[arte]

Just wanted to try drawing Areth in a new form.
Comments and constructive critiscism are welcome =3

[arte]

Bump <:)

[kiriban]

You've definitely got potential. <3
I've only got a few things to point out.

The snout is rather short for a wolf, and very rounded.
Usually their almost like a long cylinder on it's side.
Oh, and I know you meant to cover that right eye (and you did a great job), but it would probably stick just a bit out of the hair.
The shoulders could probably be a bit more broad. They usually branch out from the chest area, so unless she's shrugging, they would probably be less circular.

Other than that, this is really great. :]

Hope that helped,
Ghasel

[arte]

Thanks <3
I'll definitely use that advice for future drawings!