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We are Ready! (constructive critique needed!) by ButterflyChaser

Artist ButterflyChaser [gallery]
Time spent 3 hours, 47 minutes
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We are Ready! (constructive critique needed!)

Postby ButterflyChaser » Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:19 pm

Looking for constructive critiques here. Updated sketch is a couple drawings from here.

Aurion wolf species © apache
Character and design belong to me.

Things I like: Shading and lighting turned out better in this piece than previous ones. It is perhaps one of my more "realistic" looking pieces. I like the expression. I believe I captured the character's cocky attitude.

Things I don't like: Neck and body, leg area. It needs something there so we know where the legs are. This is nothing new. I struggle with drawing legs with all my creatures. Eye and face area. The eyes don't feel in the same line. They look uneven. Ears. I struggle with those as well.
Last edited by ButterflyChaser on Wed Jul 27, 2011 11:38 am, edited 10 times in total.
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Re: We are Ready!

Postby The Smiler » Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:20 pm

Woah.
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who do you belong to?
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Re: We are Ready!

Postby RonnexD » Tue Jul 26, 2011 9:11 pm

Thats really good!!
I love it!
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Re: We are Ready!

Postby ButterflyChaser » Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:04 am

Thanks. I'm glad a few people like it anyway. I hope it wasn't a total waste of time. I edited the post to mention areas I'm looking for more help on improving.
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