Entry FormEntry for Contest 11!Username: werepickle
Kennel Page: Maple Springs KennelsCollie Entering: MSK Echo of the Jackdaw 'Kaja'Entry: Option A +
Whiskey (non collie)
"Come on, Kaja! Dinner!" Mom's voice echoed from the kitchen. Kaja ignored it, her nose was pressed against the gap beneath the front door. Outside smelled like wet pavement and pigeons and something thrillingly rotten. A delivery van rumbled past, rattling the brass mail slot. Her claws scraped hardwood as she pushed, shoving the unlatched door wider with her shoulder. Cool air rushed in, carrying the sharp scent of diesel and rain. The hallway rug ended abruptly at concrete steps leading down to the sidewalk. She hesitated for only a heartbeat before tumbling down them, landing in a clumsy heap on the damp pavement. The door swung shut behind her with a soft, final click.
The city soon swallowed her whole. Towering buildings blocked the sky, their windows reflecting a grey, indifferent light. Strange feet hurried past; polished shoes, scuffed boots, wheels dragging suitcases – kicking up grit that stung her eyes. A low growl rumbled nearby; Kaja froze, ears flat, as a huge garbage truck roared past, spraying oily water. She scrambled backwards, tail tucked tight, pressing herself against cold stone. Home’s warmth soon become a distant memory, replaced by the shuddering vibration of the street beneath her paws. A shadow abruptly detached itself from the grimy alley across the road. Lean, scarred, and moving with a loose-hipped confidence that spoke of pavement miles. Yellowed teeth showed briefly in what wasn’t quite a snarl or a smile. "Lost, little rabbit?" The voice was rough, like stones scraping together. Whiskey didn’t wait for an answer. He padded closer, head low, nostrils flaring as he took in her scent; milk-fat puppy and pure, stupid fear. "Smells like trouble found you first." His gaze flicked towards the busy intersection where a delivery driver yelled curses. "Move."
Kaja scrambled after him, her claws clicking frantically on the wet sidewalk. Whiskey flowed through the chaos like smoke, slipping between rushing legs and ducking under dripping fire escapes. He led her into a narrow canyon between buildings, where overflowing dumpsters leaked sour-smelling sludge onto cracked asphalt. The stench was overwhelming; rotting food, stale urine, and something metallic and sharp. Kaja gagged, her small body trembling. "Breathe through your mouth, rabbit," Whiskey grunted, not looking back. He stopped suddenly beside a fractured concrete stoop, his ears pricked forward. A low, rhythmic thumping echoed from deeper in the alley, punctuated by a harsh, wet cough. Kaja pressed against Whiskey’s flank, feeling the tense ripple of muscle beneath his coarse fur. His hackles rose slowly, a silent ridge of warning. "Quiet now," he whispered,the sound barely louder than the distant city rumble. "Bad dogs here." His eyes, hard and watchful, scanned the shifting gloom ahead. The thumping grew louder as heavy paws hit the pavement. Two shapes emerged from behind a mountain of soggy cardboard boxes. One was thick-necked and barrel-chested, missing an ear, saliva dripping from jowls that hung loose and raw. The other was whip-thin and twitchy, lips curled back in a constant, nervous snarl. They froze when they saw Whiskey, the bigger one letting out a guttural growl that vibrated in Kaja’s chest. "Whiskey," the barrel-chested dog rumbled, his voice thick and phlegmy. "Bringing snacks?"
Whiskey didn’t flinch. He shifted his weight slightly, placing himself squarely between herself and the pair. "Passing through, Brute," he stated flatly, his own voice devoid of fear but edged with caution. "Got no quarrel." The thin dog skittered sideways, eyes darting hungrily towards Kaja. "Smells soft," it whined, a high-pitched, grating sound. "Tender." Brute took a heavy step forward, his remaining ear flattening. "Toll," he grunted, his gaze fixed on Whiskey. "For the alley.". A low rumble started deep in Whiskey’s throat, a sound she hadn’t heard before; a pure, predatory threat. His lips peeled back just enough to show sharp, yellowed teeth. "No toll," he said, each word clipped and cold. He didn’t look at her, but his body was a coiled spring angled towards Brute. The thin dog whimpered and backed up a step. Brute hesitated, his small eyes flickering between Whiskey’s bared teeth and the trembling pup behind him. The sour alley air crackled with tension thicker than the stench.
Kaja pressed her belly flat against the cold, greasy asphalt, trying to disappear. She saw Brute’s muscles bunch beneath his scarred hide. Time stretched thin. Then, a sudden clatter echoed from the street – metal trash cans knocked over, followed by a sharp human shout. Brute’s head snapped towards the noise, distracted. Whiskey didn’t hesitate. "Go!" he snarled, not at Brute, but at her, a sharp command that cut through her fear. He lunged sideways, not attacking, but creating a sudden, chaotic movement towards the alley’s deeper shadows. Kaja scrambled blindly, paws slipping on wet refuse. She heard Brute’s enraged bark and the thin dog’s yapping pursuit behind her. Whiskey was a dark blur beside her, shoulder bumping her forward, guiding her around a pile of moldering mattresses. The alley narrowed, walls slick with grime. A chain-link fence blocked their path ahead, sagging under the weight of tangled vines. Whiskey didn’t slow. He shoved Kaja bodily towards a gap near the bottom, rusted wire ripped and curled outward. "Under!" he gasped, already turning to face the closing threat.
She wriggled through the sharp metal tangle, feeling a sting as a wire scraped her flank. On the other side, she whirled around. Through the fence links, she saw Whiskey standing firm, facing Brute and the snapping thin dog. He wasn’t running anymore. He planted his feet, hackles a solid ridge, a low, continuous growl vibrating the air. Brute slowed, wary now, circling. The thin dog darted in, snapping, but Whiskey moved like lightning; a sideways snap of jaws that missed flesh but sent the smaller dog yelping back. Kaja trembled, pressed against the fence, watching the standoff unfold in the dim, garbage-choked alley. The distant shout came again, closer this time. Footsteps slapped wet pavement. Brute’s head jerked towards the sound, indecision flickering in his dull eyes. Whiskey used the split-second distraction as feinted towards Brute, causing the bigger dog to flinch back, then spun and dove headfirst through the gap s she had used. He scrambled out beside her, fur snagging on the torn wire. "Move!" he barked, already loping down the narrow, unfamiliar passage behind the fence. Kaja raced after him, the furious barks of Brute fading behind them, muffled by the fence and the growing rumble of the city waking up.
They burst out onto a wider street slick with rain. Delivery trucks idled, spewing exhaust. Pedestrians hurried under umbrellas. Whiskey didn't pause, weaving through legs and puddles with desperate grace. Kaja struggled to keep up, her shorter legs pumping furiously, dodging a rolling suitcase and skidding on wet concrete. The overwhelming smells; coffee, wet wool, frying grease assaulted her senses. She kept her eyes locked on Whiskey’s ragged tail, the only anchor in the terrifying, swirling chaos. He ducked suddenly under a dripping green awning, into a shallow alcove piled with damp cardboard boxes. Panting hard, he pressed himself against the grimy brick wall, eyes scanning the street. Kaja collapsed beside him, sides heaving, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. The sharp sting on her flank throbbed, mixing with the sour tang of fear in her mouth. Whiskey glanced down at her, his breath still ragged. "Close," he muttered, his gaze lingering on the scrape. "Too close." He sniffed the air cautiously, ears twitching towards the street noise, listening for pursuit.
The relative stillness of the alcove felt fragile, temporary. Rainwater dripped steadily from the awning onto Kaja’s head, cold and startling. She flinched, pressing closer to Whiskey’s warmth. He nudged her gently with his muzzle towards the driest corner behind a stack of flattened boxes. "Rest," he ordered, his voice low but less harsh than before. He remained alert, head turning slowly, watching the legs rushing past their meager shelter. His own exhaustion was evident in the slight tremor of his hind legs and the way his ribs expanded with each deep, controlled breath. Kaja licked tentatively at her stinging flank, tasting iron and grit. The chaotic blur of escape replayed in her mind; Brute’s looming bulk, the thin dog’s snapping teeth, Whiskey’s fierce growl shielding her. A small whimper escaped her. Whiskey’s ear flicked towards her. "Quiet, rabbit," he murmured, not unkindly. "Fear smells stronger than blood." He shifted, blocking more of the alcove entrance with his body. "They won't follow here. Too many humans." He tilted his head, listening to the rhythmic clatter of dishes and muffled voices drifting from a vent above them. "Kitchen smells. Busy place."
The scent of roasting meat suddenly cut through the alley’s usual stench, rich and tantalizing. Kaja’s stomach growled loudly, a sharp pang of hunger cutting through her lingering terror. She looked up at Whiskey, her eyes wide and questioning. He sniffed the air deeply, his expression unreadable. A flicker of something, calculation, maybe hunger passed through his weary eyes. He looked down at her small, trembling form, then back towards the vent. "Stay low," he said finally, a new tension entering his posture. "And stay quiet. We eat soon." He didn't move yet, his gaze fixed on the vent, ears pricked forward like radar dishes. A metal door slammed nearby, making Kaja jump. A man in a stained apron emerged from the kitchen entrance just steps from their alcove, tossing a steaming bucket of scraps into a large bin. The smell intensified; gravy, burnt ends, grease. Whiskey waited until the man vanished back inside before creeping forward, belly low to the wet pavement. He circled the bin cautiously, sniffing for danger, then nudged the lid open with his nose. Steam billowed out, carrying the promise of warmth. He glanced back at her, a silent command in his eyes.
Kaja scrambled forward, driven by hunger overriding caution. The bin was taller than she was. Whiskey planted himself beside it, offering his scarred flank as a step. She clambered onto him, wobbling, then peered over the rim. Below, nestled in slop and coffee grounds, were chunks of fatty meat, soggy bread, and discarded vegetables. She plunged her muzzle in, gulping down a greasy piece of chicken skin. Whiskey didn't eat yet. He kept watch, his body rigid, head swiveling constantly between the alley mouth and the kitchen door, his growl a low, continuous rumble in his chest. The sudden screech of hinges made them both freeze. The kitchen door opened again. This time, a different man stood there, holding a dripping mop. His eyes widened as he spotted Whiskey poised beside the bin and her small head vanishing inside. "Hey!" he yelled, raising the mop handle. Whiskey didn't hesitate. He snapped his teeth sharply near Kaja’s hindquarters; not biting, but startling her into action. "Run!" he barked, already launching himself away from the bin. She tumbled backwards onto the pavement, scrambled to her feet, and bolted after Whiskey’s retreating tail as the man’s shouts chased them back into the rain-slicked chaos of the street.
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Years blurred into seasons marked by hunger, sharp lessons, and Whiskey’s watchful presence. Kaja’s soft puppy fur thickened and coarsened, her legs grew longer and stronger, honed by navigating treacherous alleys and sleeping rough beneath dripping bridges. She learned the sour tang of spoiled meat versus the metallic danger of poisoned bait, the rumble of a friendly truck engine versus the predatory idle of an animal control van. Trust was a currency spent sparingly; humans were unpredictable storms of shouting or thrown stones, rarely offering the fleeting warmth of a dropped scrap. Whiskey taught her silence, shadows, and the sharp, quick bite needed to defend a meager meal. Their world was concrete, grime, and the constant gnawing ache in their bellies, punctuated by moments of shared warmth huddled in forgotten doorways during bitter winter nights.
The turning point came not with a bang, but with a persistent, gentle hum. An old blue pickup truck, its sides painted with faded white daisies and the words "Bluebell Farms," began appearing near their usual haunts. The woman who drove it, her face weathered but kind, didn’t shout or chase. She simply stopped, cut the engine, and sat quietly, placing bowls of clean water and plain kibble near the curb before driving away. At first, Whiskey watched from deep cover, hackles raised, warning Kaja back with a low growl. Hunger eventually outweighed caution. They’d dart in, gulp the food, and vanish before the truck’s dust settled. Weeks turned into months of this silent ritual. The woman never approached, never tried to touch. She just waited patiently. And slowly, cautiously, the rigid tension in Whiskey’s shoulders began to ease, replaced by a wary, watchful curiosity. She herself was less scarred by betrayal, found herself lingering a moment longer each time, drawn by the quiet steadiness the woman radiated, a stark contrast to the city’s harsh rhythm.
The farm itself unfolded like a dream she hadn’t dared imagine. Rolling green pastures replaced grimy alleys, the air thick with the scent of hay and damp earth instead of exhaust and decay. Transitioning wasn't instant trust. They were given a drafty, clean shed first, space to retreat. The woman, Sarah, moved slowly, speaking in soft, low tones, letting them set the pace. Kaja, fascinated by the rustling chickens and the warm bulk of the placid dairy cows, ventured closer first, nudging Sarah’s offered hand tentatively with her nose. Whiskey remained a shadowed observer, his gaze tracking Sarah’s every move, a low rumble still vibrating in his chest if she moved too quickly. Yet, he didn’t stop Kaja. He watched the other farm dogs too older, calmer creatures who ignored the newcomers rather than challenged them and the absence of constant threat was a balm his wary soul slowly absorbed.
The real thaw in Whiskey came during a vicious thunderstorm. Trapped in the open pasture when the skies cracked open, she panicked, bolting blindly through the lashing rain. Whiskey, frantic, tried to herd her towards the distant shed, but the downpour was too thick, the lightning too close. Suddenly, headlights cut through the gloom. Sarah’s truck bumped across the field. She didn’t get out shouting; she simply opened the passenger door wide, the dome light casting a small, dry circle of sanctuary. Kaja scrambled in without hesitation, trembling violently. Whiskey stood frozen in the deluge, rain plastering his fur flat, staring at the open door, then at Sarah’s calm, expectant face illuminated by the dash lights. The rumble in his chest died. With a slow, deliberate movement, heavy with the weight of relinquished vigilance, he stepped into the truck, dripping onto the worn seat. Sarah closed the door softly against the storm. That night, curled together on an old horse blanket in the shed, dry for the first time in days, Whiskey rested his chin on Kaja’s back without scanning the darkness every few seconds. A deep, shuddering sigh escaped him, the sound of a guard finally, tentatively, standing down.
Trust bloomed slowly, like wildflowers pushing through cracked concrete. Sarah kept her promises: food appeared reliably, fresh water was always full, and space was respected. Kaja blossomed under the stability. Her coat regained a healthy sheen, her movements lost their skittish edge, replaced by a joyful curiosity. She chased butterflies in the clover, learned the satisfying crunch of fresh carrots Sarah tossed her way, and tentatively nuzzled the warm flanks of the tolerant cows. Whiskey remained her shadow, ever watchful, but his vigilance softened. He observed Sarah mend fences, soothe a colicky horse, and gently handle newborn lambs. He saw the other farm dogs ; a grizzled collie and a lazy shepherd who live without fear, their bellies full, their sleep deep and undisturbed. The constant hum of threat that had defined his existence began to fade, replaced by the rhythmic, predictable sounds of farm life: the clang of the milking pail, the distant lowing of cattle, Sarah’s quiet humming as she worked.
One crisp autumn morning, Sarah sat on the sun-warmed steps of the farmhouse porch, shelling peas into a bowl. Kaja lay sprawled nearby, gnawing contentedly on a beef knuckle. Whiskey sat a few paces away, alert but relaxed, soaking in the weak sun. Sarah didn't look directly at him, didn't beckon. She simply tossed a single, plump pea pod towards him. It landed softly in the dust midway between them. Whiskey stared at it, then at Sarah’s hands, busy with the bowl. He glanced at Kaja, absorbed in her bone. Slowly, deliberately, he rose. He padded forward, each step measured. He stopped beside the pod, sniffed it cautiously; the sweet, green scent unfamiliar. Then, with a movement so swift it was almost shy, he bent his head, picked up the pod gently in his teeth, and carried it back to his spot. He didn't eat it immediately. He laid it down beside his paw and looked at Sarah. She met his gaze, a small, quiet smile touching her lips, and gave a single, slow nod. He lowered his head and crunched the pod, the sound sharp in the still air. It was acceptance, fragile and profound, offered and received without a word spoken. The city’s harsh song was finally, truly, drowned out by the peace of Bluebell.
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