Pound of Hope Fanclub

[Lirrie]

Africa please fill out the critique form ^.^

[BPeppers]

Oooh, I've been dying to read yours Africa. I'm not on critique staff, but I wouldn't mind helping you out a bit. :)

[Tiikeria]

I don't think they really need to fill out a form here, Lirrie. Just on the main thread. Here they're asking anyone, there they're asking just the crit staff. :3

*dances around on the chat*

[Lirrie]

oh XD lol im still tired.

[BPeppers]

So I am allowed to critique Africa. >8D

[[If she'll let me...]]

[Tiikeria]

Yup. Anyone can crit here. :3

[Africa.]

Thanks Tiki x3 I read Lirries post and I was like, "Oh crud... O.o" But I'm glad I'm not in trouble x3

Joy: Sure, I'd love all the crit I can get ^^

[MerryEaster]

Can anyone crtique mine? Im really not that good at writing. (The pink is Avia's point of view, and the blue is Maline's point of view) Not sure if I should add more likes, dislikes & personality, or continue the story xD

[BPeppers]

Alright. I'll PM you then? :)

[Africa.]

Yes please ^^ Thanks in advance <3 (and remember, its supposed to be cliche'd xD )