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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:13 pm

Now I am scared. Me and my friend, Jake, are home alone at my house and something extremely spooky just happened. We are actually babysitting our siblings while our parents are a party. We were sitting on the computer, just searching up random things. This was about 9pm I think, so obviously the kids were asleep and we were bored. We were just giggling about some stupid thing we had found when the power turned off. It was ghostly silent and pitch black. I shrugged and grabbed a torch, Jake following behind me, and I went outside to check the power box. I flicked some switches but nothing happened. We gave up and went to find some candles. I lit a few candles and burned myself in the process. I went to go and run some water over my burn but when I turned the tap on, only a drizzle of water came out. Now we were confused. I just stuck my finger in the ice tray while Jake went to find his phone and call his parents. But we couldn't find it. We couldn't find mine either. So we figured we would just sit around and something would happen. And it did. We were chatting about stuff when a cold breeze blew through the house and blew out the candles. The weird thing about that was we didn't open any windows. Suddenly, Jake whispered "Whats that?"
I turned around but I couldn't see a thing. I fumbled around for the torch and switched it on when I found it. He was staring at a place near the table. "What?" I asked but he didn't answer. Then I saw a flash of light zip across the table. I tried to follow it with my torch but I wasn't fast enough. I was definitely scared now, and so was Jake. We ran into the living room with the torch. That's where we've been for the past while. The dogs kept barking at something and we could hear something metallically. Then, suddenly the power and water came back on. Our phones were found sitting right next to each other on the kitchen bench. It's 10:30pm now and everything is back to normal. I don't understand what it could be! Any ideas? We've researched, obviously, but we could find nothing. :shock: I'm spooked now...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Krueger » Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:42 pm

shadow fox5 wrote:Now I am scared. Me and my friend, Jake, are home alone at my house and something extremely spooky just happened. We are actually babysitting our siblings while our parents are a party. We were sitting on the computer, just searching up random things. This was about 9pm I think, so obviously the kids were asleep and we were bored. We were just giggling about some stupid thing we had found when the power turned off. It was ghostly silent and pitch black. I shrugged and grabbed a torch, Jake following behind me, and I went outside to check the power box. I flicked some switches but nothing happened. We gave up and went to find some candles. I lit a few candles and burned myself in the process. I went to go and run some water over my burn but when I turned the tap on, only a drizzle of water came out. Now we were confused. I just stuck my finger in the ice tray while Jake went to find his phone and call his parents. But we couldn't find it. We couldn't find mine either. So we figured we would just sit around and something would happen. And it did. We were chatting about stuff when a cold breeze blew through the house and blew out the candles. The weird thing about that was we didn't open any windows. Suddenly, Jake whispered "Whats that?"
I turned around but I couldn't see a thing. I fumbled around for the torch and switched it on when I found it. He was staring at a place near the table. "What?" I asked but he didn't answer. Then I saw a flash of light zip across the table. I tried to follow it with my torch but I wasn't fast enough. I was definitely scared now, and so was Jake. We ran into the living room with the torch. That's where we've been for the past while. The dogs kept barking at something and we could hear something metallically. Then, suddenly the power and water came back on. Our phones were found sitting right next to each other on the kitchen bench. It's 10:30pm now and everything is back to normal. I don't understand what it could be! Any ideas? We've researched, obviously, but we could find nothing. :shock: I'm spooked now...


Well, shadow fox5, I am pretty sure it was a ghost or a spirit of some kind. Has anything happened like this before? Have you had a dream about that type of thing happening? I have heard of this happening, but it was only in families where someone has died. Has anyone in your family died?

I need these questions answered before I can come to a conclusion...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chaimaru » Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:39 am

Another doll story.
Long ago,there was a family of three with an only child.Her name was Mary.She was a jolly,happy kid.For quite sometime,she had wanted to get a doll.One day,her mom took her to the store because Mary was being good and helping around the house.When they arrived into the toy store,they saw that their friend,Jake was working their that day.Mary ran up to him and gave him a bright hug,then she noticed that she saw a doll that she really wanted."I want that doll!" She said as she pointed.Jake gulped."Sorry,that doll isn't for sale." "ok..."Mary replied,looking down trying to hide her tears.Jake sighed."Fine.You can just have it for free."And with that,they took the doll and left.Mary and her mom got home and sat on the couch with dad and showed him the doll.When you pressed a button on her she would say "My name is Tiffany and I like you"Her dad was not pleased at all."How much did it cost?"He asked."It was free,Jake gave it to us."
That night,it was thunderstorms.Mary's dad couldn't sleep.He looked at the door because he thought he heard something.
when he looked back at the TV,lightning flashed and he saw a vivid flash of the doll in it.He turned around,and went to sleep.The next morning,he said "We're getting rid of the doll.NOW!"He got up to take the doll from Mary but her mom held him back.He pulled her hands off and went into Mary's room and ripped the doll away.Mary pleaded for the doll and mother did also but he threw it away.The next morning,the doll was back in Mary's arms.So,that night when everyone was asleep,he took the doll in a wood cutting room and put the doll in a wood chipper.The doll laughed in a sinister way when she was in the wood chipper,then she came out whole."My name is Tiffany and I don't like you."The doll said.Then he put her neck under a wood cutter.He thought it should work,because that wood cutter cut his friend's hand off.He put the doll's neck under it,then turned on the blades."I wouldn't do that...."The doll said.Then she started the sinister laugh again as he started to get frustrated.He stopped the blades and pick up the doll.He was going to take her downstairs to the kitchen to try stabbing her.He dropped the doll and thought he saw her fall down the stairs.She was actually on the second step,so when he hurried down to get the doll,he stepped on her and fell all the way down the stairs.His wife heard the noise and ran downstairs.She saw her husband on the floor.She felt for a pulse and their was nothing.She picked up the doll next to him for comfort."My name is Tiffany.And you better be nice."The doll said in a sinister voice.She dropped the doll and went back upstairs.She went back to sleep.She woke up with the doll next to her."Did you say your goodbyes to Mary?"The doll said before choking the poor mom to death.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:03 pm

I liked that doll story, only one thing I'm confused about: did the dad die? Because it seems like he did when the mom came. Unless she's sadistic or insane, she wouldn't leave a corpse there.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby hansuragi » Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:22 pm

Here's one I heard called Tick Tock (kinda like the doll story in the begining)
A little girl saw a designer Barbie doll that came with a limited edition bottle of nail polish at a store. She begged her grandmother to buy it for her, so she did.
Later that night, the little girl lay in her bed tired from playing with her new Barbie doll.
-A month later-
The girl had forgotten about the doll and it lay at the bottom of her toybox. She was getting ready for bed, and soon she fell asleep. At 12 a.m. an eerie voice disturbed her dreams. It said, 'Tick Tock, Tick Tock, come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Mother in the kitchen.' The girl didn't think anything of it. When she woke up, she found her mother in the kitchen with knifes in her back.
The girl went back to sleep at night when again the voice came. 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Father in the study.' By this time, the little girl was scared and the grandmother had moved in to replace her mother. She woke up to find her father with pencils and staples in him.
Now asleep yet again, she was terrified when she heard the voice 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Brother in the bathtub. Sure enough, her brother was found drowned in the bathtub.
This time (lol finally) she decided to stay awake. She heard the voice in the hallway 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock.' she jumped out of bed with a baseball bat. 'Come and play with me.' she crept closer. It moved down the stairs. She realized her grandmother was downstairs in the living room. 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family.' It was at the bottom, the girl close behind. 'Grandmother in the living room!" it sang and raised a knife.
"OH NO YOU DONT!" said the girl and hit the doll with the bat. She picked it up and nail polish spilt out. It had lived because of the Limited Edition nailpolish.
Better start playing with your dolls XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Cane » Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:25 pm

Gabberz wrote:Here's one I heard called Tick Tock (kinda like the doll story in the begining)
A little girl saw a designer Barbie doll that came with a limited edition bottle of nail polish at a store. She begged her grandmother to buy it for her, so she did.
Later that night, the little girl lay in her bed tired from playing with her new Barbie doll.
-A month later-
The girl had forgotten about the doll and it lay at the bottom of her toybox. She was getting ready for bed, and soon she fell asleep. At 12 a.m. an eerie voice disturbed her dreams. It said, 'Tick Tock, Tick Tock, come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Mother in the kitchen.' The girl didn't think anything of it. When she woke up, she found her mother in the kitchen with knifes in her back.
The girl went back to sleep at night when again the voice came. 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Father in the study.' By this time, the little girl was scared and the grandmother had moved in to replace her mother. She woke up to find her father with pencils and staples in him.
Now asleep yet again, she was terrified when she heard the voice 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Brother in the bathtub. Sure enough, her brother was found drowned in the bathtub.
This time (lol finally) she decided to stay awake. She heard the voice in the hallway 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock.' she jumped out of bed with a baseball bat. 'Come and play with me.' she crept closer. It moved down the stairs. She realized her grandmother was downstairs in the living room. 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family.' It was at the bottom, the girl close behind. 'Grandmother in the living room!" it sang and raised a knife.
"OH NO YOU DONT!" said the girl and hit the doll with the bat. She picked it up and nail polish spilt out. It had lived because of the Limited Edition nailpolish.
Better start playing with your dolls XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby hansuragi » Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:26 pm

Ikr!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sam sam » Sat Jul 02, 2011 3:47 am

Gabberz wrote:Here's one I heard called Tick Tock (kinda like the doll story in the begining)
A little girl saw a designer Barbie doll that came with a limited edition bottle of nail polish at a store. She begged her grandmother to buy it for her, so she did.
Later that night, the little girl lay in her bed tired from playing with her new Barbie doll.
-A month later-
The girl had forgotten about the doll and it lay at the bottom of her toybox. She was getting ready for bed, and soon she fell asleep. At 12 a.m. an eerie voice disturbed her dreams. It said, 'Tick Tock, Tick Tock, come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Mother in the kitchen.' The girl didn't think anything of it. When she woke up, she found her mother in the kitchen with knifes in her back.
The girl went back to sleep at night when again the voice came. 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Father in the study.' By this time, the little girl was scared and the grandmother had moved in to replace her mother. She woke up to find her father with pencils and staples in him.
Now asleep yet again, she was terrified when she heard the voice 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock come and play with me. Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family. Brother in the bathtub. Sure enough, her brother was found drowned in the bathtub.
This time (lol finally) she decided to stay awake. She heard the voice in the hallway 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock.' she jumped out of bed with a baseball bat. 'Come and play with me.' she crept closer. It moved down the stairs. She realized her grandmother was downstairs in the living room. 'Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock before I kill your family.' It was at the bottom, the girl close behind. 'Grandmother in the living room!" it sang and raised a knife.
"OH NO YOU DONT!" said the girl and hit the doll with the bat. She picked it up and nail polish spilt out. It had lived because of the Limited Edition nailpolish.
Better start playing with your dolls XD


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby JDsalamander » Sat Jul 02, 2011 3:53 am

yeah, i mean, if she saw any of them dead, why would she go back to bed?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby just'marley » Sat Jul 02, 2011 4:21 am

I have one, but it was on the hit TV show Bones, actualy... I have a few stories! Some are short though!

Babe in the bar-
There was a youth girl, about 15, and (this is how the story goes im not lesibian) she was might I say, very, VERY pretty! But she was on a tour with other people of a chocolate factory. She had to go to the bathroom, so she did. When she came out her group was know where to be seen. Her tour master said something about making the largest chocolate bar in the world. She she followed the signs to the making of the bar. She walked in circles vivaciously. She couldnt find them anywhere!!! A man crept out from behind a wall and stalked her like a lion. He came up behind her and slit her neck. He then, well choped her up. Months later the giant chocolate bar was released and eaten by a very wealthy family. A boy bit into it, and he bit something hard. He held the piece in his hands only to find remains, of a bloody girl in the chocolate. THE END! I personaly dont like tht one.

PLaying down the lanes-

There was a little boy having a party at a bowling alley. He was having o much fun with his friends! But the pins in the lane wouldnt reset on his turn. He threw a fit. So his mother Went up to the service set, "Can you reset the pins in lane 7? Thanks!" He pressed some buttons and she walked away. A distant grinding sound came from the reseting pins. It jerked up and down, and a mushing sound replied. As the pins came down, so did a bloody mashed up body of a young man. it was ripped apart in so many ways, and so many sizes, that it was more grousum then it well, not. The kids screamed and they huddled together. The man that reset the pins ran out and huddled with the kids to make them feel better. A man in white, walked out of the door that lead to the pins, and doffed his hat. As he walked away, the mother saw bloody stains on the bottom of his coat. THE END!
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