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by IgnoreThisAccount » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:17 pm
;autumn shade wrote:XXX
Running, through the thick nightitme fog, was one of many dogs. His eyes burnt from the water falling down in thick sheets. His legs begged for him to run, yet his brain was slowing him down. "Keep going" he whispered to himself up. It was like a perfet picture. This robber, William, was running for his life from thirteen cursed armors sent by the king.
Then it happened.
A hand reached out from a thin, thin alley. It was a kind paw, one William had never thought he'd see given out to him. The girl hiding in the shadows left the hand there, knowing perfectly she was helping a robber. Will slithered through the alley and into what he'd never find himself in normally. A dress-making shop.
(Continue? ^ ^)
(Thank you people that said to continue ouo)
XXX
With a swift movement, the arch that stood in Will's hand was brushed from his hand to the girl's. William protested "Hey that's mine!" but the girl simply put her long paws on a chair, and snapped it on her knee. Will sighed before saying "So you're helping a robber? Don't you know if you do that you get killed?". The girl chuckled, throwing the arch into the flickering fire that stood on the wall left her. Her eyes glimmered as she said "I'm smart enough to know that. I like helping robbers change.". William was confused, but said nothing, instead sitting down on a chair and rubbing his forehead with one paw. He looked silently around the workshop as the girl dissapeared into another room. A small sunshine yellow dress lay in a corner of the room, but the rest of the room was occupied by normal-sized, colorful dresses and weird and wonderful fabric. "I'm Alexandra" she said from the other room, before a silent buzzing noise of a machine began.
(I'm continuing no matter how many people tell me not to XD)
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by Selcouth » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:24 pm
Everyone needs to stop commenting on my terribad story and focus on all the other awesome stuff ajafhkjdbjdh. ;AAA;
I am not worthyyyyy. And if I were on my computer, you know I would insert some silly gif here to show you how much I love you all for commenting. But I'm not, so.
Fffff, THANK YOU EVERYONE. <333 Asohdshfdsbjsd.
Oh, wow; I think this is the most response I've ever gotten on a story, haha. |D And it... I wasn't really trying, this seriously isn't the best I can do, ablublublu--! Ah! I don't really know what to say, but honestly, thank you all so much. owo;; So so much. I doubt there will be more from that... Universe-thing, but I will try to write more often! I've been kind of slacking off, haha...
Er... I'm sort of spamming the thread, aren't I? Aha. Sorry! ^^; Please continue on!
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by micah » Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:36 am
@Selcouth: ...You are so worthy just don't even try to say you aren't! That was a lovely, lovely, lovely piece and if you call it terribad again I swear~!!! I was going to tell you this later, but I figured I shouldn't wait. c; --You said you were trying to improve with writing girls? Wonderfully done. I'm not so sure you were bad in the first place, though. ^^; Hm- also- about when you said that you still follow my stories? Don't ask why I'm replying to this here or now, but I can't say my motivation is so high or if they are so good, either.
Silly gif? no no I'll wait for that gif teeheehehe
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im the face you cant erase
consider me a tower of power
pulling strings to haunt dreams"
Hello, I am your puppeteer. I understand that our first meeting can be a little rough--"
He laughed with a drawl and sliding his finger across his bottom lip, he continued. "Or very rough, if you choose to take it in such a literal way. I actually find it so funny that it took me so long to... Attach to you, dear. Usually with drones like you--and trust me, I mean that in a wonderful way--it is easy as pie to take control. But something in you fought back. And it did so hard. You, ah, wouldn't happen to know what that is, would you? It was so delicious to taste. Hm, I suppose I'll know once we get to know each other better.
Could I ask you to follow me down this corridor? I mean--sorry, you haven't got a choice.
And away..."
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by .a m a r y l l i s. » Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:45 am
@Selcouth: I agree with Giggle; you are definitely 100% worthy. That story was fantastic!! Nothing 'terribad' about it. As always your writing blows my mind. <333 I am looking forward to devouring everything and anything else you write :B
@Giggle: Please, please, please tell me there's more to that? It's one of the most powerful pieces of writing I have ever had the pleasure to read.
@rainy.day: I can't wait for the rest. It's got me hooked already. <3
@Lennie: That story was beautiful. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Weep little lion man
You're not as brave as you were at the start
Golden eyes stared blankly across the room, trailing over the walls of cell. The crowd of people outside the wall-long window may has well as been invisible, for all the more attention he paid them. Whispers passed through the crowd, chilling tales of the reason behind the man's fate. A hush descended slowly as the guards led a slight figure forward. Shoulders hunched against the stares of all the strangers, blank eyes stared resolutely at floor. He took up a space near the window to the cell chamber, nearly invisible against the bleak cement block walls.
The cell's sole occupant slowly smiled, a chilling mockery of happiness. With light footsteps he stood, meandering over to the glass. The sharp rap echoed around the two rooms, startling the crowd outside. The young man blinked, dull eyes moving to the window. A second rap drew his gaze farther, pulling his eyes to the smirking man inside.
A tiny spark of recognition echoed in his eyes, the faint tremble visible for the first time. Golden eyes flashed in pathetic delight.
"Hello, old friend.
How's that heartache healing up?"
And it was your heart on the line
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.And the walls kept tumbling down
In the city that we love
Great clouds roll over the hills
Bringing darkness from above
Oh where do we begin?
The rubble or our sins?
How am I gonna be an optimist about this?.
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RIP Aunt Babe || 3.31.15
RIP Nene || 10.7.15xFind me on FR! .
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by aquamarine » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:51 am
SELCOUTH DON'T MAKE ME EAT YOU. Your story was a m a z i n g
p.s. sorry for the book guyzz ;A;
You and me together we'll be, Forever you'll see
We two can be good company, You and me
Yes, together we two
Together that's you, Forever with me
We'll always be good company, You and me
Yes, together we'll be
"Colette, come out! I'm tired of looking for you." complained the tired little boy, who, for the past 30 minutes, had been involved in an intense game of hide and seek with his best friend, Colette. Also known as champion hider.
A musical-sounding giggle rang through the patch of trees. "Say the magic words first!"
Aro's head flew around, his eyes frantically searching in all directions. He shook his head and moaned. Colette could have sung the ABCs at the top of her lungs while hula-hooping snakes around her belly and he still wouldn't be able to find her. The girl was unreal.
He sighed. The magic words were just so ... embarrassing! Not to mention degrading towards him. But he knew no matter how much he begged her, she'd never come out of her hiding place until he yelled them at the top of his lungs.
"Aro, I'm waiting!" Colette sang, from her hidden place of secrets.
"Oh, fine. COLETTE ISABELLA WILLIAMS JUST BEAT ARNOLD BRADLEY SMITH AT HIDE AND SEEK. SHE CONQUERS ALL."
A laughing Colette swung out of the branches of the nearest tree. She flipped in the air and her feet landed perfect on the ground.
"Show-off." Aro muttered, scowling at his best friend.
She waggled a finger at him. "Don't be a toad. It's not my fault you suck at hide and seek, Arnold."
He rolled his eyes at her. "Whatever, Collie Dog." Aro knew that Colette hated being called Collie Dog as much as he hated being called Arnold. She glared at him and he grinned back, feeling satisfied.
You and me
Together we'll be
Forever, you'll see
We'll always be good company
You and me
A giant knot had settled itself in Aro's stomach and refused to untie. As he and Colette waited those last few moments for the doctor's diagnosis, his hopes were lower then the floor they stood on. A knock at the door sent them lower.
Dr. Robin's kind face peered around the door as she let herself into the room. Though she had a gentle smile on her face, there was a deep sadness in her eyes. She took a deep breath before addressing the couple.
"I'm sorry Colette, but it's as we suspected. You have leukemia."
Aro's blood froze and time seemed to stop. He watched as Colette put her face into her hands. Her shoulders shook with silent sobs.
"We can start treatment as soon as you decide you're ready to face it. I'll give you two a moment alone."
Aro nodded numbly to the kind doctor and barely heard the door closing. He reached out and touched Colette's shoulder.
She looked up at him with soulful blue eyes and a tear-stained face. "Do you ... do you think I'll make it?"
His heart nearly broke in two as he wrapped his arms around her. "Don't be a toad. I know you will. You conquer all."
Relief washed through Aro as he saw the memory of their magic words pass through Colette's eyes, putting a small smile on her face.
"I love you, Aro."
Just wait and see
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by faraday » Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:00 pm
rainy.day wrote:rainy.day wrote:

The girl's hand gripped the wooden handle of the music box, cranking it with such care; her soft blue eyes watched knowingly as the familiar tune gushed out.
xxx
hush now, quiet now,
the night shrouds you as you sleep,
hush now, quiet now,
as angels above weep,
hush now, quiet now,
close your sleepy eyes...
hush now, quiet now,
it's time to go to sleep...xxx
the child stopped ubruptly, her dainty hand letting go of the box, letting it clatter noisily to the floor. I pressed my hand against the glass that seperated us, my breath fogging up my view of her. And for a moment... she seemed at peace. Just for a moment, I felt as if everything was all better. That she was no longer a monster, no longer had the devil taken her as a host. But I had to remind myself of what she had doen to the other children; why she was here.
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More coming soon. Based off of this song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfy5W8AJqIYThe lyrics are mine, no stealing please. (:
The telephone felt familiar in my hand. But not in hers. She struggled to keep the weight up to her ear, and dropped it a few times before she was able to hold it steadily. "Hello." My voice was unfamiliar to me; I hadn't used it, or heard it in so long... "Hi," she replied, her voice soft as she squirmed around in the chair, both of her hands still supporting the phone up to her ear. "How do you like it here?" It was only small talk, but at least it was still talk. She pondered my question for hardly a moment at all, and smiled. "Well, they are very nice to me, even though they're not allowed to come in my room, and they give me my favorite foods through the food slot, and they have a remote control from the outside so they can turn on 'Wow Wow Wubzy!', and they get me good toys, and stuff." She exclaimed rapidly, the phone almost slipping from her grasp. I let a smile escape onto my lips, and I nodded solemnly at her. "That's good." She opened her mouth, and I could hear her breathing. "Do my friends miss me?" My face fell, bitterness eating at me. "Yes," I lied, brushing my hair out of my face. "They miss you very much, honey." Obviously she doesn't remember what she did to them.
xxx
More coming later today. C:
I remember it like it was yesterday; maybe it was yesterday. Time was an illusion to me, now. I remember the home phone ringing. It was her school. I picked it up, expecting nothing out of the ordinary.
"....he.....hello? Oh my god, your daughter, I didn't know who to call, you or 911, and I called you. Just, get help. Please; wait, no, no! Put that down, don't hurt them!"...
After that the line went dead. It was a very short call, but my mind jumped to several conclusions. None of them seemed relevant, but I remembered the teachers plea. To get help. I carefully punched in the 9 button on the telephone, followed by two 1s. The line rang for a short while, before I heard a young woman's voice. "911, what's your emergency?" I explained in detail the call that I had just gotten; everything from the message itself to the tone of her voice, and how she was out of breath. There was a pause, before the emergency operator spoke again. "And what units do you want me to send?" She asked, her voice careful and tentative, as if the sentence itself was a bomb and she had to handle it as carefully as possible. I took a sharp intake of breath, before parting my lips to speak. "Everything. Everything and anything you have."
xxx
They showed me pictures of her classroom. I didn't have the heart to go inside myself; I couldn't see the destruction the thing that I brough into this earth had caused. There was only one survivor; a quiet little boy, who hid in the reading corner. My daughter didn't like reading much; no wonder she didn't go in there. I was jolted back to reality by my daughter's voice. "Mommy, I have to go now. It's naptime." I nodded, licking my parched lips. "Yes, okay darling. I hope to see you again soon." I started to put the phone down, when I saw her jump for the glass window, her greasy hands smudging the surface. "Wait, Mommy; I love you." There was a certain evil in returning the common saying to a monster such as herself, but... who was to say that I wasn't a monster myself?
"I love you too."
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wheeeee~ All done. I might do it from the girl's point of view in the future, as long as it's not to graphic. (: I hope you enjoy my twisted little tale of mother and daughter<3
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by .a m a r y l l i s. » Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:23 pm
rainy.day wrote:

There was a certain evil in returning the common saying to a monster such as herself, but... who was to say that I wasn't a monster myself?
"I love you too."
Fffft. Enjoy it? With all my heart, darling.
Beautifully written-looking forward to that maybe kinda sequel, if you do wind up writing one from the girl's point of view.
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.And the walls kept tumbling down
In the city that we love
Great clouds roll over the hills
Bringing darkness from above
Oh where do we begin?
The rubble or our sins?
How am I gonna be an optimist about this?.
.
.RIP Larry || 12.16.12
RIP Aunt Babe || 3.31.15
RIP Nene || 10.7.15xFind me on FR! .
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by faraday » Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:33 pm
● e r h y n ● wrote:rainy.day wrote:

There was a certain evil in returning the common saying to a monster such as herself, but... who was to say that I wasn't a monster myself?
"I love you too."
Fffft. Enjoy it? With all my heart, darling.
Beautifully written-looking forward to that maybe kinda sequel, if you do wind up writing one from the girl's point of view.
I'm so glad you liked it<3 Be expecting the girl's point of view around next week, or sooner. n___n I might just make it one big post, if I'm motivated enough. C:
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