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by Chii-sai » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:56 am
Artemis again!! I really enjoy drawing her.... Oh ya, blood warning again XP Obvious Chii is obvious.
Anyway, if you have yet to read and/or watch the LAST two episodes of Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood, I recommend you don't read below, or if you really don't care, go ahead and read on.
Tears trickled down my cheeks as I watched Greed float by me in the wind, his remains slowly dissolving into nothing. That idiot. That idiot!! I bit my lip, tasting blood as I kept myself from screaming at him. That's not the way I wanted him to remember me. That moron whom I'd known since I became a State Alchemist was my best friend. I knew it was considered "fraternizing with the enemy"... but by now, I considered Greed a good guy in the very least. Was he doing it for his own selfish reasons? He did sacrifice his life for us. Me... All of us.
The ashes, or whatever you'd call them, tickled my nose as they blew by. I could almost hear exactly what he'd say.
"Moron... I never asked you to cry for me. Wipe your face and finish this. You might want to hurry- you're a second away from snot crying."
The tears only came harder as I clenched my fists.
"I'm only crying for you... because I know that's exactly what you wanted Greed. The whole time. You said you wanted money and power and all the women in the world... but all you wanted the whole time..." I closed my eyes, my neck soaked with salty tears, "You wanted friends, and I hope you can die happy now, because you did have them. Ed, Al, Ling... And if it makes any difference, I loved you Greed. I still do."
Yeah.....
Finally figured out a State Alchemist name for Artemis as well!! The Sculpting Life Alchemist: her specialties are sculpting things- preferably animal like things- and attaching a part of her soul to make them to her bidding. I've love some comments and crtis!
Past Photos of Artemis Armstrong::
Angry Chibi . Young Arty
Thanks guys!! Hope you like her!! ^^
~Chii
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by P0CKETKNIFE » Sun Sep 25, 2011 11:32 am
I would but theres NOTHING to crituqe! its a beutiful oekaki

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by Chii-sai » Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:08 pm
Tigerflower wrote:The hair on the top of the head should be bigger, rounder, and... Fluffier. More anime-like.
Thanks!! It usually is, but everything I tried to do wasn't really working well with the angle... and earlier in the fight, she actually gets her signature Armstrong curl cut off. But thanks for the crit!
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by icykeys » Mon Oct 03, 2011 8:18 pm
Chii-sai wrote:Crits please T-T?
Uh. If I might say so...
I think that the face is a little uhm.. "bloated"? I'm not quite sure of a good word to use... But I believe it'd look a bit better if you made the face skinnier, putting it simply. :) It's either that, or the hair should be a bit larger on the top/back. Or both. ^__^
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by Chii-sai » Tue Oct 04, 2011 1:44 am
k2w2 wrote:Chii-sai wrote:Crits please T-T?
Uh. If I might say so...
I think that the face is a little uhm.. "bloated"? I'm not quite sure of a good word to use... But I believe it'd look a bit better if you made the face skinnier, putting it simply.

It's either that, or the hair should be a bit larger on the top/back. Or both. ^__^
Thank you very much 8D I noticed that... and I tried to work with it but I guess it didn't work as well as I though XD Still working on the side view.. but thank you!
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