Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

[no~body]

The hitchhiker Andy picked up on that July afternoon was one of the stranger people he had met. She had, after warm thanks for stopping, and a moment or two of silence, proclaimed herself to be able to grant a wish. The conjuration she had performed in support of this was quite remarkable- once the sound of the cymbal had stopped ringing in Andy’s head, he was quite impressed.

Now Andy, good Christian that he was, was always of the opinion that you should do a good deed for its own sake, and not for material reward. He lightly waved away the images of wealth or power that the girl suggested. “My one wish, young lady, is to get you to where you’re headed!”.

The girl’s face contorted with fear as darkness fell outside.

I saw that on like some of the first 50 pages .3.
And aren't you the same person who posten it...?

[Chara Dreemurr]

The hitchhiker Andy picked up on that July afternoon was one of the stranger people he had met. She had, after warm thanks for stopping, and a moment or two of silence, proclaimed herself to be able to grant a wish. The conjuration she had performed in support of this was quite remarkable- once the sound of the cymbal had stopped ringing in Andy’s head, he was quite impressed.

Now Andy, good Christian that he was, was always of the opinion that you should do a good deed for its own sake, and not for material reward. He lightly waved away the images of wealth or power that the girl suggested. “My one wish, young lady, is to get you to where you’re headed!”.

The girl’s face contorted with fear as darkness fell outside.

I read this one so many times, and I still don't get it.

[KumyaKuma]

Sorry but you have Gilbert in your signature and I'm a fan on Hetalia (but not one of those squeely fangirls)

I think the girl is some sort of witch or sorceress and she was going to some evil place and the guy wished that thy would go their so he'll probally get hurt or killed or something bad happens to him or both of them.

[Fuko-Chan!]

oh really i didnt know i had already posted it sorry I just really like it

[Daisy May]

oh really i didnt know i had already posted it sorry I just really like it

Could you tell me what it means then?

[Fuko-Chan!]

She was evil and either she was going to die and goto hell or go somewhere very very bad at least thats what I think it means

[Chara Dreemurr]

Her destination is a bad one then?

[Fuko-Chan!]

yes very bad

[Daluniak]

COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!

[wittebane]

Why not, I think I"ll try this. XD (Note: I don't write many scary stories, so I'm very noobish.)

The scene of death wasn't the overused and cliche haunted warehouse, or a spooky forest. It wasn't even remotely scary. At first glance, that is. The place was a little cottage on the east side of town, well kept and surrounded by sweet smelling flowers. But to the beast inside, nothing was more sweet smelling than spilled blood. The creature was called Gauze in the tales of the town, which very few people actually believed.
He had the form of a white wolf, and wolves could be scary enough on their own without this one's demonic attributes. The pupil of its left eye was a perfect 'x' surrounded by pure white, no hint of brown or even blue. The other was a swirl shape, with no color, as well. A scar mimicking that of Frankenstein rested above the eye with the 'x'. Its flesh was rotting away, leaving behind bare spots that showed bone or ligaments. On the right side of its skull, all was missing except for its brain, which showed through the gaping hole. Such a sight should only exist in nightmares.
He never bled, never howled to the moon, for he was Gauze, demon of Norton.

Is that decent? It's the first paragraph. I need to know if it's any good before I continue, so I can improve. ^-^