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Horse Eye by Wep'keer

Artist Wep'keer [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 23 minutes
Drawing sessions 4
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Horse Eye

Postby Wep'keer » Sun Oct 23, 2011 7:08 am

This isn't done yet; I need to fix the eyelashes. Other than that its done.

But...something is off. I hate it when I know somethings' wrong with a drawing but I don't know what it is. Can anyone see anything missing, or something I can improve/fix? I think its the surrounding fur...


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Re: Horse Eye

Postby Error » Sun Oct 23, 2011 7:10 am

Something that's missing is that a horse's pupil is a rectangle, not a circle P:
The fur around it needs to be smoothed out some more, and the cheek looks a bit to round.

Other than that I think you did a good job ^^"
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Re: Horse Eye

Postby mrose » Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:27 am

I think the fur is off. Try using the dodge+burn tools, and not drawing a ton of colors and smudging it together.
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Re: Horse Eye

Postby Wep'keer » Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:28 am

Okay, thanks the both of you!

Oh, and Echoing Rain, that's the horse's iris, but the pupil is there too, its just shadowy so you can't see it. ;)
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