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by Lovely Dreamer » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:36 pm
artemis5001 wrote:Please continue. It's a great start ^^
*DJ Wolfy* wrote:Continue please. It's quite interesting. ^_^
TigressJaguiar wrote:Sounds really good so far!
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All You Need Is Love wrote:All You Need Is Love wrote:

The Porcelain Doll~~
The Child~~
The Plastic Doll
Although I am breakable, she has always loved me. She takes me out, ever so gently, and shows me to her friends. She whispers to me every night, "Good night, dolly."Whenever she plays dolls, I am a princess or a queen or something delicate and beautiful.A Year Later
There is an intruder in my peaceful kingdom, one that is winning over the child. She is not beautiful like me, with her stiff purple hair, removable accessories, and pale base color. No, I am still the most beautiful, with my real hair color and sweet face. But the child can drop the intruder and it will survive. More and more I become the damsel in distress while the bad one is the hero. And I cannot let that happen. My kingdom is in danger.The porcelain doll, Queen Beauty, watched over her poor, helpless kingdom from the new, plastic tower DivaDoll accessory pack that the child had gotten as a gift. The intruder, which had been called Diva, was the one that the castle went to.
This doll, Diva, was the reason that Beauty wasn't sitting in her rightful throne. Diva was galloping around the child's house, playing hero, while she sat, a captive, in this fake prison. Beauty wasn't allowed to go around the house anymore, not since the Child had recieved Diva.
Beauty hated Diva.
Part 2
Diva does not know that I hate her and all of her plastic... Well, her plastic world that I am a stranger in. I cannot bear to tell her how I feel, for in the end, we are both here to entertain the Child. So I treat her like a true friend. But it does not mean that we are friends, right?Beauty heaved an inner sigh as the Child dropped Diva into the plastic prison-excuse me,castle- and hurried out the door for school.
"
Hiya, Beauty! How was that game? I think it was super fun!" Diva always bombarded Beauty with improper speech and exclamations as soon as they could freely speak.
Beauty smiled. "
I always find those games a bit boring, considering that I just sit here." Diva wilted slightly, but Beauty reached out a delicate paw and stroked the plastic hair of the bright toy gently. "
But you find it fun, correct? It is not bad if you like something that I do not." She smiled a bit, and Diva nodded, her purple curls stiffly moving.
Diva looked at her own tail, adorned with a plastic purple bow that Child had attached herself. "
Why don't you ever play with us? You always stay in the castle..." She tapped the bowless tail of the porcelain doll.
"
I will break. It is my nature, but I wish I was..." Beauty stopped, realizing what she was about to say. SHe took a breath and continued. "
plastic."
What did I say to the enemy?? What will become of what little is left of my kingdom that hasn't become plastic? I do not know. But I know that now, more than ever, we are not friends.
I quit CS.
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by revenmoore » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:42 pm
Forever loved- that's what you said.
Forever loved by you and only you~
Why did it turn out a lie
Why wouldn't you tell me why?
Why did you have to say goodbye?
Why did you have to...die?Zoey, blinked her tired, teared up eyes. Even if she wanted to she probably couldn't cry anymore tears. She wiped her tear-streaked face with one white paw. Whimpering quietly she walked away from the grave she stood by. Her beloved Spencer...
Zoey padded out to their-no her den. Quietly she curled up into a ball, wondering when she'd eaten last. Her puppies would be born soon, she needed to take care of them...
Chapter One
Zoey sighed contentedly as the sun warmed her chocolate brown fur, she stood outside her mother's den, which she would finally be leaving, her sister Nikki glared at her as she walked out of the den. "Where are you heading, loser?" she sneered at her, her blue eyes full of hatred. Zoey snorted with annoyance. "Somewhere in the forest." she glanced at the tight bundle of trees the were only a few feet away. She loved the forest so much, it fresh leafy smell, and the way the leaved left such lovely patterns on the ground. "Have fun with that." her sister snorted sarcasticly before turning away.
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by Ineedatribal » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:44 pm
.::Murphy::. wrote:Forever loved- that's what you said.
Forever loved by you and only you~
Why did it turn out a lie
Why wouldn't you tell me why?
Why did you have to say goodbye?
Why did you have to...die?Meep, a crappy poem, but I like these two as a couple..story? :3
Awww. If you made a story, I would definitely read it! <3
Inee. That would be me!
How's your day going?
Free enough?

How about now? C:
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by revenmoore » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:46 pm
Ineedaballoondog wrote:.::Murphy::. wrote:Forever loved- that's what you said.
Forever loved by you and only you~
Why did it turn out a lie
Why wouldn't you tell me why?
Why did you have to say goodbye?
Why did you have to...die?Meep, a crappy poem, but I like these two as a couple..story? :3
Awww. If you made a story, I would definitely read it! <3
~<3
Really? Well I'll work on one then. C:
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by Zeee » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:49 pm
Kitteh :3 wrote:
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Michelle && Dameon
Nobody ever told you no when you were little. So you never learned what it meant. You didn't understand what you were doing wrong. When you would hurt me and I would yell no, stop!... You just didn't get it.
But then you took it too far, Dameon. When you got mad and put your gun in my face, you knew what you were doing. There was no excuse, it had nothing to do with knowing what no meant. You knew your exact intensions. You didn't mean to pull the trigger, you sobbed. I heard you, I knew exactly what happened.
But you didn't mean any of it. You didn't confess. You took your weights and attached a chain to them. You wrapped it around my neck and legs. You took me to the river mouth and dumped my body into the rushing water.
I sunk to the bottom, but my spirit was stuck here. I'm just the mist in the rain now. I can't take care of my little sister and little brother now. They were shipped to the orphanage after I went missing. My mom killed herself. My dad left. And it's all because of you.
It happened sixteen years ago, Dameon. I haven't been found yet, and you haven't been caught yet. You've seen the shows on TV where the family doesn't hate the killer, where they forgive him as if he didn't kill their flesh and blood. But you've single-handedly ripped my family apart. We will all hate you, right down to your cold, stone heart, forever. I can assure you that.
I haven't been found yet, and you haven't been caught yet. But you
will get what you deserve.
Kitteh, this was so beautifully written. I enjoyed every second of reading it.
I wish to be like you someday~
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by TigressJaguiar » Mon Sep 26, 2011 1:14 pm
All You Need Is Love wrote:artemis5001 wrote:Please continue. It's a great start ^^
*DJ Wolfy* wrote:Continue please. It's quite interesting. ^_^
TigressJaguiar wrote:Sounds really good so far!
Thanks, all of you!
All You Need Is Love wrote:All You Need Is Love wrote:

The Porcelain Doll~~
The Child~~
The Plastic Doll
Although I am breakable, she has always loved me. She takes me out, ever so gently, and shows me to her friends. She whispers to me every night, "Good night, dolly."Whenever she plays dolls, I am a princess or a queen or something delicate and beautiful.A Year Later
There is an intruder in my peaceful kingdom, one that is winning over the child. She is not beautiful like me, with her stiff purple hair, removable accessories, and pale base color. No, I am still the most beautiful, with my real hair color and sweet face. But the child can drop the intruder and it will survive. More and more I become the damsel in distress while the bad one is the hero. And I cannot let that happen. My kingdom is in danger.The porcelain doll, Queen Beauty, watched over her poor, helpless kingdom from the new, plastic tower DivaDoll accessory pack that the child had gotten as a gift. The intruder, which had been called Diva, was the one that the castle went to.
This doll, Diva, was the reason that Beauty wasn't sitting in her rightful throne. Diva was galloping around the child's house, playing hero, while she sat, a captive, in this fake prison. Beauty wasn't allowed to go around the house anymore, not since the Child had recieved Diva.
Beauty hated Diva.
Part 2
Diva does not know that I hate her and all of her plastic... Well, her plastic world that I am a stranger in. I cannot bear to tell her how I feel, for in the end, we are both here to entertain the Child. So I treat her like a true friend. But it does not mean that we are friends, right?Beauty heaved an inner sigh as the Child dropped Diva into the plastic prison-excuse me,castle- and hurried out the door for school.
"
Hiya, Beauty! How was that game? I think it was super fun!" Diva always bombarded Beauty with improper speech and exclamations as soon as they could freely speak.
Beauty smiled. "
I always find those games a bit boring, considering that I just sit here." Diva wilted slightly, but Beauty reached out a delicate paw and stroked the plastic hair of the bright toy gently. "
But you find it fun, correct? It is not bad if you like something that I do not." She smiled a bit, and Diva nodded, her purple curls stiffly moving.
Diva looked at her own tail, adorned with a plastic purple bow that Child had attached herself. "
Why don't you ever play with us? You always stay in the castle..." She tapped the bowless tail of the porcelain doll.
"
I will break. It is my nature, but I wish I was..." Beauty stopped, realizing what she was about to say. SHe took a breath and continued. "
plastic."
What did I say to the enemy?? What will become of what little is left of my kingdom that hasn't become plastic? I do not know. But I know that now, more than ever, we are not friends.
Continue, please.
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by revenmoore » Mon Sep 26, 2011 1:34 pm
.::Murphy::. wrote:Forever loved- that's what you said.
Forever loved by you and only you~
Why did it turn out a lie
Why wouldn't you tell me why?
Why did you have to say goodbye?
Why did you have to...die?Zoey, blinked her tired, teared up eyes. Even if she wanted to she probably couldn't cry anymore tears. She wiped her tear-streaked face with one white paw. Whimpering quietly she walked away from the grave she stood by. Her beloved Spencer...
Zoey padded out to their-no her den. Quietly she curled up into a ball, wondering when she'd eaten last. Her puppies would be born soon, she needed to take care of them...
Chapter One
Zoey sighed contentedly as the sun warmed her chocolate brown fur, she stood outside her mother's den, which she would finally be leaving, her sister Nikki glared at her as she walked out of the den. "Where are you heading, loser?" she sneered at her, her blue eyes full of hatred. Zoey snorted with annoyance. "Somewhere in the forest." she glanced at the tight bundle of trees the were only a few feet away. She loved the forest so much, it fresh leafy smell, and the way the leaved left such lovely patterns on the ground. "Have fun with that." her sister snorted sarcasticly before turning away.
Added some to it. ouo
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by peter quill » Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:01 pm
All You Need Is Love wrote:All You Need Is Love wrote:All You Need Is Love wrote:

The Porcelain Doll~~
The Child~~
The Plastic Doll
Although I am breakable, she has always loved me. She takes me out, ever so gently, and shows me to her friends. She whispers to me every night, "Good night, dolly."Whenever she plays dolls, I am a princess or a queen or something delicate and beautiful.A Year Later
There is an intruder in my peaceful kingdom, one that is winning over the child. She is not beautiful like me, with her stiff purple hair, removable accessories, and pale base color. No, I am still the most beautiful, with my real hair color and sweet face. But the child can drop the intruder and it will survive. More and more I become the damsel in distress while the bad one is the hero. And I cannot let that happen. My kingdom is in danger.The porcelain doll, Queen Beauty, watched over her poor, helpless kingdom from the new, plastic tower DivaDoll accessory pack that the child had gotten as a gift. The intruder, which had been called Diva, was the one that the castle went to.
This doll, Diva, was the reason that Beauty wasn't sitting in her rightful throne. Diva was galloping around the child's house, playing hero, while she sat, a captive, in this fake prison. Beauty wasn't allowed to go around the house anymore, not since the Child had recieved Diva.
Beauty hated Diva.
Part 2
Diva does not know that I hate her and all of her plastic... Well, her plastic world that I am a stranger in. I cannot bear to tell her how I feel, for in the end, we are both here to entertain the Child. So I treat her like a true friend. But it does not mean that we are friends, right?Beauty heaved an inner sigh as the Child dropped Diva into the plastic prison-excuse me,castle- and hurried out the door for school.
"
Hiya, Beauty! How was that game? I think it was super fun!" Diva always bombarded Beauty with improper speech and exclamations as soon as they could freely speak.
Beauty smiled. "
I always find those games a bit boring, considering that I just sit here." Diva wilted slightly, but Beauty reached out a delicate paw and stroked the plastic hair of the bright toy gently. "
But you find it fun, correct? It is not bad if you like something that I do not." She smiled a bit, and Diva nodded, her purple curls stiffly moving.
Diva looked at her own tail, adorned with a plastic purple bow that Child had attached herself. "
Why don't you ever play with us? You always stay in the castle..." She tapped the bowless tail of the porcelain doll.
"
I will break. It is my nature, but I wish I was..." Beauty stopped, realizing what she was about to say. SHe took a breath and continued. "
plastic."
What did I say to the enemy?? What will become of what little is left of my kingdom that hasn't become plastic? I do not know. But I know that now, more than ever, we are not friends.
Do continue. ^_^
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