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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby kimmy1479 » Thu Aug 04, 2011 10:57 am

MORE! Haha! That reminds me of an episode of Psych!
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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby Mirry » Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:23 pm

This is very well done! I love the title, and the story is great, too! Keep up the good work!
And... Write more? *she said hopefully*
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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby LiccleLimee » Fri Aug 05, 2011 2:34 am

(Tehe, thank youu.)

Well, first off, Mr.Tan was overly friendly. He walked over to me when I was sitting down next to Sarah, and started asking me a lot of questions.
"Why hello there, newcomer. Name? Age?" He asked, while he bent his legs so he could get to the low chair I was sitting on.
"I'm Aubrey, Aubrey Jenkins, and I'm-"
"Aha, of course I know your age already, yes. Hmm, so do you fancy anyone yet? Ah, I can tell you do. All girls your age fancy someone. So who is it? Hmm? Why don't you just admit it to me so we can pair you up together?"
I blinked at him then quickly looked at James to see if he was looking at me or not. Mr.Tan took that SO the wrong way.
"Ah, I see what's going on here. You're madly in love with James! Sweet love, oh sweet love." He sang softly, but loud enough for everyone to hear as he sprung around the room rhythmically. Everyone but me and James started laughing. Even Madison, but hers was a spiteful laugh.
I blinked once more and squeaked, "What? No!" but this made the class laugh more. James looked like he was dying in his seat, but I was dying even more. I kept saying 'I don't' but no one was listening and they couldn't hear me anyway over the giggles and snickers.

So I stood up and shouted. I shouted something really unexpected. "SHUT UP!"
I loved that moment. It was like, amazing. I was just standing up, I couldn't control anyone's laughter, and then I scream shut up and everyone does just that, they shut up and stare at me, wide mouthed. I look around at all the students who are looking straight back at me, while I breathe heavily and my face goes from the beetroot red it once was, down to my normal colour.
Then I said quite simply, AND quite smug, "I do not have a crush on James." and sat down.
Mr.Tan was about to open his mouth and say something but all of a sudden the bell went. I didn't quite understand this because it was only about quarter of an hour into the lesson, but I stood up anyway, and filed out with the rest of the class. Mr.Tan followed us, and some of the pupils muttered 'fire' between themselves.
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I'M A HIPPIE IN LOVE WITH GEORGE HARRISON, GREEN TEA AND VINYL RECORDS
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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby LiccleLimee » Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:14 am

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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby kimmy1479 » Fri Aug 05, 2011 5:46 am

Haha!!! FUNNY!!!! I <3 Mr.Tan! He is my favorite!!! :)
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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby 1020plinky » Fri Aug 05, 2011 6:15 am

Please write more I love this story!!!! :D :lol: :D :lol:
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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby Soruc » Fri Aug 05, 2011 6:24 am

Epic entry, I laughed through it all. xD
"Why do you look so sad?" "I'm thinking about the economy"


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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby Mirry » Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:18 pm

I hope this long absence means that you're writing more? 'Cuz I really like this story!!
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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby LiccleLimee » Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:19 am

As I heard the rumour of the fire, I didn't believe it one bit - what are the chances of a real fire happening on the day of my arrival? It was probably just someone who has pulled it, or a test. But no, when we walked outside I saw a long line of smoke slicing upwards through the grey, dismal clouds. Then all of a sudden, fire could be seen. A burst of smoke puffed out of a shattered window at the bottom, and few flames licked at the wooden frame before they spread into one big line of fire that grew bigger and bigger and climbed to the next window above.
I started panicking. A lot of panicking. I swallowed over and over as my eyes retraced the steps of the fire, my legs shaking. I went into total panic mode and spun around, ready to run away, right to the back of the large, dull playground. But I bumped into James.
James steadied me up, smiling, and was about to say something when Madison walked over and started yelling abuse at me about bumping into her boyfriend and all this rubbish. I wasn't taking any of it in - I was too far into panic mode that the only noise I could hear was the alarm. I watched Madison's mouth bounce up and down as her head wobbled and she moaned at me, but all I could hear was blah blah blah, whine whine whine. To mine and her surprise, I slapped her round the gob and walked away.

Ha, I was such a cool dude when I was panicky.
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Re: Here Comes The Nerd ♥♥

Postby Mirry » Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:23 am

This is a reall awesome story! That last part made me laugh a little. Madison had it coming. I wouldn't be surprised if she's been slapped a lot!
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