Mountain Ranches RP V2 (Accepting new members!)

[Lilly~]

Rain walked around tired then yelled "BLU WHERE ARE YOU".

[borneofash]

(Blu, you have one warning)

[Lilly~]

Blu looked around then whimpered for Her own owner who died in the earthquake

((No fair))

[borneofash]

(You need correct puntiation)

[Lilly~]

Human Forum
Name: Rain
Gender:Female
Age: 9
Crush:none
GF/BF:none
Husband/Wife:none
Any pets:Blu ((Blu got loose and ran away from Rain because Rain ran away from home))
Where you work:none
Personality:Shy and kind
Kids:none
Other:She ran away with Blu, but Blu got loose and ran away. So now rain is looking for Blu
Picture: She has blond hair, and beautiful green eyes, she wears shorts and a pink shirt with the picture of Blu
((Is this better??))

[borneofash]

Rain walked around tired then yelled "BLU WHERE ARE YOU".

(HERE. You need puntionation HERE. And I don't like your Ebony part of the form, erase that)

[Lilly~]

Rain walked around coming up to the barn

((Sorry sorry dont need to scream.))

[borneofash]

(Sorry, I think I'm....hitting something in my milestone book. Ive been getting growly latly)
Milo whinned seeing the girl. "Oh gosh, another person."

[Lilly~]

Rainlooked around the yelled for Blu again

Blu heard her owner then barked

[borneofash]

Ebony looked over and saw the girl. "Hey. Are you lost?" Ebony yelled.