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Who should Lux end up with in the end?

Derek
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34%
Maro
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17%
Shay
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31%
Nobody
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Zaphara1 » Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:59 am

More! More!
Don't judge a thing 'til you know what's inside it; Don't push me I'll fight it; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; If you can't catch a wave then you're never gonna ride it; Ya can't come uninvited; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; You can't take me I'm free!! (You Can't Take Me, by Brian Adams, from the movie Spirit, Stallion of the Cimarron)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby dd10002 » Wed Oct 19, 2011 12:11 pm

i love it lol
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sat Oct 22, 2011 7:06 am

Glad you guys enjoy it! :) Requests granted!

Dear SJ,

I'm in Nox City! It's actually worse than what I expected it to be. For one, there are tons of gangs running around. I almost got my lights punched out when I accidentally stumbled into a gang member's path. Oops.
Anyways, I'm sitting her in a Starbucks (yes, they make Starbucks for dogs) , trying to figure out what to do next. It's difficult, SJ. I left all my friends and family behind just so I could be stranded in a city with nothing to entertain myself with except writing in you. Not that that's a bad thing...
Maybe.
And let me tell you, I'm relieved that I brought the $500 I was saving up; I wouldn't be here sipping a coffee if I didn't. And yes, I drink coffee. Kill me.
So yeah, that's basically it. Maybe I'll head to the library to read. Hang on, my phone's ringing.
"Hello?" I said into my iPhone.
"Hey, where the heck are you?" Mom's voice growls.
My blood ran cold. I couldn't think of anything to say. I'd been discovered. I should've known Mom would call me. And seeing as she probably noticed that my iPhone had gone missing from her nightstand... Yeah, I did the math.
"That's classified," I replied, tapping my fingers on the table.
"Excuse me? But I'm your mother and you will tell me where you are right now, Lux!" She wasn't happy. Could you tell, too, SJ?
I didn't answer though, for I'd hung up. If I want this running away plan to be a success, then I need to put family and friends behind me and focus.
Right?

Alright SJ, I'm packing up now. To the library!
~Lux
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby dd10002 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:08 am

awesome :D lol love it more
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby labradude » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:36 am

This is great! Please keep going :)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby AnImperialAffliction » Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:12 am

Pretty good! :)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby DeathByArrow1234 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 2:41 pm

It looks good so far. Can't wait to read more.
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby xxazul63xx » Sat Oct 22, 2011 3:17 pm

cool
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:34 am

Thanks guys! Here's more!

Dear SJ,

Worst. Library. Trip. Ever.
Wanna know why?
It's because I was attacked by a couple of gang members on my way.

I was simply walking along, minding my own business, when two dogs jumped out from the darkness of an alley. They blocked my path and growled at me.
"Whatcha doin' here, pup?" the first dog snarled. Here's what he looks like:
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The second dog laughed and said, "She ain't from this city, I'll betcha. Just look at all the crap she's carryin'!" He pointed to my duffel bag.
The second guy looked like this:
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"Listen girl," the dark brown dog said, jabbing a finger into my chest. "If you know what's best for ya, you'll get outta here before we have to pound your face in." His buddy stepped closer, and I could feel the adrenaline rushing through my veins. It rooted me to the spot, which caused them to do what they did next.
Without warning, they both sprung on me like spider monkeys, one of the dogs tripping me and the other using his paws to slam me to the sidewalk.
I cried out, but the first dog, the ringleader, clamped my mouth shut with his strong paws and pulled me into the alley. He threw me into a disgusting, trash-ridden corner.
"Stay," Dark Brown snarled, "Or else it'll be your life."
Light Brown laughed like it was some kind of joke and hurled my duffel bag at me. I managed to catch it in my lap and glare up at the two dogs. The look of defiance didn't last long though, and soon I was sulking like a pup who had to miss dessert.
"Why? Why are you doing this to me?" I covered my face with my paws, trying to conceal the tears.
"Because, you're trespassing on my pack's turf, that's why," Dark Brown's voice answered. "And yeah, my gang ain't gonna be happy about it, so you better pray you survive."
This made me cry harder. Here I was, in Nox City, held captive in a grungy alleyway by two gang members who didn't seem all that eager to show mercy.
See, crap like this always happens to me. Always.
"Don't move. We'll be back," Light Brown said and the two sauntered off, laughing and talking about what would happen to me.

SJ, pray for me, even though you're a book. I don't want to die here.... I wanna go home!
~Lux
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby AnImperialAffliction » Mon Oct 24, 2011 7:19 am

Suspenseful. ^^
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