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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Fuko-Chan! » Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:25 am

yeah that happened after someone mentioned it
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Villalobos » Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:28 am

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Awesome story XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dinofan247 » Sun Sep 04, 2011 8:09 am

(thanks :) )
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby lavender-riots » Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:24 pm

James Green was small to the point of being scrawny. He had scraggly brown hair that always fell into his eyes and was never well-cut. He always wore long-sleeved shirts and jeans, no matter what the weather was. James was abused by his family and by his schoolmates.
One day, James, not wanting to have his head pounded to a pulp before he got home, decided to walk through one of the back alleys. He purposefully chose an alley that was gated shut. This alley was also darker than the others. James had planned on using the shadows to hide in; he hadn't planned on things hiding in those same shadows. As he walked, James kept glancing back. He swore he could hear someone following him, but there was no one. Suddenly, he was jerked to a stop. Someone was holding on to his backpack. "Let go," he said, turning around. But there was no living person in sight. Instead, James found himself staring into the half-rotted face of one of his schoolmates.
"Why?" the dead boy asked. "Why should I, runt?" He absently plucked at an oozing sore on the side of his face as he spoke. He leaned closer to James. "Why?" he repeated.
James felt something fall onto his hand. He looked down. A maggot. James slipped out of his backpack and began running. The next thing he knew, he was hanging upside down by his ankle. The dead boy walked out from the shadows, holding James's backpack. "I think you left something, runt," he said. He placed the pack directly below James, who could feel the rope cutting through his skin. He felt something crawling on his arm and looked. A small, spider-like creature was crawling toward his face. He tried to fling it off, but it jumped to his cheek. It began crawling toward his mouth. Screaming, James tried to brush it off. He heard something splatter against the asphalt beneath him and looked down. The creature had fallen, but it was alive. James began screaming again. This time, the creature leapt straight for James's mouth. He felt it crawl down his throat and into his stomach.
"Now, you'll be just like us," the dead boy said, cutting James from the rope. James picked up his backpack and ran. But the alley didn't seem to end. It just grew longer the harder he ran. He could feel the thing moving inside him. James collapsed to his knees as the creature finished it's work.
Slowly, James rose to his feet. He could feel his flesh rotting as he moved, but that was okay. Nothing mattered now but the next victim.

Completely random story, probably not that great. Just came up with it on the spot. I have a better story that I'm writing on paper, but it's a little gory and violent to be posted here...Anyway, tell me what you think.
If I need to change any of the details, tell me and I will.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Lizzi Noelliz » Sun Sep 04, 2011 8:02 pm

It's a good story but kind of random. It would be nice to have some back story or something.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby lavender-riots » Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:52 pm

Yeah. That takes time to come up with. This was the first idea that popped into my mind. I'll have a backstory within a month.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Thu Sep 08, 2011 4:44 pm

I liked it :D :thumbup:
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:49 pm

Does anyone know about Cry baby lane?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~Rain&Rune~ » Fri Sep 09, 2011 3:37 am

I learned this one at my summer camp

MURDERERS HAVE TOUNGES TOO
there was a little girl named emily.Emilys parents decided that she was old enough to stay home alone without a babysitter.They put all the numbers that shed need on the fridge.Then they told her to go to sleep by 10:00 and left.
So emily watched tv until 10:00.She decided she was tired and went to bed.Her dog max liked to sleep under her bed.So emily got in bed said goodnight to max and drifted off.She woke up to the sound of dripping water.She looked at her clock and saw that it was only 10:30.She wondered if her parets were already home.So se went all over the house.No one was home but her.She decided that her parents probably left a faucet on.So she went to the bathroom.Nothing was dripping but she tightened it anyways.She went back to her bed and layed down.Drip,drip,drip.She got up and went downstairs to her kitchen.She tightened the faucets and went up to bed.She layed down and heard drip,drip,drip.She got scared by now and put her hand under her bed.Max licked her fingers and she felt comforted.She decided to be brave and go retighten everything.She tightened the kitchen faucet,and the 1st floors sink and shower.Then she tightened the sink on the 2nd floor.She turned and still heard ,drip,drip,drip.She was shaking in terror and opened the curtain to the shower.There was her poor dog,Max his throat slit,hanging upside down by his tail.Blood dripping down.Drip,Drip,Drip.She screamed and looked at the wall of the shower.Written in blood was the sentence "Murderers have tongues too."

If you didnt understand ill explain;the sentence murderers have tongues too,the murderer wrote that because when emily put her hand under the bed HE licked her hand.Not max.:D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~Rain&Rune~ » Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:01 am

Okay heres another that i also learned at sunshine camp.If you want to comment on either of my stories please pm me because thats the only way i will respond.

HIDE AND SEEK
there was an 8 year old named sally and she had a brother named Tom.They lived near a forest,In the forest there was a lake.The reeds near the lake were tall and you could easily hide there without being seen.Tom knew about this place but sally didnt.So tom was excited and asked Sally if she'd play hide and seek with him.She agreed and began to count she peeked and saw tom run towards the woods.She covered her eyes again and continued to count.As she reached 50 she opened her eyes and shouted "Here i come!" She ran towards the woods.As she went into it she looked everywhere.He must be in deeper she thought and ran and ran and ran.Until she came to the lake.She was crawling through the reeds.When she looked up and saw a man wearing all black.He was holding a chainsaw and a bag.In the bag was a boy without a head.She saw that the body was wearing a cardinals sweatshirt.Just like the one tom wore.She realized that is tom and ran towards the woods.When she got about halfway there she saw a tree with something attached to it.She passed it and saw that the thing was Toms head!!There was a note attached to the tree it read "Why didnt you find me?"

She screamed and heard the roar of a chainsaw.She ran fast until she reaced her house.She was in shock when she found her mother.She pointed towards the woods frantically."Wheres tom?" her mother asked her.Sally pointed towards the woods.

Three days later
Sally was sitting in a chair in a rubber room."Sally where is Tom?" Her mother asked for the 300th time
Sally's face turned white and then she smiled and sang "Ill never tell,Ill never tell."Her mom assumed that sally had done something to him and locked her in a mental asylum.She spent the rest of her life in that rubber room.Everytime someone asked where tom was she'd smile and say "Ill never tellllll,Ill never tellll"When she died they buried her next to the lake.People say you still hear her singing "Ill never tell,Ill never tell" And her ghost haunts the lake frantic to find her brothers murderer.Shell also sing "I never tollllddd,I never tollld" and occasionally "Where are you tomm"
I am leaving CS. It is starting to not interest me and many of my RPs are getting out of hand. Farewell Chicken Smoothie!

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