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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby Shimmerleaf » Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:21 pm

Nonononononono I'm up against Soteria for Sylvi.

And ~Bump~
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My lights are OFF!
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I walked across
An empty land,
I knew the pathway like the back of my hand
I felt the earth
Beneath my feet,
Sat by the river and it made me complete
Oh, simple thing
Where have you gone?
I'm getting old and I need something to rely on
So tell me when
You're gonna let me in,
I'm getting tired and I need somewhere to begin
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby Soteria » Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:58 pm

Wha, ohno competition!

I'm harmless though owo
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby audball(: » Tue Sep 27, 2011 12:26 pm

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Username: CookieWereWolf

Kennel Number: 51

Name: Renee

Gender: Female

Breed/Species: Canine/Grey Wolf

Personality: There is not much to describe this beautiful wolf, so I will choose my words carefully.

Renee is a quiet creature with a big imagination. She never really talks, unless you really get her going. She is very productive though, never is boring. She always has this one saying:

Always Unique, Never Boring

That saying has really kept her going. She tries to talk more and really tries to interact with others. Its been hard for her, though, because everytime she walks up to someone, she freezes, and cant speak. WIP

Background/History:
"This is my story as a pup....please respect my past"
...I woke in a cave....cold and hungry... nowhere to go.... then i saw light. I got up and went to look, the sun kissing my cold damp fur. I took a deep breath as the sunlight came down to shine on me. I took a step outward and looked around. I was alone....but someone had been here...recently...i walked out and investigated...but nothing was here...then a beautiful lake came into view as i walked. I came up to it, thirsting for water. As I knelt down to drink, I heard rustling in the bushes....and out came a bunny. I laughed, thinking before it was a bear or something. I scared it away, laughed happily. But then i heard a twig snap....and before I knew it, i was in the hands of a poacher. I yipped, very surprised and struggled to get out of the grip..but he had me firmly. I bit his hand hard and ran, hoping to escape. I heard gunshots and shouts.
" Get that pup! It looks rare, so it will be worth sometin!"
Footsteps were behind me as I ran.... bullets striking next to me as I swift past the logs and leaves. I came to a cave and went in..deeper..and deeper.....and deeper...and deeper until it was pitch black. I heard the man shout again.
''She's in the cave! Someone grab a flashlight! I WANT THAT PUP!" I shuddered from cold and fear. Then a small light shined in my face...a hole! I peeked out, finding that i could fit through the small space. I snuck through and ran quietly and swiftly away, the poachers still struggling to find their flashlight. I chuckled to myself as i looked back at them.

So after the encounter from the poachers, I went to explore a temporary home. I searched for days, weeks, even a month...and no luck. I was starving, i only had berries and scraps to munch on. It took me forever to find me new loving home. One day though, i was lucky enough to hear water rushing...and then it came into view...a beautiful waterfall and a moss cave next to it! I smiled greatly and ran to the cave. No one had claimed it..until now. I marked me scent and took a drink from the falls. I couldnt believe how happy i was! i lived life there, by myself. I grew quieter as the years went by, with me being alone and all. Years past, and I was still living the same life. I ate small rabbits, and occasionally deer, and survived on the river that flowed next to my cave. But I was lonely...and it seemed like it would be like that forever.


So one day, I had had enough. I wanted to explore, to meet someone, to find something better than this. So i went away from my cave resort to the dark trees.I walked for a long time. Its seemed like hours. I was starving. Then, i came upon a deer. It was so close....i crouched slowly and got really to pounce....but then I heard snarls. Before I knew it, wolves pounced at the deer while it came darting toward me. I yipped and ran. The deer's hooves scraped at my heels, making them bleed. I whimpered and and my legs seemed to give up on me. I stumbled and then everything went black.


I woke...inside a cave. But it wasnt mine..... "Wh-what happened...?" I muttered...then a female wolf came in.
''Oh, your up" She said.
''Who are you...? What happened? Where am i?"
"Oh, your fine. Im Kai, Alpha of the Cookie Pack. You are in the healing den here at our camp. At our hunt, the scared deer trampled you. When we found you, you were broken and bloody. We took you here, so you could heal."
"Oh..."
Kai chuckled a little. "Well, you will stay here until you fully heal. In the mean time, would you like to see camp?"
I hesitataed, but nodded.
"Good, first, lets see you stand"
I looked at her...then struggled. I finnally stood, and she smiled.
''Great, come on" I followed her out...then saw all the wolves stare at me. They were all very unique and beautiful. I looked at them as well, some of the males where giving me the eye..and i looked down. Some fox pups came up to me and yipped.
''Who you?" The laughed. Kai looked at them adoringly. "Dont worry about it. Go on, you are supposed to be with Willow." She licked on of the pups. "Go on" She smiled. I looked at her.
''We adopt fox pups as our own all the time." She smiled. "Come on. Lets go. This is the-" She told me what everything was and who everyone was. I smiled. I felt...good. Like I belonged here. I loved it....

In the end, I stayed with the Cookie Pack, and now still have to find new adventures that await me.

Use: I will probably use it as a character in my character hoard thread...but maybe my new Fursona, because i love this SO much :D

Other: :D

Age: 3

Likes: Fun, friends, and being a friend to others.

Dislikes: Being selfish, mean people, and silence.

Favorite Colors: Baby blue and lime green. They really seem to fit her personality.

Favorite Season: Spring

Favorite Holiday: Easter

Favorite Item: Does a friend count as a item?

Favorite things to do: Have fun with her friends and family. There is nothing else that she would LOVE to do

Favorite time of day: Evening

Favorite Song: Waiting Outside the Lines by Greyson Chance http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_AU1yyy_At4&ob=av2e

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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby Solanum » Tue Sep 27, 2011 6:00 pm

You don't need to post your form here, even in a quote. It is spammy, though I'm glad you're proud of your form. I'm not proud of mine... -sigh-
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby audball(: » Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:27 am

Oh, sorry. I dont think I'll get it though, which makes me sad, cause i love this so much xD
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby Solanum » Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:31 am

You can always ask for crit. I'm sure I'll be free for a while after I've finished watching the new NCIS. Maybe we could do a swap, you take a look at mine and I take a look at yours?
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when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby audball(: » Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:32 am

Sure! What page is your forum on?
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby Solanum » Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:49 am

I have all my forms bookmarked, cause I'm that awesome, I'll fetch you a link. ^^
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Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
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Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
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I’m underneath your skin
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You’ll never know what hit you


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Look what you made of me
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby audball(: » Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:53 am

Lol. Well, i read through it, and I think its awesome. The only thing you need to finish is the personalities and Art ( If your gonna make some xD) I really love it. Nice job
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Re: The Official Symphony Fan Club ~ Join Now! <3

Postby Solanum » Wed Sep 28, 2011 8:02 am

I'm going to try and do some art, although horses are definitely not my strong point. I know about the history thing, but I won my last form without a personality, it depends on how well you show the character in the history. Sometimes I can get away with it although I try to complete forms. The history is no where near completed ^^
Taking a look at yours now. I'll send crit in a PM for you c;
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I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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