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Just one teensy problem, she looked back. by Marmoset

Artist Marmoset [gallery]
Time spent 54 minutes
Drawing sessions 1
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Just one teensy problem, she looked back.

Postby Marmoset » Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:30 pm

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Re: Just one teensy problem, she looked back.

Postby woofers. » Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:17 am

Great picture...But I don't think it's worth Intermediate YET

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Re: Just one teensy problem, she looked back.

Postby sky-lynx » Fri Aug 12, 2011 1:43 am

It's a very nice picture. ^^

I think an idea to improve this picture, is to add more of a background. The current one is fine, but it's simple.
Since the wolf is already very simple, you could put a little more detail into the background.
Also, for the wolf, instead of literally drawing the picture, use the tool where it makes the lines curvy/straight.
It'll give the wolf a more clean, elegant effect to it.

I hope this helps!! But all in all, it is a great picture. ^^
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