DJ Savvy's Writing Workshop! ~Take a peek~

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DJ Savvy's Writing Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby DJ Savvy » Sun Aug 21, 2011 10:47 am

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to My Writing Workshop!!!! This is I share my short stories, long stories, journal, poems, and quotes.


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Table of Contents:
Icons~4th Post
Short Story Ideas~Fifth Post
Poem Fails~ 6th Post
Song of the Day~ Seventh Post

My Fav Quotes~9th Post
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Re: <3's Poem Corner! (Please look!)

Postby fizzyizzie » Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:56 pm

You are actually really good at poems! :D
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Re: <3's Poem Corner! (Please look!)

Postby Flutey » Mon Sep 05, 2011 1:36 pm

Nice poems! :mrgreen:
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Re: DJ Savvy's Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby DJ Savvy » Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:23 am

LOL RANDOM ICONS!


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Re: DJ Savvy's Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby DJ Savvy » Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:25 am

Short Story Ideas
Crackled Forest -A story about a forest that is cracked and ruined. Characters would be CS pets.

Erased- A story about a young girl who finds a pencil that can erase anything from memories to people.

We're All Mad Here- A twisted version of Alice in Wonderland. (Tim Burton style.)

Art in Time- A story about Vampiric's art if it's ok with him.

Flipflops- A girl who lives in Japan who think she's living the high life until the 2011 March Earthquake/Hurricane/Tsunami leaves her on the streets.

The Show Goes On- A story about a young adult who has a son, and then weeks later her husband boyfriend/fiance dies.

Looney Looney Looney TUNES! is currently being written by me


(( If you guys noticed, I quit Moonlight's Path, and I may write it again!))
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Re: DJ Savvy's Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby DJ Savvy » Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:26 am

My Failed Poems!




I'm bringing hot Back! (Sing along to the tune of Sexy Back)

I'm bringing hot back
Tell em all they don't got swag
Yeah I'm bringing hot back
I got it all in the bag
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Re: DJ Savvy's Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby DJ Savvy » Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:55 am

SONG OF THE DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All I do is Win!

Here is the song. I chose it because All I do is win win win win win, no matter what what what what!
All I Do is win win win no matter what
got money on mind can never get enought
and everytime I step up in the building
everybody hands go up
and they stay there
and they say yeah
and they stay there
Up down, up down,up down
cause all I do is win win win
and if you goin’ in put your hands in the air..
make them stay there
[Ludacris]
Ludacris goin in on the verse
cause I never been defeated and I won’t stop now
keep your hands up put em in the sky for the homies that didn’t make it and the folks locked down
I never went no where
they saying Luda’s back
blame it on that conjure
the hood call it Ludayac
and I’m on this foolish track so I spit my foolish flows
my hands go up and down like strippers booty’s go
my verses still be serving, tight like a million virgins
last time on a Khaled remix now I’m on the original version
aint never count me out
y’all better count me in
got 20 bank accounts, accountants count me in
make millions every year, the souths champion
cause all I do, all I, all I, all I
all I do is…

[Chorus]

[Rick Ross]
Swerving in my Lolo,
head on the swivel
you know serving me’s a no no
clean as a whistle as I pull out in my Rolls Royce
yellow bone passenger they see it, they say oh boy!
tell Khaled back it up, my n****** call me Loco
thats for armed trafficking, don’t make me pull that fo-fo
ask you what you laughing at
represent that mud life
dirty money b-tch you better get your mud right
we come together holding hands and holla thug life
we are strapped in all black
it’s like thug life
(all we do is win)
you riding the what
we riding the night
you riding with me cause you wasn’t riding right
ROSS…

[Chorus]

[Snoop Dogg]
heat in the Kitchen, pot on the stove
water getting boiled, dope getting sold
snoopy in the hoopty, system overload
I’ve been running this rap game since I was 20 years old
I hung with the worst of them
bust till I burst on em
floss em up, toss em up, hardaway, boss em up
pardon me I bossing the pressure up, bless ya bruh
don’t wanna mess with us
we like the U in the 80’s
back to back set a trap
hit the lick, hit it back
hit the trick, jump the track
b-tch I want my money back
time and time again while I’m sitting on this gin
Al Davis said it best, just win baby win
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Re: DJ Savvy's Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby fizzyizzie » Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:57 am

I love your Alice in Wonderland idea! That sounds awesome!
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Re: DJ Savvy's Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby DJ Savvy » Sat Sep 10, 2011 10:23 am

These are my favorite quotes:
You and I could be like Sonny and Cher,Honey and Bears,Aladdin and Jasmine,So let's make it happen! -T-Shirt from J.R Aquino


Behind the scenes she means the world to me
But behind the scenes, she means the world to me, I wanna tell her that she's beautiful and show her that she's loved hold her hand when she's scared tell her how much I care! -Nigahiga and KevJumba "Nice Guys"

I couldn't find any truth in your lies!~ Mumford and Sons

Many friends walk in and out of your life, but real friends will leave foot steps in your heart.
~Elanor Roosevelt

You never know a woman under pressure until you see her in hot water.
~Elanor Roosevelt

Whenever you have to try to fit in, it's a sign you're trying to be with the wrong people.
~Kathy Buckley

A great pleasure in life is doing things people say you can't do.
~Fortune Cookie

Shoot for the moon, because if you miss you'll land among the stars.
~Cammi Granato

Don't tell me to reach for the stars when there are footsteps on the moon!
~Random Icon?

It's not about the money, money, money We don't need your money, money, money We just wanna make the world dance, Forget about the price tag
~Jessie J

Music can change the world because it can change people.
~Bono

One good thing about music is when it hits you, you feel no pain.
~Bob Marley

Fine, you'll turn out fine... but you gotta keep your head up, and you can let your hair down!
~Andy Grammer

The way you walk, way you talk, way you say my name; it's beautiful, wonderful, don't ever you change.
~Taylor Swift

A single friend can be my garden... a single friend, my world.
~Leo Buscagilia

A friend is one who knows you and loves you just the same.
~Elbert Hubbart

Somethin'
We
Asians
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~Support Asians! WE rock!
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Re: DJ Savvy's Writing Workshop! ~Take a peek~

Postby DJ Savvy » Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:37 am

MY TRAVEL PLANS


When I grow up, I want to be a person that goes all around the world and writes all about the places.
Here is how'd I go:
From the US-To Canada-To South Africa-To Brazil-To Japan-To Australia-To France-Back home to publish the book!

How much would it cost do you think for each country, if I stayed two weeks in each+Airfare? Maybe like $2,000 per country?
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