Sonmi's Couples, Characters and Writing - Posting Welcome

[exousia]

Could I post another couple? Well here it is: (It's funny how I ask about things but do it anyway )

Pet's name: Rain (F).....................................Pet's name: Toto (M)
Well, you can make them into whatever you want =) But note: Toto's to's are pronounced like toe = Toto (Toe-toe)
I know it's a silly name

[Lierre]

Lovely story Sonia!

[exousia]

Here's part 1 of a short story I just did for the CS Pet Pairs Thread:



I met her at a masquerade ball, so many years ago I don't even remember when it was. Despite the hundreds of other people in the room, she and her red eyes, those wonderful red eyes, were the only things I could see. They called me, their depths beckoning and seductive and she twirled her away around every other man on the dance floor to stop in front of me.
"You seem a little... stiff." Her touch on my shoulder sent waves of feeling running up and down my arm. "Loosen up some." Before I could protest, she had pulled me out onto the dance floor and placed my arms on her hips.
"I don't know how to dance," I muttered to her quietly after I had overcome my shock at being dragged out onto a dance floor by a girl that I didn't even know.

Should I continue the story?

YES It's so sweet so far!

[Sonmi-451]

Thanks guys. I'll work on the end of that story right now.

[Sonmi-451]

Reserved

[Tabuu]

Great ending! Wish we had gotten to know who she was

[Sonmi-451]

Thanks, and the pets' names are Alice and Haunted, although the ending might have hinted at his.

[Lierre]

That's what I thought about the haunted one, but I don't see where Alice comes from. (or either I'm not reading well enough. x3)

[Sonmi-451]

Yeah, Alice doesn't really come from the story; she just a character I made up and then wrote a story about.

[Lierre]

Oh okay.