This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

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Yes, I DEFFINATELY want to read the sequel!
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OF COURSE! It's AWESOME EPIC SAUCE!
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Of course..... NOT! It was so horrible! Why do you even keep on writing? You are the worste author in the history of worste authors!
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Kind of, it really isn't my type of story.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:02 am

I cried and cried. My little sister was gone.... forever. The nurse came in and said we could leave, which meant practically that she wanted us to leave.
What happened to her? How come she wouldn't wake up?
It looked like somebody had done something to her while she was asleep.
Like what?
It looked like somebody had beaten her many times.
That was why Jessy looked different when I saw her (besides the being white-skinned)! She had red marks all over her body.
But who would?
I knew it wasn't Brent, since he loved Jessy more then me. He never got mad at her, it was always me. It wasn't Mom, of course, since she loved Jessy with all her heart. And it wasn't me, since I like Jessy.
We don't know who did it.
That was no help at all. Nobody else was in the house except Mom, Brent, Jessy and I. Dad had run away from Mom a long time ago, when Jessy was born.
Let's go home.
Mom sounded grim.
Okay. What will we do with Jessy?
We can hold a funeral, if you want.
I'd never heard Mom speak those words before; 'If you want'. She'd never asked me what I wanted, until now.
I don't want to have a funeral, I want to have Jessy back!
We can't get her back, Amy.
I know.
By then I was crying more and more. But I followed mom and went home with her.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby JDsalamander » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:09 am

my list of suspects:
Jenette (Prime suspect)
One of Jenette's minions
Their dad
Their mom
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:10 am

Now I'm crying more and more...:cry:
But at least the mom will pay more attention to Amy (:
And yeah it's totally Jenette! -clenches fist-
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Manafest » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:10 am

So SAD!!!! WRITE MORE!! I NEED TO KNOW THE ENDING!!
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:15 am

aww... that sucks!!
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Manafest » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:16 am

I so wish I could punch Jeanette in the face. (After she showers!)
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby JDsalamander » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:20 am

That's it, you've inspired me. I'm writing a story.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:22 am

I really wanted to write a story too but I'm all about serious stories and I was going to base my story off of this half real dream I had but.... I'm kind of sensitive about it so I'm not ready yet. But someday! xD
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:23 am

And I'm...going to work on my warriors story :D
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Manafest » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:24 am

I'm making a story! Have any of you read it? But really shouldn't we be talking about JF's story?
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