Ahzenai Fan Club, Species by Onyxwings! 8D

[Onyxeva]

I'm glad there's a mixture of feelings for Leviroth so far, unlike where usually everyone loves the Ahzenai that appears, but may not feel that 'they're the one'. It's interesting to see. :B

[Onyxeva]

You can nominate as many woo's as you want. xD

[tolkien quitting]

I changed my username from EpicBlueWolf to Dextelle 8D

[Onyxeva]

o uo-b I figured, I just haven't gotten around to updating everything yet. xD

[meveh]

OH MY.

Im absolutely in love with Leviroth's intro, it's so detailed and very well-written. ;u; If you could nominate Ahz Intro's, that'd be my top pick for sure xD However, I don't think I'll woo him. He wouldn't be interested in my Ahz. *Looks over at Onidoron* xD

His personality is much different than I've ever seen in Ahzen, It'll be very interesting to see who he picks. o uo

[Onyxeva]

Right? 8D I'm excited to have different flavors of writing styles for the intro stories. <3 Muku is amazing.

[Shiko Hayashi]

LIEK OMG I LUV AHZENAI.<3
Username: Wolf-chan
Do you own any Ahzenai?
Yes, Rutoriel.

I was wondering, is anyone here willing to give me some feedback on my woo for Levorith? I would really appreciate it.

[Sabatea]

LIEK OMG I LUV AHZENAI.<3
Username: Wolf-chan
Do you own any Ahzenai?
Yes, Rutoriel.

I was wondering, is anyone here willing to give me some feedback on my woo for Levorith? I would really appreciate it.

I read your woo and I think it was very good, much better than mine XD I liked how you used descriptive words and went form your Ahzenai's point of view

[Livalathia]

LIEK OMG I LUV AHZENAI.<3
Username:
.:Sweet-Silver:.
Do you own any Ahzenai?:
Yup :] Zeoryler and Solaris

[meveh]

LIEK OMG I LUV AHZENAI.<3
Username: Wolf-chan
Do you own any Ahzenai?
Yes, Rutoriel.

I was wondering, is anyone here willing to give me some feedback on my woo for Levorith? I would really appreciate it.

I, personally, adored your woo. I loved the emotion that Rutoriel showed throughout the whole story. <3 My only suggestion, though it's minor and probably wouldn't have been noticed, is that in the 7th paragraph you repeat yourself with:

"Oh wait." She snapped. "Never mind." She snapped.

Other than that, it's absolutely lovely. <3