by f l i g h t. » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:55 pm
Quietpaw raced after the squirrel, but already she felt tired and weak. She was slowly gaining ground on the squirrel, but she was losing energy fast, and she didn't have a lot of energy anyway, since her last meal had been 4 days ago. Her breath was strained and fast and hoarse. Finally she just couldn't run anymore, and stumbled to a stop, breathing harshly. Her sides ached, and her ribs showed through her fur. She was starving still, and tonight she wouldn't get a meal. Would she die of starvation? Would she be a meal for another predator? Quietpaw's vision momentarily blurred, then went back to normal as she caught her breath. Weakly she stumbled along, barely managing to stay upright. She gasped, and fell to the ground. Her vision blurred with red, then everything went black. Her heart beat super-fast. ((She fainted from exhaustion, lack of food, and malnutrition.... Could someone's charrie go patrolling and find her there? That would be a big help, and it would sort of bring her into the story.... C:))

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