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by spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:03 am
Dear Max
Yes I named my Journal Max got a problem with it? Dear Max is a story with journal entries in it also.
Comments are welcome!
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Dear Max,
Tomorrow is the first day of school, I'm going into 6th grade, I'm so excited but then again I'm afraid. What if the other kids make fun of me? I don't know what I'm going to do. Oh and here's what I look like:

Pet's Name: Silver
Well I gotta go it's 8:30pm my bedtime.
Bye Max!
~Silver
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by spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:22 am
Dear Max,
Today is the first day of school I'm so excited!
Bye Max!
~SilverI drop my pencil&my journal and I rush off to my closet. I grab a boys t-shirt and slip it over my head. I run over to my dresser and grab some jean shorts and slip them on. I race into my bathroom, brush my teeth, run back to my journal&pencil. I pick them up stuff them in my back pack, I slip my backpack over my head and run downstairs "Bye mom! Bye dad!" I say and run out the door. I race down the street and skid to a halt at the bus stop.
Oh and Max here is what my parents look like:

Pet's Name: Dad

Pet's Name: Mom
Once again, Bye Max!
~Silver
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by spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:54 am
The bus pulled up 5 minutes later, I climbed up the steps and walked down the isle. I found and empty seat, and sat down in it. After I sat down a couple other dogs walked past me. The bus door closed, and the bus started going. The bus stopped at a big fancy house. Two girls walked up the stairs, they filed down the isle. They stopped at my seat. Then one of the girls asked "Can we sit with you?" so I was polite and said "yes" they sat next to me.
Dear Max,
These girls sat next to me, they seem really nice. Then they told me they were the princesses of the king&queen! So cool right! They invited me over this afternoon I'm so excited to meet there parents!
Oh and here's what they look like:

Pet's Name: Princess Lilly

Pet's Name: Princess Puddle
They are super nice! We are at school!
Bye Max!
~SilverI shoved my Journal&Pencil in my backpack as the bus stops, and the bus driver opens the bus doors.
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by spideypuhl » Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:39 pm
Princess Lilly slid out of the seat and walked down the isle. Then Princess Puddle slid out of the seat after her sister and she walked down the isle. I sighed and slid out last I followed my new friends down the isle. We walked down the steps, and hopped off the last step. We raced to the school door, I pushed it open for the princesses. They walked through the door clearly excited. I followed them, we were in different classes though. They headed to the gym, and I headed to French class.
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