Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Villalobos » Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:27 am

creepy but not very scary
User avatar
Villalobos
 
Posts: 12996
Joined: Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dinofan247 » Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:46 am

ilovefreddy wrote:The camping trip
me and my friends were already there it was dark now and everyone was around the camp fire there was me,brandon,terisa,violet,bob(its a girl),and two other guys. We of course told scary stories we decided to go to the shore we started heading that way when we saw a light we freaked out and hid.Pretty soon we all saw a man with a shovel walking down a path we forgot bout hiding and ran after we saw the shovel we took off runing full speed we got in the rv and talked bout it then heard a weird scratching noise. we looked out the window and saw the guy again but this time was carying a garbage bag. Me,bob,&violet were the only ones who were worried we decided to sneak out we of course waited and went in the direction we saw him go pretty soon we heard a noise behind us we grabed a huge stick and hid behind a tree. When we all of a sudden saw brandon come out of course violet freaked and hit him over the head. We just bout to help him when we saw the light again but behind us.............
(i finish it lol)
they turned around and saw the man they creamed as they saw blood on him they ran but got lost they were on the edge of a cliff when the man hit bob & violet they fell down the cliff with a splash i fell but caught some roots that were on the edge. I hung onto the roots for dear life the guy raised his shovel and hit the root then.......
LEAVING CHICKEN SMOOTHIE
User avatar
dinofan247
 
Posts: 3460
Joined: Thu Mar 17, 2011 4:52 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Villalobos » Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:48 am

finish it... its starting to get good
User avatar
Villalobos
 
Posts: 12996
Joined: Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Distant_Hybrid » Sat Sep 03, 2011 11:25 am

There Once Was A Little Boy Named Ben. Ben Had A Huge Imagination and Lied All The Time. One Night, Ben Went To Sleep, Forgetting To Turn The Sink Off. His Friend, Dakota, Heard The Water And Woke Up. Dakota Checked Every Source Of Water In The House, But He Found Nothing, And Went Back To Sleep. The Next Morning, Ben Knocked On Dakota's Door, And Asked To Play. "Okay." Dakota Said Casually. They Strode Outside And Got On Their Bikes. Riding Down The Sidewalk, Ben Bragged About His Dad Taking His Training Wheels Off, And Slowly Veered Off Into The Street, Falling. A Semi Truck Came Thundering Down The Road, Not Seeing Ben. Dakota Threw Down His Bike And Pushed Ben To Safety, Getting Hit. Dakota's Lifeless Body Lay In The Road. Ben Forgot About His Bike And Ran To Dakota's House, Knocking On The Door. Ben Had Never Met Dakota's Dad, And Was Suprised To See Him. Ben Told The Man What Happened. "Dakota?" The Man Said Curiously. "You Must Have The Wrong House, I'm Not Even Married." Ben Was Shocked, And Ran Back To Where The Accident Took Place. Dakota's Body Wasn't There, Only A Letter. Scribbled In Childish Handwriting, Was: 'Ben, Go To The Library, You'll Find Everything You Need To Know.' Ben Went To The Library, Right Down The Street, And Asked The Lady At The Desk About Dakota Huffman. The Woman Blinked. "Dakota Huffman Was A 7 Year Old Who Died 13 Years Ago Saving His Dad From Being Shot." She Told Him. Ben Soaked Up All The Information He Could, And Walked Out Slowly. "Thanks." He Said Quietly, Walking Out. When He Passed The Place Where Dakota Got Hit, There Was A Letter That Said: 'See You Soon.'
I've decided to quit CS :c It was a hard choice, but I really need to. I haven't been on in forever... And yeah. Bye everyone. Thank you SO much for giving me an amazing time. To contact me, please PM my brother, Gravity Falls.
User avatar
Distant_Hybrid
 
Posts: 3838
Joined: Sun Jun 05, 2011 6:39 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Villalobos » Sat Sep 03, 2011 11:32 am

i love this story ^^
User avatar
Villalobos
 
Posts: 12996
Joined: Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Remaskis » Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:10 pm

Any more cit about my story? I want to know if I told it right. (P.S I was on Ipod when I told it. Please teel me if there was and mistakes.)
Tumblr and Homestuck have eaten my brain.
User avatar
Remaskis
 
Posts: 2412
Joined: Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:58 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Fuko-Chan! » Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:24 pm

look up the story Snow on Mt Silver its really good i would post it but it has cuss words and would take up an entire 1 and a quarter pages 0_0
Image
User avatar
Fuko-Chan!
 
Posts: 638
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 2:20 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Sat Sep 03, 2011 1:03 pm

I just looked up Easter Egg: Snow on Mt. Silver too. It's a good story! It's not the 'scary' type of video game story, though. More of an 'interesting' one. Here's the link if anyone wants to read it. It has swearing in it, though.
Easter Egg: Snow on Mt. Silver
x
x
x
x
x
x
x
x
x
x
Image
x
characters fursona


Image
hi I'm ebony, I love spooky stuff & plants
mostly active on dA and TH
User avatar
Jinx.
 
Posts: 5433
Joined: Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:28 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Mayiamaru » Sat Sep 03, 2011 2:58 pm

I got this from a book and just felt like sharing it. I can't remember it perfectly, but I think it went a little something like this.

.:Babysitter:.


Anna was a sixteen year old girl, baby sitting for three children on a foggy, Autumn's night. She sat in the living room, watching television with the three children she was watching. Nine year old Sasha, four year old Carlen and one year old Max. It seemed to be a normal night, the four peacefully watching television, until the phone rang. Picking up the phone at 11:00 PM, Sasha could only hear a hard breathing. Puzzled, Sasha handed the phone to Anna, watching her with a clueless expression. The second Anna had said a simple hello, a voice called out to her.

"One hour."

The voice was deep, kind, but eerie. Before Anna could even breath, they had hung up on her. Anna was confused, looking at the kids who were all looking at her. "Are you guys expecting anyone?" She asked, looking down at their innocent little faces. Each shook their heads. The voice was masculine, but it sounded nothing like their father. It was strange... She simply assumed that it was a wrong number. No big deal, right?... She tried to call them back, but she would never get an answer every time she would try and call back... No big deal... Not like anything bad was going to happen, right?

Wrong...

Half an hour later, the phone rang again. Anna was the one that picked it up this time. "Half an hour more." The same voice... Anna was getting worried, and of course, before she could say anything, they had hung up. At this time, she had put the kids to bed. She was very worried, so she had called the police, asking them to trace the call. They traced it, having to take ten minutes to do so, and immediately called Anna back... but before they could reach her, the line had been busy... Busy with another call.

The phone rang where Anna was as she patiently waited by the phone. The second it rang, she picked it up and said, "Did you find it?" That evil voice came out to her again... "Twenty minutes...." Anna's eyes widened, but quickly, she said, "Who is this?" The phone hung up that second, then rang again. Picking up the phone again, Anna flinched.

"Take the kids and stay inside!"

It sounded differently when the police spoke to her, so she said yes and hung up the phone, trotting up the stairs... She had forgotten to put the receiver back properly... The Police didn't call again.

Anne went up the stairs to get the kids, getting to Carlen and Max, but when she got to Sasha... her neck had been slit open. The sound of a police siren was outside, a bullhorn blazing...

"Get out of the house!! Miss Anna! The call! It was coming from inside!"

Anna was terrified, and before she could run, she was stabbed from behind, Carlen killed and Max clutched close to Anna's chest. The police were able to get in on time to save the baby and arrest the murderer, but... Anna had died from blood loss, the baby crying nonstop every night on this day.
Click the pic to go to my Tumblr (。◕ω◕)
Image
Also got an art blog and offer commissions
User avatar
Mayiamaru
 
Posts: 13268
Joined: Mon May 11, 2009 6:58 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Villalobos » Sat Sep 03, 2011 3:20 pm

i heard that one before
User avatar
Villalobos
 
Posts: 12996
Joined: Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests