Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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Who's Your Favorite Character?

Amy
31
23%
Jenette
37
28%
Indah
5
4%
Rhubarb
5
4%
Misty
25
19%
Flower
12
9%
The Indians
3
2%
Suzi
10
8%
Mom
2
2%
Brent
2
2%
 
Total votes : 132

Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:51 am

Draggy Ave wrote:
Sea Fairy wrote:I totally understand Amy for being scared of disney channel and veggie tales. Disney channel is creepy, veggie tales is even creepier. :o :silent:

What happens next?


Totally agreed. But why did she have Jennete on the list???????? XD

lol XD Because she's scared of her punching and kickingness of awesomesauce doom! XD
Sea Fairy wrote:
sharpclawwarriors wrote:This is so AWESOME! :o I wish I could write like that!


I wish that too. :)

Thanks for all the compliments you guys! You're awesomeness! :D
Time to write MORE!!!















The elevator wasn't moving. It was just sitting there. Suddenly, it was going so fast that I was floating in the air and I felt like I was going to throw up. When the elevator FINALLY stopped, the doors opened and I walked out of the elevator. I looked around, and there was this strange room. It was full of many weird machines. I looked around, and I saw Misty. She was tied up on one of the machines. Suddenly, somebody grabbed me and threw me on the machine next to Misty's. They tied me up to the machine, just like MIsty was. I looked at her, and she looked at me, and she had a worried expression on her face. I had a terrified expression. I heard footsteps, and saw Leo.
Hello.
Misty rolled her eyes.
Why are you saying hello to us?!
Because that's the last word you are going to hear.
What do you mean?
Leo grinned evilly, his eyes saying "You'll see". I gulped a big gulp. This was NOT good! How had I gotten in this mess? Oh, right, ever since I made my very first 'friend', Suzi. You see why I don't like to make friends often? Leo placed a weird hat with wires connected to it onto Misty's head. Misty bit Leo's hand.
Ow!
Leo put a muzzle around Misty's mouth. He then put the helmet on her head. I looked over at her. She was looking worried. Leo smiled evilly, and then pressed a button. I looked at Misty, as electrcity came out of the helmet, and began shocking her. Misty screamed, and tried to take the helmet off, but it just made the shocking worse. When the shocking was over, Misty was staring blankly at Leo. Leo untied her and took the muzzle off. He also took the helmet off.
Go and clean the machines.
Yes, Master.
Misty walked out of the room.
What did you do to her?!
What I'll do to you-- brain wash.
I screamed as he placed the helmet on my head.
Get this thing off of me!
Leo laughed.
In your dreams!
He was inches away from pushing the button.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:58 am

Oh noes! :c
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:59 am

Draggy Ave wrote:Oh noes! :c

Ya...... I'm not sure what to write next...... :(

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Ellies » Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:54 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Draggy Ave wrote:Oh noes! :c

Ya...... I'm not sure what to write next...... :(

I soooooo scared
You said you dont know what to do next Wait how about a segestion!
Mum and Brent save amy and misty Some how....?
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Postby Socks + Lani » Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:10 pm

OMG YOU USED AWESOMESAUCE! YAAY FOR EPICNESS OF AWESOMESAUCE!
My suggestion:
Leo presses the wrong button and gives Amy mind controll and mind reading powers, then she brain tells him to un-brainwash Misty,a nd throw Rhubarb off a cliff XD (Sorry I is really violent)
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Postby Into the Sky » Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:06 am

*is frozen in shock* What's gonna happen to Amy?!
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:21 am

Awesome suggestions guys! I might just add them into my book later........ :twisted: ..... Why did I just post that face? XD













I struggled to get free, and (luckily) it turned out Leo's not very good at tying knots. I untied myself and took off my helmet. I then put the helmet on Leo, and tied him up (I am very good at tying knots). I pressed the button, and left. I met Misty in the elevator.
Misty?
MIsty didn't reply, just stared blankly.
Must clean machines.
Misty was mumbling. How could I change her back?!
Misty, LISTEN! It's me, Amy!
But Misty didn't listen. She just stared blankly.









Sorry for short entry, peoples! I am still have some writer's block. If you have any ideas, please PM me! (That way if I end up using your idea, people won't know what will happen! :D)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:58 am

Bump! D: Bump!!!!!!
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Sep 25, 2011 10:40 am

Thanks Draggy Ave! :) I'll prob write more later once I get my ideas worked up in my brain. XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Oct 01, 2011 5:35 am

OMW I'VE LIKE TOTALLY FORGOTTEN ABOUT THIS! :o I know, shocking, isn't it? ANYWAYS, since I know you people have been waiting for like FOREVER, so I shall write more.... NOW! No, wait, I'll make you wait a little bit longer.... why are you still reading this?! Read below where the story is! What, you want to finish seeing what I'm typing write now? Fine, this is what I've been waiting to tell you: I like pie. THERE?! Happy? Good. Now go and read!















Hola Misty? Wake up!
Misty still didn't move, just stared. I sighed.
I wonder what Leo is doing now since I brainwashed him and-
Wait a minute. I had brainwashed a guy. A guy with a mask. I could take off his mask and finally find out who he was. I pressed the down button on the elevator (which I was still in) and it went back down to where I last saw Leo. And there he was. Sitting on the floor, staring blankly. I walked over to him, about to take off his mask, but then stopped. I couldn't just TAKE off someone's ask. So.... I'd just order him to do it himself! Ya, that was better then me just taking it.
Leo, take off that mask.
Yes...
Leo mumbled, but I understood him. He slid off his mask, and I stared. Behind the mask was a familiar face. Very familiar. I stared.
Brent?
I whispered the words, out of fright. What had happened to him? He had wings now, and spots all over him! And he didn't have 3 tails anymore! He looked completely changed, but I knew the look on his face. It was deiffinately Brent. Suddenly, Brent somehow snapped out of being brainwashed, and he stared at me, and then looked at the mask on the floor. He grinned evilly.
So, you've figured out.
I stared.
What..... what happened to you?
When you left me and Mom, she couldn't bear it so we moved. She thought you where dead too, just like Jessy. So then when we moved out, she didn't want to take anything along with her, because it reminded her of you and Jessy. We moved to a different state, and then Suzi suddenly appeared at our house, said that she could make my life wonderful, and so I joined up with her. But, of course, I couldn't just leave Mom there alone with no children, her thinking they where all dead, so I took her with me.
And where did you take her?
I turned around, startled, and saw Jenette and Indah staring at Leo.... I mean Brent.... I mean Leo which is Brent? I don't know, it's all too confusing!
Where I always take my prisoners; to Suzi.
What?! You made our mother your PRISONER?!
Brent... I mean Leo.... I mean.... you know what I mean, smiled evilly.
Can you at least explain to me why you said your name was Leo?
I hated the name Brent, always have, so I changed it when I turned to Suzi to Leo. But Suzi wanted me to have a big fancy name so she calls me Leonardo, but everyone else calls me Leo.
And when did Suzi become the boss of you?
Leo grabbed Jenette, their eyes staring at each other's.
Nobody's the boss of me, got it?
Jenette didn't say anything, and Leo threw her on the ground.
So where is Suzi, then?
Right here.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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