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New speacies:Horned turtal dragon-tailed beast by 23Inugami

Artist 23Inugami [gallery]
Time spent 35 minutes
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New speacies:Horned turtal dragon-tailed beast

Postby 23Inugami » Mon Aug 01, 2011 4:24 pm

A new speicies:Horned turtal dragon-tailed beast

I was just skeching and wanted to make a new speacies.

Should I make an Adoptable version?

Coments and critism Wanted and welcome

Made a predator/enemy for them Here
Last edited by 23Inugami on Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:05 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: New speacies:Horned turtal dragon-tailed beast

Postby lavender-riots » Mon Aug 01, 2011 4:28 pm

Maybe try to smooth out some of the lines and make a few of the corners less sharp? And maybe try to integrate the horns to the head a little better, rather than just setting them on top?
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Re: New speacies:Horned turtal dragon-tailed beast

Postby 23Inugami » Mon Aug 01, 2011 4:33 pm

O.K. I'll try that
Edit:Smoothed the sharp lines and erased them,and [hopefully]made the horns look Intergrated into the head.
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Re: New speacies:Horned turtal dragon-tailed beast

Postby lavender-riots » Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:13 pm

Pretty good. One thing, though. Try to smooth the sharp edge on the head, where the forehead area meets the muzzle area.
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Re: New speacies:Horned turtal dragon-tailed beast

Postby lavender-riots » Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:33 pm

Much better. And you're welcome.
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