The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Papyrsatyr]

Please don't forget you guys can critique your peer's stories. And perhaps they can return the favor so that you can get more opinions.

[Pierce.]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
Tusk
Link to your form:
{x}
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Tracker Dogs
Deadline for your form:
Tonight XD
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM would be great
^_^

[Sen507]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: aibo7m3
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=790489
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc) It's just part of a ghost story I'm writing (there is more but this is just what I've posted).
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine, whichever is more convenient for the person giving the critique.

[neonfrozen]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: koowie
Link to your form: Boop
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: I think 10/8 but im not sure...
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM would be best.

[Lions]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:crhyoyo
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=728637&start=20
You might need to scroll down some, never have been good with linking stuff.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: W.A.S Pound
Deadline for your form: Tomorrow, 9-7-11
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? I would like PM please<3

[Sketchi-Kitty]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: KittenPaws-101
Link to your form: My form is here.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Silver Lining Adoption Place (S.L.A.P.)
Deadline for your form: I don't know when it's due, S.L.A.P. doesn't give out code drop dates. I want to get it done as soon as I can, though.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.

[Wesley]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
wesleydog
Link to your form:
Click
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Symphony Character Adoption Agency - The SCAA
Deadline for your form:
I'd love to have the critique by tonight, but I don't need it until tomorrow, Sunday 10/23, even though it's not due for a while, because I still need to do so much of the personality and story.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM would possibly be easier, but oh well, I'll check back here, too. x3

I'd prefer descriptive critique. ;D I would really like for this form to turn out great. Please keep in mind when critiquing that this is a WIP form. <3

[eternalglitch]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Wolves Run free
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=58&t=788955&p=21263617#p21263617
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tracker Dogs V3.0
Deadline for your form: It's due October 31, but I would love it in about three days or less so I can type and edit <3
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

[Sketchi-Kitty]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: KittenPaws-101
Link to your form: My form is here.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Silver Lining Adoption Place (S.L.A.P.)
Deadline for your form: I don't know when it's due, S.L.A.P. doesn't give out code drop dates. I want to get it done as soon as I can, though.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.

The drop is tonight, please, anyone who sees this, PM me some critique.

[Lirrie]

Kitten i just saw this i will do it asap