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by Make_a__Scene » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:27 am
Here I'll be posting some - if not, all - of my characters.
Critiques, as always, are welcome.
I'd really appreciate if you didn't steal any of them, but I guess I can't really stop you from being so unimaginative that you have to plagiarize.
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My writer just hates the clock
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by Make_a__Scene » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:33 am
Doll Bio-
Name: [Old/New] Kokinos/Lorren
Age: [Human/Doll Age*] 24/50
Personality: When not apathetic, Lorren acts cold, only really showing affection for his brother. He’s forgotten what it is to be human, completely consumed and overtaken by the façade the Doll Maker created.
Bio: Kokinos stumbled upon the shop when he was looking for an engagement present of sorts for his betrothed. He saw a beautiful china doll in the window; however, when he went in to speak with the owner he was nowhere to be found. The shiny acrylic eyes of the dolls stared at him, and he felt as though they were mocking him. Suddenly he passed out to a sweet scent, and the next time he woke up he too was a doll. Or so he’s told. He doesn’t remember anything like that; he’s just a simple doll, Lorren.
Appearance: Lorren
Extra: Lorren doesn’t really remember ever being human, and he doesn’t understand why humanity is such an envied thing.
Help the Humans?: What’s so great about’em?
Doll Bio-
Name: [Old/New] Kiriko/Lark
Age: [Human/Doll Age*] 34/40
Personality: A foil to his twin brother, Lark is spirited, kind, helpful and loving. In a phrase, everything Lorren is not.
Bio: Ten years after his brother’s disappearance, Kiriko was out on a road that was unfamiliar to him. Passing by the window of a doll shop, he saw doll that looked curiously like Kokinos. Although this made him a bit sad, he thought it would be a nice gift for the heartbroken fiancée he had left behind. When he entered the shop, he had much of the same experience as his brother had ten years earlier; but the dolls seemed trying to warn him rather than mock. Alas, their warnings went without heed.
Appearance: Lark
Extra: Lark constantly tries to convince his brother that he had also once been human. He’s not entirely sure that Lorren believes that they’re twins, despite their striking resemblance, but he feels that Lorren knows there is some connection between them.
Help the Humans?: Definitely.
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by Make_a__Scene » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:40 am
Name*: Nemo
Gender*: Male
Age*: 19
Personality: Adventurous, daring, restless
Power*: Electricity
Strength*: Has an extremely tough body, therefore cannot easily be injured
Curse*: Never heals
How long you’ve been in the group: He and Sunday started the group
Bio*: He got into a car accident two years ago and contracted amnesia. So, there are a lot of things happening in his life that he’s just figuring out as he goes. He doesn’t remember how he became cursed. He also has a key that he wears on a chain, and he can feel that it unlocks something important, he just doesn’t know what.
Appearance*: 
Name: Sunday Owens
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Power: Necromancer
Strength: Um, strength. She has above-average strength
Curse: Audio-sensitivity; she can’t focus when there is a lot of noise, and she usually blacks out when there is a high-pitched sound.
How long have you been in the group: She and Nemo started it
Bio: Sunday was kicked out of the house as soon as she turned 18. She has a loving and supportive family, but she’s the oldest of seven, so her family needed more space in the house. She fell on the corner of a marble table when she was four, and ripped her left ear off. It was sewed back on, but most of the inside of her ear is artificial, so she has extreme sensitivity to noise.
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by Make_a__Scene » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:48 am
Name: Ink Swindle
Age: 27
Race: Genetically modified human (snake, predominately)
Power(Max 3): No special powers, really. He has deadly venom in his fangs.
What's your rank?: Janitor; takes care of any pesky “messes” the body collectors may have missed
Personality: He tries to help people as much as possible, however, he struggles greatly internally because of his kindness. He also has a bit of a temper
Bio(opt): The government had a program a while back that involved genetically modifying humans. No one knew why – and they kept it under wraps, of course – but some speculated it was to create super-humans for military use. Others thought they did it just to see what would happen. Most of the children used were homeless, feral even. However, sometimes they would take children away from their parents; they called it Child Services.
He was one of those children. He’d long since forgotten his own name, but the scientists called him Ink. He was kept in the animal ward, where they’d fuse animals with humans. Many would break down, lose their powers of speech, but Ink never stopped trying to escape until he finally succeeded. Unfortunately, by that time he would no longer fit in with the regulars. Somehow he stumbled upon The Society, the place that seemed perfect for him.
Appearance: Ink has fine, long, black hair that falls over his shoulders and across his back like a liquid darkness. Random unseemly bright yellow splotches upset the perfectness of his tresses. His eyes are golden and slit, like a snake’s. His skin is fair, though ridden with scars, and shiny black scales slide across his cheekbones, down his arms, and over his shoulder blades. He also has filmy green webbing between his toes and thin, long fangs that contain a horrifying venom.
Name: Faye Abel
Age: Older than she looks
Race: Nymph
Power: She can animate and re-animate nature
Rank: A diplomat, of sorts
Personality: She puts up walls, but if anyone got to know her, they’d see that they’re paper-thin.
Bio: She doesn’t like to talk about it. At all.
Appearance: Faye
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by Make_a__Scene » Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:07 pm
Name: Clover Ophelia Echo
Nickname: Lucine or Lucy
Age: 17, going on 18
Gender: Female
What you want: Not telling
Why are you here: After getting kicked out of the house by her parents, she dabbled in the darkness by becoming a burlesque dancer. She wants to escape from the shadows, but she can't seem to find light.
Personality: Guess you'll have to find out
Appearance: Lucy
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