by Oofay » Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:35 am
Now I'm gonna have that song stuck in my head. D': He...she?...looks so glum. Reminds me of Eeyore. <3
Since you said critique is appreciated, I think if you want it to look more like it's underwater, you should add some greenish highlights and shadows to it that are a similar colour to the water, instead of only using grey tones. See how in the ref it's underbelly and tail and arms (fins? flippers?) almost look like they have a greenish tint?
I hope you're gonna do more in this series. ^.^
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by Gatanitazul » Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:59 am
Oofay > Yeah, I know exactly what you mean [about the greenish]. I had originally had it like that, but then my computer crashed, and I had to start from scratch. But I'll probably end up editing it and putting the greenish tones/highlights/shadows into it. Thank you for the critique, it is very helpful :D
I will almost definitely do more in this series, so be alert! XD
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by evol » Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:06 pm
Oh barbara manatee, you are the one for me! Sent from straight above, you are the one I <3
Can't believe I still remember that xD Awesome manatee! *pokes manatee's tummy*
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by Ulysses » Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:17 am
Manatees! The squishy sea dogs with the cute and wrinkly faces that don't get nearly enough love?! Thank you so much for making this!! Amazing art!! Ohmagawsh it's so SQEESHY!!

I keep six honest serving-men
(They taught me all I knew);
Their names are What and Were and When
And How and Why and Who.
I send them over land and sea,
I send them east and west;
And after they have worked for me,
I give them all a rest.
I let them rest from nine till five,
For I am busy then,
As well as breakfast, lunch, and tea,
For they are hungry men.
But different folk have different views;
I know a person small~
She keeps ten million serving-men,
Who get no rest at all!
She sends 'em abroad on her own affairs,
From the second she opens her eyes
One million Hows, two million Wheres,
And seven million Whys!
-Rudyard Kipling
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by Klea » Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:43 am
Wow you draw great!
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