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^^ Whisper ^^ by Minirose96

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^^ Whisper ^^

Postby Minirose96 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:19 pm

This is a work in progress, but I finished the lines (Hopefully XD)
I wanted to ask if this looks correct for wolf pasturing.
Any advice, or criticism would be greatly appreciated.

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Okay, how does the red part look? Does that seem for anatomically correct?

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Okay, Mostly, it's been the same in the last few sketches. the main changes have been to the back legs. Can I get some opinions on them? I'm sorry if it's hard to see, but which color looks better, the red, green, or blue? Again, sorry if it's kind of blurry


I finally finished!!!!! I am so happy! ^^

This is my first drawing of my fursona without using someone else's lineart ^^
Last edited by Minirose96 on Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:55 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: W.I.P

Postby Narwhal_1022 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:26 pm

This is very good! :D
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Re: W.I.P

Postby Minirose96 » Tue Sep 13, 2011 7:45 am

Thank you ^^ Any other comments, or criticism before I continue?

Anything you have to say would be incredibly useful.
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Re: W.I.P

Postby summer monday » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:05 am

the anatomy's just a tad off -

I could redline it, if you want, but here's a run down:

1. the eye, mouth, ears, and muzzle are a bit off
2. the neck curves too quickly; the slope should be softer
3. the legs are a bit different than shown

but this is really, really adorable <3
great job! C:
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Re: W.I.P

Postby ohitika » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:09 am

I think this is great but you have got the legs and front legs switched up. The back legs should be like the arms should be like the legs
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Re: W.I.P

Postby Minirose96 » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:16 am

Wintergreendaydreams: can you tell me exactly what's off about the muzzle and ears, so I can fix them please. I know the nose and eyes are off, those were only placed for reference.

and Wolfclan, thank you, I'll fix the legs XD
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Re: W.I.P

Postby summer monday » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:24 am

I can't quite explain it D:
I would, but
uh

you could either look at a reference - just google "wolf profile"
or, like I said, I could redline this for you
either way works~
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Re: W.I.P

Postby ~SNCastiel<3~ » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:27 am

the shoulder shouldnt be that low... try using this as a ref ^^ viewtopic.php?t=633712 (now even my anatomy is pretty bad but it may help you out a bit ^^)
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Postby Minirose96 » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:28 am

I thought so XD I'm working on the shoulder now XD thank you ^^
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Postby ~SNCastiel<3~ » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:35 am

Mosseh*Loves*No*Lies wrote:I thought so XD I'm working on the shoulder now XD thank you ^^


honest mistake ^^ and your welcome! ;)
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