Pound of Hope Fanclub

[neonfrozen]

Could I have some critique on my form? It's a WIP, but I'd like to know how it looks/sounds so far. Fluent enough?
viewtopic.php?f=58&t=341528&p=16078654&hilit=Ninja#p16078654

Sure. Ill PM you when im done.

[corgie]

I'd like someone to critique mine form in about 30minutes { trying to finish up and tweak her history } I'll give the link at that time ^^.

Anyways, anyone want to join me on chat to talk about some ideas and the likes

[bearlygrunge]

I could do that for you, Corgi. c: Could I have a link to your form?

[corgie]

Sure ^^

Here you go c:

[pancreas]

I'm on chat if anyone wants to join me~ 8D

[neonfrozen]

Could someone critique my form again? Wibeke just told me the things to fix up, and I want to see if theres anything else.

You may have to scroll down a bit, but im going for P26, the black and red wolf.

[bearlygrunge]

Sure ^^

Here you go c:

Would you like me to critique through PM or just post it here, Corgi?

[corgie]

I don't mind either or c:

I'll have to write it on my laptop from now on since it corrects my spelling mistakes for me :b

[Wesley]

I can meet someone on chat. c;
Anyhow, my form is almost completely done except for the ending of the story. Could I have some more crit?

[Africa.]

viewtopic.php?f=58&t=341528&p=15431053&hilit=Quinn#p15431053
Cit anyone? :3 I'd really appreciate it, even though it's not finished yet ^^ (Also, yes, the history is SUPPOSED to be cliche'd.)