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Adopted!

Postby donkeykong » Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:19 am

Adopted by Neko<3!

Cat's name: MorningEcho
Cat's Gender: Female
Cat's Clan: Thunderclan

Winning story: MorningEcho picked up her head, ears twitching at the slightest noise. She suddenly realized that she wasn't in her own camp, and then she remembered: she had been kidnapped, by Bloodclan. She remembered their new leader's vicious smirk as he dragged her away during the night, some kind of sickly smelling, liquid drenched leaf shoved in her mouth. Now she had to escape. Looking around, she only saw strange red objects lining a long, narrow passageway. She must be in the twolegplace. She scrunched her nose with disgust before stalking quietly and cautiously down the passageway, keeping her ears open for any sudden noises. Nothing. This was strange....shouldn't they be guarding her? She trotted out only to leap backwards and tumble head over heels as a monster zoomed by, leaving it's hot, reeking stench behind. MorningEcho frowned and sneezed once or twice before trotting on, racing across the two thunderpath and over a couple of fences. She met a dog in one, who wasn't very friendly, and she sprinted away as quickly as she could. She suddenly found herself in the forest, but it was Shadowclan territory. She stepped out and continued along until she was by the Thunderclan border, but suddenly something small and wet touched her face. She jumped and looked around, confused. It happened again. She jumped, "MorningEcho?" a familiar voice rang out, "Wake up!" Suddenly, MorningEcho was by the willow tree, looking up at her brother, Dewpond. It had all been a dream!

I loved all the entries and you all should have won! The reason I chose this entry was because of the surprise ending. It was very well written! For those who didn't win, let me know if I should do more of these creative cat adopts!
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby squints » Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:41 am

Username:~BlazerDayDream~
Cat's name:Duckfeather.
Cat's Gender:ThunderClan
Cat's Clan:ThunderClan
Why this cat?:I've been looking for a cat like this, because my parents had a cat like this before I was born!
Payment: Some 09 uncommons
Other; Yes! Yes! THis is a cat I've been looking for! :D
Duckkit, Come on up" Her leader looked at her. The kit shook, but tried her best to padded toward the rock. "Do you wish to be a warrior?" Sunstar looked down at her. "Well, actually no" she looked at Goosestep "I wish to be medicine cat." Sunstar swallowed and looked down at his daughter, "Are you sure?" he asked, wordily, he was praying that one day his daughter would too be Leader. She looked up, "Yes sir" She nodded and hopped down to her father. SUnstar nodded and went to his den, he still love his daughter, but he was wondering if Duckkit's mother still loved her. In fact Duckit's mother did loose interest in her daughter. This hurt more than anything to Duckkit. Goosestep was warmer than any mother could be. On her first night as an apprentice, she let Duckpaw sleep in her nest.

(TIme skip, cuse I'm short on time! BD )
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby patrick star.. » Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:23 pm

Username:
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Cat's name:
Orangewind
Cat's Gender:
She-Cat
Cat's Clan:
Sadow
Story/art link:
Orangewind's Beginning.
Orangewind was born in a litter of 5,She had 2 Brothers and 2 Sisters.Orangewind and her mother Seasonwind were always searching for a Rock,so Orangewind and her Siblings could play on it.Orangewind and her mother found the Rock!Orangewind jumped on the rock "Call me Orangestar!"Orangwind said playfully and jumped on her Father.Orangewind knew her Boundaries and her Parents they were nothing like a Kit.Orangewind walked up to her Leader."I am 7 moon's and ready too become a Apprentice!"Orangewind said knowing what she was.Orangewind's leader nodded and began too talk too another cat named Daisypetal.Orangewind always loved too play with Daisy.Orangewind's leader finally said "Orangekit your mentor is Daisypetal.".Orangewind jumped and walked too Daisypetal "I am your Apprentice!"Orangewind said and tried too find out who her Sibling's Mentors would be.Orangewind didn't see or hear anything so she left with Daisypetal they caught 2 mice,Orangewind caught one Daisypetal caught the other one.Orangewind had been eating her food when Foxtail took her mouse.Foxtail was Orangewind's sister.Orangewind shooed off her sister.Foxtail left in a amount of time Frightened of Orangewind.

Other:
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby OceanBlast » Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:37 pm

Username:OceanBlast
Cat's name:Autum Claw
Cat's Gender:Female
Cat's Clan:Star Clan
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Other:My art isn't that good but I hope it's still good enough :D
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hey everyone, I'm rose! but u can call me ocean. I a pretty basic person but my interests include art, photography, sleeping, and tea (u can probs guess where I come from lol). if u need any help w/ anything just send over a pm! I'd be glad to help <3
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby cryonic. » Sun Jul 10, 2011 1:20 pm

Username: Airwolf
Cats name: Patchpelt
Cats gender: Male
Cats clan: Riverclan
Story: Patchpelt's father was a Riverclan warrior and his mother was a Thunderclan warrior. He was born in a litter of three his brother was killed. He lives in Riverclan and his sister lives in Thunderclan he wants to go and see his sister but he can't because Riverclan would never let him go. His father Waterpaw took him to Riverclan after Patchpelt's mother died. The Thunderclan leader said "You can take Patchplet to Riverclan but his sister stays in Thunderclan". Patchpelt grows up to be a Riverclan warrior and his is the best hunter too he always follows the warrior code but dreams one day he could see his sister Hawkclaw.
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby Jackie. » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:12 am

Username: ~Jackie~
Cat's name: Spottedfeather
Cat's Gender: female
Cat's Clan: thunderclan
Story/art link: Here I made a picture of her sunbathing on sunning rocks<3
Other: I LOVE this cat so much and I really hope I get her! <333 :D
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby Jackie. » Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:49 am

kittykatkity wrote:
Username:
kittykatkity
Cat's name:
Orangewind
Cat's Gender:
She-Cat
Cat's Clan:
Sadow
Story/art link:
Orangewind's Beginning.
Orangewind was born in a litter of 5,She had 2 Brothers and 2 Sisters.Orangewind and her mother Seasonwind were always searching for a Rock,so Orangewind and her Siblings could play on it.Orangewind and her mother found the Rock!Orangewind jumped on the rock "Call me Orangestar!"Orangwind said playfully and jumped on her Father.Orangewind knew her Boundaries and her Parents they were nothing like a Kit.Orangewind walked up to her Leader."I am 7 moon's and ready too become a Apprentice!"Orangewind said knowing what she was.Orangewind's leader nodded and began too talk too another cat named Daisypetal.Orangewind always loved too play with Daisy.Orangewind's leader finally said "Orangewind your mentor is Daisypetal.".Orangewind jumped and walked too Daisypetal "I am your Apprentice!"Orangewind said and tried too find out who her Sibling's Mentors would be.Orangewind didn't see or hear anything so she left with Daisypetal they caught 2 mice,Orangewind caught one Daisypetal caught the other one.Orangewind had been eating her food when Foxtail took her mouse.Foxtail was Orangewind's sister.Orangewind shooed off her sister.Foxtail left in a amount of time Frightened of Orangewind.
WIP.
Orangewind's Middle Life.
WIP.
Orangewind walked too her Apprentice who she usually called Silverkit.She looked at the Apprentice "Today is your day you will show the clan you Honor us and will fight for our life,Today you will become a Warrior."Orangewind said and walked too a hole in the ground."Be careful we have visitor."Orangewind said and walked off.Silverpaw followed her but fell to the ground.Orangewind saw the other cat who destroyed Silverpaw.Orangewind went to the other cat and shooed it off then walked too Silverpaw.Orangewind sat and cried from the loss of her Apprentice.
WIP.
Orangewind stopped in front of Leaftail.Leaftail greeted her with a soft nudge "I love you."Leaftail said calmly.Orangewind and Leaftail went too there den.Orangewind blurted out "I want Kit's!"She said and looked at Leaf tail.Leaftail let her have Kit's.
--A few months Later.--
Orangewind woke up she went too wake up Leaftail "Waky Waky."She said nudging Leaftail.Orangewind dropped too the ground when Leaftail stood up "Let me get Goldenstar."Leaftail said going too Goldenstar.Golden and Leaf got back and noticed something new.Orangewind looked at Goldenstar "I have had my kit's."Orangewind said Goldenstar looked at one in the eye "As white as Snow."Goldenstar said "She is a Prophecy kit!"Orangewind said happy too know.Leaftail nudged Orangewind "What are there name's?"He asked looking at the Snow kit.Orangewind Nudged the Snow kit "Snowkit!"Orangewind said then nudged the Kit with Black circle around one eye "Sunkit!"Orangewind said then Nudged the Kit with one white paw "Shadowkit!"Orangewind said then Nudged the Kit that was almost Pure orange "Illussionkit!"Orangewind said then nudged the last Kit "Leafkit!"Orangewind said and started too lick her kit's.Orangewind looked at Snowkit then at Leaftail "I've succeeded in my first litter."Orangewind said then looked at Goldenstar "I will be a queen for 5 months."Orangewind said looking at Leaftail "We will see each other again in 6 months."Orangewind said and licked up the rest of Leafkit.
WIP.
Orangewind's End.
All a WIP.
Other:
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I the beging shouldnt that say Orangekit? And then Orangepaw...
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby patrick star.. » Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:51 am

~Jackie~ wrote:
kittykatkity wrote:
Username:
kittykatkity
Cat's name:
Orangewind
Cat's Gender:
She-Cat
Cat's Clan:
Sadow
Story/art link:
Orangewind's Beginning.
Orangewind was born in a litter of 5,She had 2 Brothers and 2 Sisters.Orangewind and her mother Seasonwind were always searching for a Rock,so Orangewind and her Siblings could play on it.Orangewind and her mother found the Rock!Orangewind jumped on the rock "Call me Orangestar!"Orangwind said playfully and jumped on her Father.Orangewind knew her Boundaries and her Parents they were nothing like a Kit.Orangewind walked up to her Leader."I am 7 moon's and ready too become a Apprentice!"Orangewind said knowing what she was.Orangewind's leader nodded and began too talk too another cat named Daisypetal.Orangewind always loved too play with Daisy.Orangewind's leader finally said "Orangewind your mentor is Daisypetal.".Orangewind jumped and walked too Daisypetal "I am your Apprentice!"Orangewind said and tried too find out who her Sibling's Mentors would be.Orangewind didn't see or hear anything so she left with Daisypetal they caught 2 mice,Orangewind caught one Daisypetal caught the other one.Orangewind had been eating her food when Foxtail took her mouse.Foxtail was Orangewind's sister.Orangewind shooed off her sister.Foxtail left in a amount of time Frightened of Orangewind.
WIP.
Orangewind's Middle Life.
WIP.
Orangewind walked too her Apprentice who she usually called Silverkit.She looked at the Apprentice "Today is your day you will show the clan you Honor us and will fight for our life,Today you will become a Warrior."Orangewind said and walked too a hole in the ground."Be careful we have visitor."Orangewind said and walked off.Silverpaw followed her but fell to the ground.Orangewind saw the other cat who destroyed Silverpaw.Orangewind went to the other cat and shooed it off then walked too Silverpaw.Orangewind sat and cried from the loss of her Apprentice.
WIP.
Orangewind stopped in front of Leaftail.Leaftail greeted her with a soft nudge "I love you."Leaftail said calmly.Orangewind and Leaftail went too there den.Orangewind blurted out "I want Kit's!"She said and looked at Leaf tail.Leaftail let her have Kit's.
--A few months Later.--
Orangewind woke up she went too wake up Leaftail "Waky Waky."She said nudging Leaftail.Orangewind dropped too the ground when Leaftail stood up "Let me get Goldenstar."Leaftail said going too Goldenstar.Golden and Leaf got back and noticed something new.Orangewind looked at Goldenstar "I have had my kit's."Orangewind said Goldenstar looked at one in the eye "As white as Snow."Goldenstar said "She is a Prophecy kit!"Orangewind said happy too know.Leaftail nudged Orangewind "What are there name's?"He asked looking at the Snow kit.Orangewind Nudged the Snow kit "Snowkit!"Orangewind said then nudged the Kit with Black circle around one eye "Sunkit!"Orangewind said then Nudged the Kit with one white paw "Shadowkit!"Orangewind said then Nudged the Kit that was almost Pure orange "Illussionkit!"Orangewind said then nudged the last Kit "Leafkit!"Orangewind said and started too lick her kit's.Orangewind looked at Snowkit then at Leaftail "I've succeeded in my first litter."Orangewind said then looked at Goldenstar "I will be a queen for 5 months."Orangewind said looking at Leaftail "We will see each other again in 6 months."Orangewind said and licked up the rest of Leafkit.
WIP.
Orangewind's End.
All a WIP.
Other:
--

I the beging shouldnt that say Orangekit? Then Orangepaw...

She is telling a Story about her life so it always says Orangewind.
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                            Well, saying you're a kid, it's like saying I'M a kid!

                            Hi everyone. for starters I am a girl, I will always be one. anyways this is like my first favorite signature ever. for reals! okay? anyways, don't steal it! I also wanted too say if anyone out there is reading this and likes one direction. well I myself am a huge directioner and I will be happy to do a one on one with you, and a one direction plot. okay, I think this is lastly but. I am on like 24/7. no really I wake up at 8 am every day and go to bed as soon as I can see the sun outside. which is 4 am. though if i'm not on for an entire day that means I slept in longer and probably will go too bed around 5.

                            Uh, I'm supposed to get a toy with this?
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby Jackie. » Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:16 pm

kittykatkity wrote:
~Jackie~ wrote:
kittykatkity wrote:
Username:
kittykatkity
Cat's name:
Orangewind
Cat's Gender:
She-Cat
Cat's Clan:
Sadow
Story/art link:
Orangewind's Beginning.
Orangewind was born in a litter of 5,She had 2 Brothers and 2 Sisters.Orangewind and her mother Seasonwind were always searching for a Rock,so Orangewind and her Siblings could play on it.Orangewind and her mother found the Rock!Orangewind jumped on the rock "Call me Orangestar!"Orangwind said playfully and jumped on her Father.Orangewind knew her Boundaries and her Parents they were nothing like a Kit.Orangewind walked up to her Leader."I am 7 moon's and ready too become a Apprentice!"Orangewind said knowing what she was.Orangewind's leader nodded and began too talk too another cat named Daisypetal.Orangewind always loved too play with Daisy.Orangewind's leader finally said "Orangewind your mentor is Daisypetal."Orangewind jumped and walked too Daisypetal "I am your Apprentice!"Orangewind said and tried too find out who her Sibling's Mentors would be.Orangewind didn't see or hear anything so she left with Daisypetal they caught 2 mice,Orangewind caught one Daisypetal caught the other one.Orangewind had been eating her food when Foxtail took her mouse.Foxtail was Orangewind's sister.Orangewind shooed off her sister.Foxtail left in a amount of time Frightened of Orangewind.
WIP.
Orangewind's Middle Life.
WIP.
Orangewind walked too her Apprentice who she usually called Silverkit.She looked at the Apprentice "Today is your day you will show the clan you Honor us and will fight for our life,Today you will become a Warrior."Orangewind said and walked too a hole in the ground."Be careful we have visitor."Orangewind said and walked off.Silverpaw followed her but fell to the ground.Orangewind saw the other cat who destroyed Silverpaw.Orangewind went to the other cat and shooed it off then walked too Silverpaw.Orangewind sat and cried from the loss of her Apprentice.
WIP.
Orangewind stopped in front of Leaftail.Leaftail greeted her with a soft nudge "I love you."Leaftail said calmly.Orangewind and Leaftail went too there den.Orangewind blurted out "I want Kit's!"She said and looked at Leaf tail.Leaftail let her have Kit's.
--A few months Later.--
Orangewind woke up she went too wake up Leaftail "Waky Waky."She said nudging Leaftail.Orangewind dropped too the ground when Leaftail stood up "Let me get Goldenstar."Leaftail said going too Goldenstar.Golden and Leaf got back and noticed something new.Orangewind looked at Goldenstar "I have had my kit's."Orangewind said Goldenstar looked at one in the eye "As white as Snow."Goldenstar said "She is a Prophecy kit!"Orangewind said happy too know.Leaftail nudged Orangewind "What are there name's?"He asked looking at the Snow kit.Orangewind Nudged the Snow kit "Snowkit!"Orangewind said then nudged the Kit with Black circle around one eye "Sunkit!"Orangewind said then Nudged the Kit with one white paw "Shadowkit!"Orangewind said then Nudged the Kit that was almost Pure orange "Illussionkit!"Orangewind said then nudged the last Kit "Leafkit!"Orangewind said and started too lick her kit's.Orangewind looked at Snowkit then at Leaftail "I've succeeded in my first litter."Orangewind said then looked at Goldenstar "I will be a queen for 5 months."Orangewind said looking at Leaftail "We will see each other again in 6 months."Orangewind said and licked up the rest of Leafkit.
WIP.
Orangewind's End.
All a WIP.
Other:
--

I the beging shouldnt that say Orangekit? Then Orangepaw...

She is telling a Story about her life so it always says Orangewind.

Oh, but when her leader says "Orangewind your mentor is Daisypetal.", shouldnt she have said Orangekit... And thats not how kits become apprentices... The leader holds a clan meeting...
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Re: For Adoption!

Postby patrick star.. » Wed Jul 13, 2011 1:28 pm

~Jackie~ wrote:Oh, but when her leader says "Orangewind your mentor is Daisypetal.", shouldnt she have said Orangekit... And thats not how kits become apprentices... The leader holds a clan meeting...

There i changed.
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                            Well, saying you're a kid, it's like saying I'M a kid!

                            Hi everyone. for starters I am a girl, I will always be one. anyways this is like my first favorite signature ever. for reals! okay? anyways, don't steal it! I also wanted too say if anyone out there is reading this and likes one direction. well I myself am a huge directioner and I will be happy to do a one on one with you, and a one direction plot. okay, I think this is lastly but. I am on like 24/7. no really I wake up at 8 am every day and go to bed as soon as I can see the sun outside. which is 4 am. though if i'm not on for an entire day that means I slept in longer and probably will go too bed around 5.

                            Uh, I'm supposed to get a toy with this?
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