Party Crasher (a ghost story)

[Noel]

LOL, I'm fine with it taking forever in fact, I know you must have lots of criticism for me and I barely remember what I wrote about.

DANG IT. I just wrote the entire thing, and Then accidentally deleted it.
And it was like, a huge thing too.
I'll try to re-write it soon as possible.

[Sen507]

LOL, I'm fine with it taking forever in fact, I know you must have lots of criticism for me and I barely remember what I wrote about.

DANG IT. I just wrote the entire thing, and Then accidentally deleted it.
And it was like, a huge thing too.
I'll try to re-write it soon as possible.

Oh, wow. I'm happy that I won't have to read like five pages saying every little thing that's wrong with my story but I do know how frustrating it is when you write something really long then it gets deleted by accident (this has happened to me a few times too). No need to hurry XD, I already know many of the things wrong with this story but I am far too lazy to edit it now.

[Noel]

Stop saying that you think its so awful, or I WILL give you five pages.
And a critique is naturally cruel, you know. Its called constructive criticism for a reason.
And sadly, writers do have to get better somehow.
You should see the ones I've gotten. xD
Mine with seem like sugar and kittens in comparison.

[Sen507]

Stop saying that you think its so awful, or I WILL give you five pages.
And a critique is naturally cruel, you know. Its called constructive criticism for a reason.
And sadly, writers do have to get better somehow.
You should see the ones I've gotten. xD
Mine with seem like sugar and kittens in comparison.

Sorry, you know I'm just very sensitive about what people say to me so I generally don't like critiques, I'm really only posting to see if people generally like or dislike my writing. Also it's not as bad when someone you don't know hates your writing, it's a bit different with someone you do know. Yes, it is true though that I have to face the fact that my writing isn't always too good. And of course your going to get some bad reviews if you post on a site with professional writers, from the little that I've seen I at least think you're a better writer than me.

[Noel]

[quote=aibo7m3]Sorry, you know I'm just very sensitive about what people say to me so I generally don't like critiques, I'm really only posting to see if people generally like or dislike my writing. Also it's not as bad when someone you don't know hates your writing, it's a bit different with someone you do know. Yes, it is true though that I have to face the fact that my writing isn't always too good. And of course your going to get some bad reviews if you post on a site with professional writers, from the little that I've seen I at least think you're a better writer than me.[/quote]
Apologize again and I will cry. >_<"
Naturally, some people will dislike your writing. Why? We're beginners. We have like, no experience. I don't know for sure about you, but I've never had lessons or anything. your writing 'isn't very good' cause you haven't written much. Its that simple. That's why people who are generally better at it than I am give critiques. So your writing gets better. If all people say is 'I like it' or 'I don't like it' well, nothing good happens.
You get bad reviews wherever you are, no matter how good you are. As I've learned, both here and the otehr sites I get harsh reviews, but they're usually quite helpful.
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[Sen507]

True, I know people do need to know their own faults to improve but it more fun being blissfully ignorant? But seriously I know I do need to read the critique and revise my work if I want to continue writing this or at least gain some helpful tips for the next story. Yeah, I've never taken a writing course, mainly because I would get lots of harsh comments which you know I don't react well to. Sorry for apologizing so much (XD, yes I know that sentence must have been painful to read).

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