Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Dancing with Bears. » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:31 am

" Pft. There wolves. " He laughed and nudged her gently before he took off after her. He didnt need her to slow down- He was actually quite quick on his paws: He decided he wanted to stay alone with her for just a bit and he turned leaping at her and cradling her in his arms-holding his paws against her back as they tumbled down the hill: Him laughing the whole time. He finally let go as they came towards the bottem and she rolled now to far away from him: His chest was heaving while he laughed and looked over at her with a grin.
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby calphina » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:37 am

Nata eeked as she felt his paws on her back, laughing softly, she tired to turn her body, but this caused her to loose her footing..and they tumbled together down a hill. She slid to a stop once they got to the bottom, grass stuck in the hair at the end of her tail, between her bead and hair. She laughed softly as she plucked it out and tossed the grass at him. "Hey now, that was cheating, your not suppose to jump on me."
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Dancing with Bears. » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:41 am

He continued to laugh watching her for a few moments before closing his eyes ending his laughter with a sigh. He opened them and looked at her again." I didnt jump. I... I tripped. " He smirked at her and got up shaking himself out before padding over to her and laying down to pick out the grass pieces.




Is there a Way I can improve this..? >_< Im trying to make it super good.Lol
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby calphina » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:48 am

(Maybe add a necklace with some tribal stuff on it? or something wrapped around the tail, the tail and neck area look plain compared to the rest)

Nata smiled as her helped her get the grass out of her tail "thats the only problem with these darn beads...its so annoying when it gets dirty" she laughed softly as they finally got it all out. Once her tail was completely clean so lightly rubbed it along his face, tickling him a bit. It was fun to goof off and she didnt have to worry about the bloodies attacking at the moment.
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Dancing with Bears. » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:55 am

Cheyvu nipped at her tail tugging on it a bit playfully before standing and shaking himself off again. " Ah. Mine just stays cleanish. " He chuckled softly and sat down curling his tail around him.

(Alright. Thanks<3)
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Tundra » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:09 am

XxBunnyxX wrote:Dae watched him for a few moments: " I would rather not have the pack worry. " She nudged him gently lowering her head and just kept walking in silence- She heard a a grunt and had looked up to see what it was- But it was too late. She found herself tripping over Zarafel that had fallen on the ground and was on his back. She landed next to him laughing quietly and hit him with her paw. " Nice going. " She smirked playfully


Zarafel let out a grunt as Dae tripped over him, having the air shoved out of his lungs. He laughed as she hit him with her paw saying "what? better to be facing who you speak to...since I think you'd rather speak to my face then my rear" He smiled slightly and followed by "the pack would only have to worry more if it became infected, its best to go to the healer even for the smallest things to get it cleaned and told if you need to stay off it"
XxBunnyxX wrote:Is there a Way I can improve this..? >_< Im trying to make it super good.Lol
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[[Improvements? to me its to busy, but thats me lol. ...plus...I think you should add one torn ear, where as the other is not even there...battle scar lol. Anyway..the markings that are on the tail should be on the neck as well. It would blend it together better. As for items...that wolf has almost an electronic feel. thus the items should follow ]]
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Dancing with Bears. » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:25 am

Dae huffed at him and rolled her eyes. " Yeah yeah " She grumbled at his comment and stood up shaking herself off. " I was speaking towards you in general " She added before padding away with a smirk.



(( I didnt design it. Someone else did but its mine and I do like it kind of busy like that xD And Alright with the ears. I dont think Ill add anything to the neck or tail. I dont know. and with the accessories.. Hmm.. I might do something like that<3 Thanks )
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Tundra » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:32 am

Zarafel chuckled rolling himself over so he could follow her. He grumbled as he stepped on his long tail before padding after Dae. His muscles rippling under his fur as he broke into a full run for the hell of it. The ground lighting up red as he padded on it.
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Dancing with Bears. » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:35 am

Dae watched him race past her and make her fur woosh fowards covering her face for a moment before she shook herself and watching his chuckling softly and shaking her head.
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Re: Warriors of Taenis (JOIN!)

Postby Tundra » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:48 am

Zarafel let his tongue hang out as he ran, his paws thudding on the ground in a rhythmic pattern. His tail trailed out behind him waving in the wind much like a horses would. He then suddenly swerved and ran around Dae and stopped by her side saying "...i just...felt like running..." He chuckled as he kept pace with Dae.
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