Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

[live.life.loud]

ok, that was sooooooooooo creepy!!! it was like four in the morning with five hyper girls in the dark!! I was freaking out! haha! it was really good tho

[just'marley]

@.@ K... I WASNT ON PLANNING ON SLEEPING OR ANYTHING TONIGHT! YUPP! THANKS!

This doesnt belong to me. Someoen shared it with me on a diff forum. I forget the user though.

One winter, there was a snow storm. A little girl and her dad where stuck in a house for DAYS. But, when it started to clear up, the dad went to the gricery store for food. She was watching TV when she got a text messege from her dad telling her to pre-heat the oven. She started to get up when she saw a yellow-ish face out side the back door (it was a glass door). She looked closer and realized tghere was a man staring at her outside. She screamed and called the police right away. They walked around the house and found n prints in the snow. She made them check again. Nothing. As they started to leave, they heard the back door slam shut. They ran back, only to find prints leading AWAY from the house. Infact, he was not outside being a peeping tom/stalker person... He was inside. They looked for clues. All they found was a machettie (i think thats how u spell it...) and a loaded shot gun. He was planning to kill her.

it scares me only cuz theres good hiding spots in my house! not tht scary though... so... yea...

[HonouNoKage]

It is said that in Mexico there is a ghost of a woman who drowned her kids. They call her the "Cry Baby" because she cries a lot. She is a wandering spirit, looking for her kids. If you misbehave with your parents she will visit you. She will come out if you are near a pile of water and scream "oh, my children!" It is not safe to look in her face! If you do, death will follow. IF I WERE YOU I WOULD BE NICE TO YOUR PARENTS! The part about the woman drowning her kids is real. I think that the other part about her coming out of the water is true. If you encounter her, I would recommend putting on some ear plugs and running away from her. Submitted by Freddie Martinez

I believe she is also called La Llorona. She was a peasant woman that fell in love with a nobleman, but he refused to marry her because she had three out of wedlock children. She drowned them in the lake but he still refused to marry her so she killed herself. She comes out of the water and starts calling for her children.

[HonouNoKage]

It is said that in Mexico there is a ghost of a woman who drowned her kids. They call her the "Cry Baby" because she cries a lot. She is a wandering spirit, looking for her kids. If you misbehave with your parents she will visit you. She will come out if you are near a pile of water and scream "oh, my children!" It is not safe to look in her face! If you do, death will follow. IF I WERE YOU I WOULD BE NICE TO YOUR PARENTS! The part about the woman drowning her kids is real. I think that the other part about her coming out of the water is true. If you encounter her, I would recommend putting on some ear plugs and running away from her. Submitted by Freddie Martinez

I believe she is also called La Llorona. She was a peasant woman that fell in love with a nobleman, but he refused to marry her because she had three out of wedlock children. She drowned them in the lake but he still refused to marry her so she killed herself. She comes out of the water and starts calling for her children.

[Chara Dreemurr]

It is said that in Mexico there is a ghost of a woman who drowned her kids. They call her the "Cry Baby" because she cries a lot. She is a wandering spirit, looking for her kids. If you misbehave with your parents she will visit you. She will come out if you are near a pile of water and scream "oh, my children!" It is not safe to look in her face! If you do, death will follow. IF I WERE YOU I WOULD BE NICE TO YOUR PARENTS! The part about the woman drowning her kids is real. I think that the other part about her coming out of the water is true. If you encounter her, I would recommend putting on some ear plugs and running away from her. Submitted by Freddie Martinez

I believe she is also called La Llorona. She was a peasant woman that fell in love with a nobleman, but he refused to marry her because she had three out of wedlock children. She drowned them in the lake but he still refused to marry her so she killed herself. She comes out of the water and starts calling for her children.

I've been like the worst kind of hell to my parents, yet I'm still alive and well. ^.^

[Donnie Darko]

*This is written by Joe Hayes, not me.*

This is a story that the old ones have been telling to children for hundreds of years. It is a sad tale, but it lives strong in the memories of the people, and there are many who swear that it is true.

Long years ago in a humble little village there lived a fine looking girl named Maria. Some say she was the most beautiful girl in the world... And because she was so beautiful, Maria thought she was better than everyone else.

As Maria grew older, her beauty increased and her pride in her beauty grew too. When she was a young woman, she would not even look at the young men from her village. They weren't good enough for her. "When I marry," Maria would say, "I will marry the most handsome man in the world."

And then one day, into Maria's village rode a man who seemed to be just the one she had been talking about. He was a dashing young rancher o, the son of a wealthy rancher from the southern plains. He could ride like a Comanche! In fact, if he owned a horse, and it grew tame, he would give it away and go rope a wild horse from the plains. He thought it wasn't manly to ride a horse if it wasn't half wild.

He was handsome and he could play the guitar and sing beautifully. Maria made up her mind-that he was the man for her! She knew just the tricks to win his attention.

If the rancher o spoke when they met on the pathway, she would turn her head away. When he came to her house in the evening to play his guitar and serenade her, she wouldn't even come to the window. She refused all his costly gifts. The young man fell for her tricks. "That haughty girl, Maria, Maria! " he said to himself. "I know I can win her heart. I swear I'll marry that girl."

And so everything turned out as Maria planned. Before long, she and the rancher o became engaged and soon they were married. At first, things were fine. They had two children and they seemed to be a happy family together. But after a few years, the rancher o went back to the wild life of the prairies. He would leave town and be gone for months at a time. And when he returned home, it was only to visit his children. He seemed to care nothing for the beautiful Maria. He even talked of setting Maria aside and marrying a woman of his own wealthy class.

As proud as Maria was, of course she became very angry with the rancher o. She also began to feel anger toward her children, because he paid attention to them, but just ignored her.

One evening, as Maria was strolling with her two children on the shady pathway near the river, the rancher o came by in a carriage. An elegant lady sat on the seat beside him. He stopped and spoke to his children, but he didn't even look at Maria. He whipped the horses on up the street.

When she saw that, a terrible rage filled Maria, and it all turned against her children. And although it is sad to tell, the story says that in her anger Maria seized her two children and threw them into the river! But as they disappeared down the stream, she realized what she had done! She ran down the bank of the river, reaching out her arms to them. But they were long gone.

The next morning, a traveler brought word to the villagers that a beautiful woman lay dead on the bank of the river. That is where they found Maria, and they laid her to rest where she had fallen.

But the first night Maria was in the grave, the villagers heard the sound of crying down by the river. It was not the wind, it was La Llorona crying. "Where are my children?" And they saw a woman walking up and down the bank of the river, dressed in a long white robe, the way they had dressed Maria for burial. On many a dark night they saw her walk the river bank and cry for her children. And so they no longer spoke of her as Maria. They called her La Llorona, the weeping woman. And by that name she is known to this day. Children are warned not to go out in the dark, for, La Llorona might snatch them and never return them.

[Snowleopardyay!]

I know, it's not mine. I can put a lot more detail in than that.

[Donnie Darko]

LOL I know right! I wasn't directing that at you... I didn't even realize that that story was posted before mine.(: Sorry(:

[*~MoonlitSunrise~*]

*WARNING: Very violent in some places.
Visions

A man was on his knees over a corpse of a woman, he was breathing heavily and shakilly. His arms where covered with the blood of the woman and where spread out at his sides. He suddenly turned and looked over his shoulder, it was too dark to see his face but all that Lily could make out was his glowing white yellow eyes and blood dripping out of his mouth. Lily sat straight up in her bed with panic spread across her face. She sighed and though 'That dream again, why do I keep having dreams of that creepy guy? Why would an average 16 year old like me have those weird dreams?' Lily rubbed her eyes and looked at the clock '1:17...Mom should be home any minute.'
"Lily! I'm home, and I want you to meet someone." Lily smirked, 'There she is now.' She climbed out of her bed and started heading downstairs. She stopped halfway down the stairs and looked across the room at her mom who was standing at the doorway with some man. Her mom, Alice, smiled and said," Honey, this is Ryan. He's the guy I've been telling you about." Lily nodded towards Ryan," Nice to meet you Ryan. Mom, I'm going to go back to bed. Night." "Night honey!"
Lily turned and walked back into her room and laid down in her bed, she curled up in a ball and fell back asleep quickly.
***
Over the next couple of days Lily kept having the dream about the guy with the white yellow eyes, but each time the victim was a different woman. She also got to get to know Ryan better, her mom seemed to be head over heels in love with him, but Lily didn't like him for some reason. He let out a bad vibe to her...Like he was evil or something, but he seemed like a really nice guy.
Ryan made them breakfast every morning, helped Lily with her homework, and most importantly made Alice happier. Lily decided to annoy the weird vibe though off of him because of those reasons. She had fallen asleep and she started to have that really weird dream again. She woke up in a panic and then heard a noise Plip. Plop. Plip. Plop.. She turned and looked towards the noise and saw three of the girls from her dreams standing there in her room, bleeding from multiple areas. One of the girls stepped forewards leaving a small trail of blood behind her and she wispered," Please...Run...Before anything happens to you or your family...He'll kill you...Run..."
Lily started crying in fear and she took a good look at the girls. The one closest to her had multiple holes the width of an index finder through her body and was missing both of her ears and nose, the one to her left was missing a hand and chuncks of her hair was gone, the one to her right though was scariest...Her eyes where missing and so was the skin on her arms, and there was thing though that all three of them had in common...All of them had huges holes in their chest from where there hearts should be.
Lily couldn't take it anymore, she screamed loudly and at that moment Alice and Ryan burst into her room and the three girls disapeared. " Honey, what's wrong?" Lily was balling her eyes out and said shakily," M-m-mom. There w-where three girls, a-around your age, s-s-s-standing by my bed. They where practically ripped in pieces a-a-and they where bleeding all over the place. Th-th-they're trying to warn me about what happened to them mom." Alice hugged her and Ryan had a shocked look on his face and they both comforted her until she fell back asleep.
***
For the next six days Lily would have her night mare and wake up with those three girls every night. After two days she'd gotten used to it, but it stil scared her. One night Ryan and Alice where out on a date and Lily had fallen asleep while watching a movie and started having a really weird dream.
There was a woman walking through the park with a man, instantly from seeing the back of his head Lily knew it was the man with white yelow eyes. They turned and looked at each other and the woman said, " I had a great night tonight." he man stroked some hair behind her ear and said, " I did too." Lily couldn't see what they looked like so she stepped closer and gasped seeing who it was......It was Ryan and Alice. Ryan looked down at the ground and said," Alice..." "Yes?" "I'm sorry." Before Alice could respond he looked up and his eyes where now white yellow. Alice opened her moth to scream but Ryan quickly covered it with one hand and held her up in the air. He quickly broke her jaw and then threw her on the ground, he pounced ontop of her but he did't look that much like Ryan anymore...He was now super pale, had long sharp nails, pointed teeth, his white yellow eyes, he truely looked like a monster. He start scratching her up with his nails causing her to bleed badly and he made a huge gash i her neck. He then leaned down and wispered," Do you stil love me Alice?" Fear grew in her eyes and he smirked," Oh well, if you don't love me anymore then you don't need this." He then ripped a hole into her chest where her heart was and tore it out. Alice then laid there dead, with a blank expression on her face as Ryan ate her heart, he then stayed kneeling over her and her dream ended like all her other nightmares.
Lily woke up paniced and got up off the couch, instead of the three girls being there, it was just the one that talked to her. The woman spoke up and wispered," Save her...He's a monster...He'll eat her heart...You don't have much time..." Lily nodded and ran into her mom's room and dug through her drowers and grabbed her gun. She loaded it and then left the house to the park.
***
Lily got to the park right when Ryan told Alice he was sorry, Lily pointed her gun at him and growled," Don't. You. Dare." Ryan chuckled evily and turned too Lily. "So you finally figured it out?" " Yeah I did now leave and don't come back, or I'll shoot." Ryan laughed and hunched over. When he came back up he was in his monsterous form and Alice gasped. He cocked his head at Lily and said," You really wouldn't shoot me." "Yes I would." He then took one step foreward and Lily fired 3 times at him.
Ryan collapsed to the ground bleeding and Lily and Alice ran off back to their house.
***
The next to days went along fine, Lily told her mom about everything and Alice was very thankfull. Lily also stopped having her bad dreams and the girls didn't come anymore either. Lily one night was sleeping, and she woke up to a noise Plip. Plop. Plip. Plop.Lily sat up and saw the three girls standing there. The one had a single tear streaming down her face and she said," We tried to warn you...But you didn't listen to part of what we were saying." Lily's eyes grew in fear," What?"
Then she Felt an arm snake forcefully over her mouth while the other held her arms together.
" Did you miss me Lily?"

[Chara Dreemurr]

Good story and well written, but kinda predictable.