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Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy by н σ я ѕ є

Artist н σ я ѕ є [gallery]
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Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby н σ я ѕ є » Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:12 am

Thsi is Mossdawn from a role play she is now almost blind but cans till kind of see.She battled with a rouge named Cloudy for her honor and loyalty.In the end she almost killed Cloudy but ended up not killing her on perpose.It all started when Mossdawn found the rouge stealing prey and fresh moss so she tore up the rouges nest.That tear is a tear of blood as she lays at sunning rocks where Silverstream her kin and ancestor died.I tried hard and I might get back to it and fix it later.The timer is right so I did spend a little while on it but that was really just one drawing sesion.
Finished but I might go back and fix it futher. :D
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Fixed my cat up abit! :mrgreen: Does anyone think this should be intermediate yet or keep working on it and it will be?It is no longer in one drawing session but the timer is still correct.
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby ArianaFire » Wed Sep 28, 2011 3:05 am

Two things..
Yes, this shoukd be in beginners, not intermediate, but i will explain WHY
:arrow: your cat doesnt have any shading, there are lots of tutorials out there try some :) !
:arrow: as you have already said, you shouldnt be in intermediate because you havent mastered drawing cats just yet. Im sure that with practice you will do just fine, but before that post either in beginners of sketches and expiriments, just to be safe.
And guess what, after a while, when you draw a really good picture in beginners, someone will post and say "hey, thats is SO awesome! Should be in intermediate!" then you will know to post in intermediate.

Since im not too good at cats on computer, i cant really give you pointers on how to draw cats other than use smoothing when you do the lineart
But the background is pretty good ;)
Hope this didnt upset you, im not trying to be mean.
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby н σ я ѕ є » Wed Sep 28, 2011 3:32 am

I fixed this post thanks to every one who thought I was good and made me feel better.Now that I edited it alot does any one think it belongs in intermediate?Or that with some work I can make it intermediate?
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby EnochianGhost » Wed Sep 28, 2011 3:48 am

Hey, now don't be like that. Just think of it this way. Every single amazing artist out there started somewhere, usually about here where you are now. None of them magically had amazing skill in 5 seconds. They all worked hard and studied to become what they are.

Don't be so hard on yourself. If you put your heart into becoming a better artist, I can guarantee you will become one. Just keep practicing, and never compare yourself to someone whose been at it for years longer than you.
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby н σ я ѕ є » Wed Sep 28, 2011 3:59 am

I know but I've made like five different things oh art in intermediate one of wich took me about a week of hard work to finish.And the minute I posted it like 2 or 3 people told me it was not good enough-a.k.a. bad-to be in intermedait.
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby EnochianGhost » Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:35 am

That just means you need more practice. I know it's hard when you work really hard on a picture, and it still isn't good enough. But there isn't really anything you can do about it but strive to get better. You are a beginner at drawing, so you should draw in the beginners section. Once you have been drawing for a long while, you will be an intermediate artist, and can draw in the intermediate section. Don't try to get ahead of yourself. You'll get there eventually.
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby pudding. » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:38 am

Don't be so hard on yourself! Just keep practicing and You'll eventually get better!
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby н σ я ѕ є » Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:42 am

Well,ok but how do i smooth out the lines.
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby val velocity » Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:51 am

Okay.Now,you can't get mad at people when they say that because its in inter,it clearly says its allowed for critisim,AND its also saying you need to work a while before inter.
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Re: Mossdawn After Almost Killing Cloudy

Postby н σ я ѕ є » Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:54 am

I have I'm still working on it though trying to make it better you know?
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