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Yes, I DEFFINATELY want to read the sequel!
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OF COURSE! It's AWESOME EPIC SAUCE!
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Of course..... NOT! It was so horrible! Why do you even keep on writing? You are the worste author in the history of worste authors!
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Kind of, it really isn't my type of story.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby JDsalamander » Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:29 am

*plays Perry the Platypus song*
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:20 pm

Death the Kat wrote:*plays Perry the Platypus song*

lol! That's the perfect theme song for this! lol





My mouth dropped open from astonishment. So, Jenette was my sister and a secret agent? Wow.
You're a secret agent?!
Yup! And I need your help.... majorly.
What can I help with?
I need you to take a test so that you can become a secret agent as well. First, I'll take you to the headquarters so that you can train, and then the main secret agent, her name is Agent Cornelia, will give you your test. If you pass, you'll become a secret agent and we can help other people.
This was a lot to take in. Jenette is my sister secret agent, I need to take a test and I myself can become a secret agent, and there's a main secret agent that runs the whole secret agent place named Agent Cornelia. That's a lot to take in in one day!
Where can I train?
Follow me!
Jenette lead me to a room with other people in it.... mostly very young kids. I was the oldest one there.
Sorry for all the little kids. Most secret agents start training when they are first born, and then they become secret agents later on.
Why didn't Mom tell me that I had another sister?
She doesn't know. She had me with Dad, but then Dad ran off and put a memory drug on Mom, making her forget me. He then tried to teach me to do wrong things, but I ran away a couple of years after my birth. Everybody said I was young to run away, but I didn't care. I had seen pictures of you and the rest of the family in Dad's office that he locked me in, and so I knew that I had a sister, you. So when I found the school and saw that you went there, I tried protection you. The rest of the story you know.
So Mom knows nothing about you?
She only has slight moments when she remembers looking at me as a baby, but then it all fades away and she doesn't remember.
Will she remember you if she sees you?
I don't think she'll ever remember me. But I haven't know Mom for years, and so it will be okay if I don't know her now.
I was about to reply to that when something hit me in the side.
What was that?!
Sorry, I forgot to tell you. You're training has begun.
What do you mean? What am I supposed to do when something hits me like it just-
Something hit me again. I fell to the ground. I sat back up and when something tried to hit me, I jumped over it. I kept on doing that until nothing else tried to hit me.
You're done with that test. Next up is the second test. There are three tests in all. Can you handle it?
Of course I can!
But could I really?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:34 pm

Wow! HUGE twist! :D
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby maroon. » Wed Jul 20, 2011 1:13 pm

Wow,a secret agent!I didn't think this story would be like this.Wonderful twist and I can't wait to read more!
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:51 pm

yeah, JF, you totally twisted it :D but it's good now! (well, it was always good, but now it's better :D)
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:40 pm

Thanks y'all! You guys are so nice! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:41 pm

Write more...please? :)
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:45 pm

Sorry, I've got to write more later. Mom says I've got to get in the shower, and my sis wants to go on. Sorry, but I promise I'll write more later! *Does air pinky swear to Hawky*

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:51 pm

Do a Pinkie Pie swere ;D and aw ok :)
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Ellies » Wed Jul 20, 2011 5:15 pm

This is the most amazing story i think it should be published!!! :thumbup:
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