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Neglected by ryutaroulover

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Neglected

Postby ryutaroulover » Thu Jul 28, 2011 2:06 am

This is.. or is going to be the cover for my new comic. It is a work in progress and I am horrible at drawing wolves so any crit would be appreciated.
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Re: Neglected

Postby Dylan Klebold » Thu Jul 28, 2011 2:19 pm

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Re: Neglected

Postby mrose » Thu Jul 28, 2011 2:20 pm

The two on the sides are fine,but the wolf in the middle either resembles a Pomeranian dog or a alien.
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Re: Neglected

Postby ryutaroulover » Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:55 pm

Thanks for the imput
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Re: Neglected

Postby ryutaroulover » Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:36 pm

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Re: Neglected

Postby Kamino » Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:56 pm

It looks just fine to me~=)
Good luck with your comic!o3o

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Re: Neglected

Postby ryutaroulover » Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:03 pm

Thank Q
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Re: Neglected

Postby profilegone » Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:24 pm

I think the wolves look fine. Just that, the ones one the sides look like they have cat noses.
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Re: Neglected

Postby ryutaroulover » Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:35 pm

I saw that awhile ago i just needed to see where there noses would go . I fixed the nose of the one in the middle
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