in her mouth. She stopped gagging and started to chew again. She was really getting irritated with me! I wobbled from left to right in her mouth, trying to dodge her sharp teeth. She moved her tongue and I fell down.... right inbetween her teeth! She bit down on me and I screamed in pain. I moved out of the way of her teeth as fast as I could, and ignored the blood coming out of my stomach. I threw back my paw and punched Suzi's tooth, making it fall out. Suzi screamed and blood oozed out of her mouth. She opened her mouth to scream again, and I hopped out and landed on the ground, still bleeding.
You little roach!
I was losing blood fast, and I limped over to Mom.
Are you okay?
Mom was whispering. I saw a big shadow above me, and I assumed it was Suzi ready to eat me. I closed me eyes, ready to die. Something poked me. I opened my eyes and turned around. I gasped. THE SHADOW WAS JENETTE!
You're here!
Well of course! You didn't think that I couldn't escape Rhubarb The Ugly, did you?
I laughed.
Okay, now stand still. This might hurt.
She put a drop of liquid onto my stomach, and I felt stinging and pain, but I stayed still. When the stinging and pain stopped, I looked at my stomach. The wound was healed! I was no longer bleeding!
How'd you do that?
Special recovery liquid that i got from HQ.
Thank you!
I hugged her.
Now, to kick some ugly butt!
Jenette face Suzi.
She's really strong, Jenette.
I know.
Suzi lunged at Jenette, and just before she did Jenette pulled out a sword and Suzi lunged right into it. Suzi gasped and fainted.
Did you kill her?
Nope, just stunned her. Now watch! It's happening!
Suzi began to shrink, smaller and smaller. She was by now her regular size, and she was no longer a ghost. But she was shrinking smaller then her normal height, and changing color! When she stopped changing, she looked like this:
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Jenette pulled the sword out of Suzi's stomach, and she instently awaked.
What happened- WAIT! What happened to my voice?! Why is it so HIGH!
I laughed and laughed. Suzi sounded like a chipmunk!
HEY! STOP LAUGHING OR ELSE I WILL DO SERIOUS DAMAGE!
All of us where laughing by now, except Suzi who was scowling.
Have you even looked at yourself?!
We all laughed and laughed and couldn't stop.
What do you-
Suzi then looked at a piece of glass that was on the ground and saw how small she was. She was a puppy! Suzi pounded her fists.
NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!
We all looked stunned, and then laughed harder then ever! Little baby Suzi was having a hissy fit! I then remembered something. Misty! I ran over to her, and she was just awaking.
What happened?
We defeated Suzi.
Misty smiled, but then frowned.
What about Rhubarb?
We'll have to find him later, but for now we caught Suzi!
Suzi began to run away, but Jenette grabbed her.
You only belong one place.
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We dropped Suzi off at jail. She was put in a cell and she was chained up so that she could barely move.
We did it!
We all went back to HQ; Jessie, Mom, Indah (yes, I invited him even though he's a baby), Jenette, Misty, and myself. We where all together again, one happy family..... almost.
Hey, Jenette?
I whispered so that no one would hear.
Ya?
Jenette had some sort of food in her mouth (I think it was a large piece of cake... or maybe the whole cake itself) and she talked while chewing. She swallowed the big piece of food.
I think you need to do something...
What do you- oh. I think you're right.
She smiled and I smiled back, and then she walked up to Mom and I stayed behind. I could tell Jenette was explaining to Mom about how she was her daughter, and I saw Mom's looked of surprise. I then saw Jenette explain, and then I saw Mom's eyes well up with tears, and they hugged a long hug. I smiled. Everything was perfect, except for that Brent was now Leo and he had turned away from us. But besides that, everything was perfect...... or so I thought.






(Thank you Ellies for the idea of Suzi turning into a puppy!)




ATTENTION ATTENTION! THAT IS THE END OF THE BOOK! I WILL PROBABLY BE WRITING THE 4th BOOK SOON!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby proud.little.wolf » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:29 am

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Woo! Great ending! I can't wait to read the fourth book!
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:06 am

Xela XIII wrote::clap:

Woo! Great ending! I can't wait to read the fourth book!

Thanks! I just need to take a break from writing and get my brain back from this book. XD I wrote so much I think I just need to take a slight break, and then I'll write more once I get ideas.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:36 am

Xd It was so funny when Suzi was turned into a puppy. She was like NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I fell out of my chair. XD
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Postby Ellies » Wed Oct 26, 2011 11:52 am

Thank you for using my ideas! i appreciate it!
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Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:41 pm

Draggy Ave wrote:Xd It was so funny when Suzi was turned into a puppy. She was like NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I fell out of my chair. XD

lol, ya. I sort of got the idea from The Emperor's New Groove, if you've seen it you'll know that Yeezma (I THINK that's how you spell it) was turned into that cute fluffy thing and her voice was high, so that's sorta what I got it from. XD
Ellies wrote:Thank you for using my ideas! i appreciate it!

Thank YOU for giving me the ideas! :D

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Zookrates » Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:26 am

... I still have no idea why it pop up...
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:10 am

Into the Sky wrote:YAY!

lol!
Zookrates wrote:... I still have no idea why it pop up...

I sent you a PM explaining.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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