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Yes, I DEFFINATELY want to read the sequel!
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OF COURSE! It's AWESOME EPIC SAUCE!
57
15%
Of course..... NOT! It was so horrible! Why do you even keep on writing? You are the worste author in the history of worste authors!
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Kind of, it really isn't my type of story.
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12%
 
Total votes : 375

Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Shin Kuroi » Wed Jul 20, 2011 6:24 pm

Owlcity:D wrote:
MxRxSxMxMxR wrote:AHHHHH THE SUSPENCE!!!!!! if i wasnt a guy i would punch Jenette in the..... well you get what i mean



EWWWWWWW!! Even a girl would'nt do that!! :what:

lol JK edit
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:20 am

elli6622 wrote:This is the most amazing story i think it should be published!!! :thumbup:

Thank you! I hope to be a famous author someday..... but that costs a lot of money to publish a book, but still! I hope to be a famous author, still! And I hope whoever else wants to be an author, will be one someday too.
Hawky & Tundra wrote:Do a Pinkie Pie swere ;D and aw ok :)

lol! i'll write more RIGHT NOW!







The next test is going to test your speed.
What does tha-
BUt suddenly a big bomb was chasing me out of nowhere and so of course I ran! I ran and ran and ran and ran and ran and ran and ran and- well you get the point! When I ran into a red ribbon, the ribbon tore and I just had to stop running. This would be it. I would explode and then I would die, just like Suzi wanted. My life would end here and I'd never even ge the chance to- the bomb stopped chasing me. It just disappeared. What had just happened?
Wow.
What?
You just ran for five hours!
Really?! I was running for FIVE HOURS?! It only felt like one second...
Running makes you lose track of time when there's an emergency. Also, you crossed that red ribbon about twenty times, but you didn't stop like you where supposed to, so the bomb kept on chasing you. But when you stopped running, the bomb knew that you had ran far enough, and it disappeared. You've past the test!
Five hours?
I was still awed by the fact that I had been running for five hours.
Yup. Five hours.
Wow! What's my next task?
The next task, the final task, will be the hardest of all. I hope you can take it, because it is truly hard.
I hoped I could take it!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:22 am

What's the next test? What is it? -puppy face-
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:02 am

Hawky & Tundra wrote:What's the next test? What is it? -puppy face-

lol!







What's the next test?
You will be tested for your caring. Put this helmet on.
She handed me a helmet that had wires coming out of it. I put the helmet on.
You will be tested.... NOW!
But what if-
But I didn't see Jenette anymore. Where had she gone? Suddenly, there was a fire in the room. Not just a ltitle flame you can put out with water, but I'm talking about huge flames that could demolish a train in five seconds. I was scared to death. Suddenly, there was a scream and Jenette was taped to a chair. She was stuck, and the flame was coming towards her.
Don't worry, Jenette! I'm coming!
I ran over to Jenette and cut the tape, making her able to run away from the flames. Jenette ran away from the flames, and I ran to her. But I was too late. The fire had gotten me. It was burning my tail! I tucked ducked and rolled and got the fire out of my tail, and then I kept on running. Suddenly, the fire was out. But now there was a flood! It was raining and pouring.... and I couldn't swim! I tried paddling with my arms and legs, but it didn't work. I began sinking. Suddenly, there was Jessy out at sea. Jessy DEFINATELY didn't know how to swim! She was back! But I wasn't going to lose her again! I swam towards Jessy, grabbed her and swam with her. I was swimming! Suddenly, Jessy and the flood disappeared. Now there was a shaking. It was an earthquake! The shaking was the most furious ever! I saw Brent under a table that was about to calapse ontop of him, and I ran to him, moving him out of the way. But now I was under the table and the building collapsed on top of me. But now I was back in the headquarters, and Jenette was staring at me. She took my helmet off.
You did good.
What was that all about?
The helmet made you imagine all those things, even though they looked real. I saw what you where imagining, and you rescued everybody and even risked your own life for them. You've past the tests. You are now an official secret agent.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:18 am

Yay secret agency-ness! :D

I'm just wondering...What happened to Amy's mom and Brent?
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:32 am

Yayz! She made it! :D
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:54 am

Littlecatzee wrote:Yay secret agency-ness! :D

I'm just wondering...What happened to Amy's mom and Brent?


lol!

OH MY GOODNESS I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THEM! :o Must.... write..... MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What's going to happen to Mom and Brent?
What? Oh, your mom and your brother! I don't know. They're probably looking for you right now.
I must go home and tell them I'm safe!
Fine, but right after you do that we've got to go and do a mission!
So we went home. But when I got there, Mom and Brent where nowhere in site. The windows where open and the door was open. Everything in the house was destroyed, except the house itself. Somebody had taken Mom and Brent!
We've got to go and find them! Do you know where they are?
Yes, I do. But you must know that this mission will be more dangerous then you think it will be. More dangerous then anything you've ever seen or done.







That is the end of this story! I will be writing a sequel, don't worry! But first I'm going to start a different book. After that book, I will probably start the sequel to this one. Here is the book I'm writing now! When I start writing the sequel, I will post it here so you can all read it.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:59 am

Awesome job :thumbup: A short story, but a good one!
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:21 am

Thanks Wild!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Dαvy » Thu Jul 21, 2011 8:23 am

(Hey, ╬JesusFreak╬ I love you stuff here!)
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